Infinite Psychic of American Comics

It's a mess. When writing American comics, write American comics properly. The fusion of Skull Island is acceptable. It's also from the X-Men and Under One Man. It gives me a headache. Marvel can be used as the main world. Others like Under One Person, X-Men and the like can be written as copies. The messy fusion is like chocolate and black tea mixed with shit and mustard forcibly kneaded together for others to eat. It's disgusting.

I felt good at first, but as soon as I entered China, I was immediately persuaded to leave.

I want to ask, what the hell is your CD about Marvel? There are only a few chapters about Marvel that are all about CD or other parallels. Are you writing about summons? It's better to carry the system everywhere to catch pets... You can rename the book Pet System, which is more suitable. I can't stand it anymore.

I really can't stand it anymore. The Taotie of the Super Seminary World does not have the technology to control dark energy! No! No! The weapon used by Taotie to bomb Luoyang is called the fierce tide! Fierce tide! Divine bombing is the devil's technology, the devil's! I suggest the author go back and read the anime, these mistakes are really intolerable!

Dragon Knight

Hellfire King Kong

It felt boring. It was okay at first, but the more I read, the more boring it became. I always read it selectively, and read the ones that seemed interesting. However, before I finished reading the public chapters, I lost the desire to continue reading. The more I look at it, the more confusing it becomes. Maybe it's not suitable for me.

I can accept the setting and content of this book, because I have never read Marvel's comics (I have only read the movie series). I just need to understand it. Come on, authors who know how to read it all. What I want to complain about the most is that the protagonist's name is too generic 🤫

I can't stand these X-Men movies anymore. The setting of mutants is inappropriate.

Can it be faster? Read two chapters in five minutes in one day!

The plot behind it is a bit confusing

Directly extract a talent from each summon? Or can you directly purchase various summons? I would like to know if the author has an outline? Or can it be controlled? Otherwise it will collapse easily!

Defeat the earth in more than sixty chapters, and defeat the entire universe in less than a hundred chapters! After finishing the show, I am already a BOOS, but I still keep playing house with the kids, pretending to be cool and still feel good about myself. It's really embarrassing.

As I watched it, I suddenly felt a little emotional. Has the author ever thought about why the current Zhutianliu can't be written well at all? Because most authors are too stuck on the so-called plot, but you must understand the difference between Qidian novels, movies and comics. To watch a movie, you have to go to the cinema. If you buy a ticket, you have to watch it even if there is a stupid plot. Otherwise, the ticket will be in vain, and the movie will end in a few hours at most. Even if there is any anti-intellectual plot, you have already spent money and tolerated it. Even if someone scolds, the director can not hear it. As long as the flaws are not covered up and the special effects are in place, it is generally good. People will watch the next movie. Qidian novels are different. Can you make all readers pay the full price before clicking on the book? If you can't do it at all, the result is that you will see some anti-intellectual and brainless plots, and readers will either finish it and leave, or leave directly. Why Infinite Horror was so popular in the first place is because it doesn't follow the plot and it's short. Zhutianliu is not good. If you have to follow the plot for a long time, you have to identify the bad points of the movie and think for yourself. To put it bluntly, you need to have your own brain to understand the movie and delete and adapt the plot. Movies can have very stupid characters and stupid plots. It's better if they don't appear in the next one. Can you not write the plot of the novel in succession? Can each book be written in one volume and updated every few years? When writing a book to find a good audience and write it for young people, it must be conventional and white. The whiter the better, don't abuse it. If you write it for Lao Bai, just use less routines, more thinking, and don't copy the plot. The original plot is not everything. There are some things that monks can do but Taoist priests cannot do. Movies are made, but novels are not written. It is all for the sake of achievement. How many people can write books for fun for free?

Ride the most awesome mount and fight the strongest enemy.

I can't stand more than 90 chapters. The protagonist is quite weird. One moment he talks about principles, and the next moment he is ruthless. In Marvel's Apocalypse, to be honest, I feel that there is no need for more than 200,000 people to die. The attitude of the protagonist also feels very weird. The protagonist expresses silence for this, you know what I mean. It's not that I'm not a saint, but I think we should have our own bottom line, not the protagonist. In addition, I know that writing a book is about yy, but the yy in this book is too harsh, and there is also Feng Baobao. You must know that not everyone is from the Northeast and likes to eat random stews. It makes me so angry that I don't understand why so many authors like to have harems? Because of the diaosi mentality? I want to continue talking, but I am too lazy to talk nonsense. The above is purely my personal opinion. If there are any trolls, please don't come to me. It is for reference only. Read it by yourself.

Among the soul beasts of Douluo Continent, Pokmon, Digimon, Classic of Mountains and Seas, I feel that those who are psychic beasts are better

Rating ★★, one star is the author's code, the second star is poor for the author Disadvantage 1: The protagonist has no one, no personality, no goal, no image. Until now, I haven't summarized what kind of person the protagonist is? What is it all for? Disadvantage 2: The supporting cast is messy, and each character has its own meaning. As a result, Feng Baobao, Ruiwen, etc. Have no sense of existence at all! It's all the author's own pleasure. If he likes a character, he will pull her out, introduce her briefly, and then say that the relationship has been confirmed, and there is nothing in between! ! ! Disadvantage 3: The author obviously doesn't understand technology. He insists on adding drama to the protagonist and building a building out of thin air. He directly says that the protagonist invented (plagiarized) the pager, and then everyone rushed to buy it. 0 Foundation. At least you should set up a company and recruit a few people to fill the facade. If you don't understand it, try not to write it. If you write it, it will make people think. I scold you, but you are not convinced, and a bunch of readers want to bite again Disadvantage 4: The plot is too white, full of water, just like a primary school student's diary. There is a task today, receive the task, push it, get rewards, and there will be another task tomorrow, really boring To sum up, although the author is not a novice, he is also sincerely third-rate, and he is purely trying to make money for himself! Identification completed

I hope the author will not deviate from the theme of American comics and add some martial arts fantasy elements. The monster system is already powerful enough, but adding martial arts and immortality will be a poisonous point.

No, it's not too bad to write about stallions now, right? It's really disgusting to watch this kind of excessive YY

I saw a stallion again and abandoned it. It was really annoying to watch.

After reading it for a long time, I felt that the protagonist of this book is only a living person.

All kinds of chaos. . . X-Men, Under One Man, Godzilla, Kong and Skull Island, can't you write about the Marvel Universe properly?

This book is very interesting to me! Marvel is so bad at writing. If it's slightly different, you guys will complain. I don't understand what you think!

In Omega's world, wouldn't it be nice if you launched a wave of nuclear bombs?

I really didn't expect that this book would be completed in one go😭

Chapter 24 and 40 are missing?

This Marvel is not simple! 😁😁

This book is not suitable for people like me who like to read dark literature. There are a lot of things that bother me. The main character is also a tease. Hey, I can't stand it.

It has been added to the collection. It has great imagination and the author's writing is very good. This title makes people want to click. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you Thank you!