All Heavens Substitute

It's too streamlined. The protagonist's actions are basically following the characters in the plot. He is acting as a nanny throughout the whole process. The various abilities obtained by using the stand are like using skills in a game. A few years ago, you would have to shout first. When fighting, it doesn't feel like fighting at all. It feels like a character in the game using skills. It's completely Generally speaking, the better fan fiction or unlimited flow works should not mainly describe the three melons and two dates in the plot, but should dig deeper into the background. For example, in the world of ghosts blowing out lanterns, the water may be very deep in ancient times, but when it comes to the plot, it is basically three melons and two dates without any danger. Instead of following the protagonist's team to dig the graves that have been dug countless times in fan works, it is better to rely on force and intelligence advantages to run around, do archaeological research, and dig out various immortal caves that may have existed in this world in ancient times, such as the tomb of Qin Shihuang, various emperors' tombs, various caves and blessed places in ancient legends, and go to various gates. Send someone to look for advanced skills, or look for the big pits dug in the ghost blowing lamp plot, such as the Bronze Divine Tree, Tianmen and other things that may have a high upper limit. Anyway, the protagonist does not consume his own life span. Even if he dies like that, as long as the knowledge he remembers is valuable enough, he will make a lot of money.

Writing novels that give magic tricks to everyone when meeting them lacks a sense of reality and makes people feel fake.

The upper-class and lower-class people mix together and rob tombs. Wudang people will die with their eyes open.

I was also drunk. Wudang sent disciples to rob tombs. Believe it or not, Zhang Sanfeng jumped out and hacked you to death.

This novel makes me feel that the protagonist is a pure eunuch. As a man, he doesn't have much power, he doesn't ask for too much money, and he doesn't pursue power with much intention. I can still understand the woman in the two copies of the Ghost Blowing Lamp world, but you write that two women like you and you give up, and now in the Jin Yiwei world, two more female protagonists like you, and you still have to give up. Then why do you write that they like you? Disgusting readers? Why don't you just not write about the emotional scenes with them or just downplay them?

Seriously, how much the author despises eternal life! The Zhu Xian scroll was really written and made me drunk. Your level of strength has completely collapsed, it's a complete mess

The books involving deadlocks are all bad, and the TV series itself has very serious bugs that even the editors can't fix. There are only a handful of people who have made deadlocked appointments with external sites including the starting point. I once started a popular Hong Kong comprehensive article, but because of the deadlock at the end, the outline collapsed and ended hastily. The author should remember the lessons learned from the past.

Please let me know when the night is over and say thank you.

The travels in the heavens are seamlessly connected to the chat group. Six, it can be regarded as a new book. It is slowly getting popular. I estimate that you can write one or two thousand chapters.

You are getting worse and worse, you can't stand it anymore, and you are ready to give up the book.

Give, give, give everything to others, even if you have strength, you will address those with low strength like a turtle, the protagonist of the Holy Mother, shabi

Working as a nanny with a plug-in, you really belong to me

A brainless nanny story. The mission in the first volume was to persuade people to quit, and I skipped to the second volume. The mission was not obviously biased. Although it was still a nanny, at least it was not that obvious and tolerated it. As a result, the protagonist directly went to Jiang Asheng and told him his name before becoming incognito. He also said that he wanted to kill the king of rotation. Jiang Asheng actually did not fight him or run away. I am convinced. Please see for yourself, author, do you think it is reasonable?

The King of Wudang, greeting all book friends

It can kill time, but the writing is a bit poor, the power system is a bit confusing, a bit overwhelming for the protagonist, and the dialogue is a bit awkward.

I watched the two worlds of Qing Yu Nian and Jiang Ye. It was such a waste of time. The characterizations looked more and more like shit and the plots were messy.

It's weird to switch to Zhutian chat group, so will Zhutian's acting continue? Is the Zhutian chat group following Jiang Fan, or is it following Nezha, who the protagonist plays in Perfect World? Is it still available in the real world? Which one is more important, Zhutian cosplay or Zhutian chat group? Entering the perfect world and joining the chat group is so confusing now, especially the introduction of funny settings. What did the author think behind it? Can you tell me?

Come on, this book is of high quality

I thought it was outrageous when I read the introduction, but after reading it, I found it was surprisingly good.

Why do