Time Travel Begins with Mr. Zombie

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Shennong went to detoxify first I originally thought this book was pretty good when I read it earlier, but! Ever since I refuted it... It really got to the point of poisoning me Originally, it didn't matter that the mount was stronger than the protagonist. After all, it was summoned from the Book of Mountains and Seas. Moreover, after the author wrote a refutation and was forcibly summoned, he felt that the protagonist had a background and was still wary of the protagonist. (Original text included) Range, I was too naive. Dragon War Refutation directly forced the protagonist Dragon Ball to cause the mission to fail? ? ? Fortunately, the author also wrote about the protagonist's dissatisfaction and a hint of murderous intention (original text), so I continued carrying the poison. In the end, the protagonist has completely forgotten about the fact that he ignored him and ate the dragon balls? What is even more poisonous is that a good Nuqingji was written to death like this? And he was killed by the bug that he just beat away? What the hell? Laura can spot everything in front of her. She can tell the protagonist about sandstorms and army ants before they emerge. She doesn't know about such a big bug? The protagonist has formed a pill and there is an insect underground that he cannot sense? The Nuqing Chicken just beat up the insect and was suddenly attacked to death? There are too many poisonous points, and Shen Nong really can't bear it anymore! 😭

No, now there are two poisonous points in the early stage of this book. One is that the cheap horses are not dead, but the obedient chicken is dead, and the one that comes out later is different.

61 Pictures of the protagonist's mounts. If he ate me up with the dragon ball, he should be killed in another world after escaping to heaven. Can't stay. Just my personal thoughts. If you support it, give it a thumbs up, if you don't support it, don't comment.

The fiercest

In some places, I have suffered from embarrassment. I am still not creative. Unfortunately, the expressions in some places are not very good.

It's a bit broken, tsk tsk, let's see what happens later.

The updated version is not enough to read. I'll wait until I save a hundred pictures and read them all 🤫

This book is a fast-paced book and not very popular. There are no rewards for the first dozen or 20 chapters of the slow-burn book. Otherwise, it would be too slow and no one would read it.

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It would have been okay if the protagonist got a refutation in the lottery, but this refutation was so out of tune, and he didn't listen to the protagonist's words, it felt instantly unsightly.

Why do you keep following the plot without changing it? It's boring. There is a reason why there are so few votes. There are quite a lot of Jiu Shu Tongwen, but why are so many of them dumped on the street? And this system. . . . .

It's not easy. It's the first time in so many years that a novel has been commented by the author. I'll commemorate it

Gradually, I feel that the author has no goal in writing. Is it because the outline is not ready? When I got to the Under One Person chapter, I felt that my abilities were getting more and more, and it was a bit boring. The water is so powerful. The foreseeable future is to keep acquiring skills and become invincible, acquire skills and become invincible! Even if there are skills that have never appeared before, the origin can be explained by using the rat charm, but the author dare not write below the head, the protagonist can only be a eunuch, nothing but water!

Really, after reading ten chapters, there is nothing eye-catching, and there is no outstanding description following the original work.

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Um, I just read it and I have some comments that the author doesn't know whether to accept or not The first is that your cheating is too serious. Even if the article is good, you have to pay attention to it, otherwise it will fall apart easily. You probably don't know how to cheat until the later stage of writing The second is to pay attention. Although writing fantasy novels itself deviates from reality, just like the apprenticeship part, if you were the author, you would accept someone you have known for less than a few minutes as your apprentice. No, at least you can check the other person's character after a while, and you are not so hasty in accepting apprentices. The third is that the pace is too fast. According to this writing method, it is estimated that more than ten chapters will constitute one world. There are many old bookworms nowadays, and few people will like such a fast pace. The fourth is the issue of harem. There can be two or three female protagonists, but never write about love at first sight, nor one for each world, humanoid self-propelled cannon?

Interesting. Just too little. There are 30 chapters left to prepare for a few days. By the way, what is this thing?

The second chapter is really about trying to persuade him to quit. Why not get a Douluo? It's really about lowering his level!

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I have to complain about a few poisonous points in this book. The first is that since the martial soul is a twin martial spirit, you should consider the type of martial spirit. Since you choose to cultivate immortality, you should not choose a firearm-type martial spirit. Bows and arrows or flying swords are better than firearms. The animal martial spirit has intelligence and is also a major poisonous point. I don't know how much you like Douluo, the author. Even if you write a martial spirit, you should write one attack and one defense. It might as well be a different martial spirit. For example, it would be great if your martial soul does not need a soul ring but is instead fused with special materials. Later, it can be transformed from virtual reality into your spiritual treasure of enlightenment. The second poisonous point is that the division of realms in the world is too collapsed. A top-notch master can compete with a master in the alchemy stage. Anyway, I personally think that a world-class master in martial arts is equivalent to a master in the late stage of Qi training, and an innate martial arts is equivalent to a monk in the foundation-building stage. The third poisonous point is that it is not equal to the realm division of the Zhuxian world. The realm of Jindan is equal to the ninth level of Yuqing, the Nascent Soul behind it is equal to the realm of Shangqing, and the Taiqing realm of Daoxuan is equal to the realm of transformation. So what the hell? 😰 Then you might as well practice Qi , Foundation Building, and Heartbeat are divided into Yuqing realm, Jiedan, Jindan, Nascent Soul are equal to the realm of Shangqing, Transformation to God, Fusion, Mahayana is equal to Taiqing realm (of course the author said that the techniques in the world of Zhuxian are not perfect, Taiqing realm can only be practiced to about Transformation to God or Fusion). The fourth poisonous point is that the worlds traveled through are too messy. Since the protagonist is mainly cultivating immortality, he should mainly go to those fairy tales or fantasy worlds. In the early stage, if you are weak, you can also go to the martial arts world. But what are you doing in this technological and comic world? This situation is so disturbing.

The Dan Jiedi monk went to the world of martial arts and fought on par with a top-notch master. Admire and admire. The realm collapsed into a mess. Withdrew and said goodbye to you. You could just get through the qi training period and at least get past it. The author should write like this. In the later period, the protagonist becomes an immortal and becomes an ancestor. His combat power is not as high as the martial arts innate, so he can just find someone in the innate realm to compete with him. That's what makes it interesting.

Does the author have any misunderstandings about immortality and martial arts? A pill-forming monk and Xuan Ming were fighting back and forth? Is it because I have Jiuyang body protection that I am not afraid of Xuanming Zhenqi?

The author is completely enjoying himself, writing about the world casually, sometimes martial arts, sometimes immortals, and cities. There are also problems with the setting of combat power. The funniest thing is that he still uses the Douluo system.

Author, I will give you all the votes, please give me some tips 😃

After reading ten chapters, the author's setting is good, but the intention of each option is too obvious. Readers can easily judge the protagonist's choice without thinking. It can be said that the setting of this god-level option has been scrapped by the author. The reason is probably because the author is not willing to pay attention, or it may be due to the limitations of the writing style. Furthermore, this system talks too much, and I can talk to the protagonist. I think unless it is a funny story, the system without intelligence will be more popular with readers. I have not read this type of writing in the past few years.

I've just read two chapters and I'm not interested anymore. I haven't read much and I can't say it's not well written, but I feel it's too cliche. There's no need for the second option to exist. And what does it mean to become a disciple when you come here? If you had to choose, I would choose Hyakki Yakō. You have to impress people. Instead of me coming to the zombie world and becoming a disciple, either Uncle Jiu or Four Eyes, Chizuru or Mamadi. You can definitely become a disciple of Shi Jian or practice on your own. There are too many articles about this kind of apprenticeship, so there is no need to follow the trend.

I think the choice should be left to us readers.

I've obviously read hundreds of previous chapters, so why did I really quit reading the Douluo volume once after reading one chapter? I really feel that the protagonist's performance in Douluo is so disgusting (; 1_1)

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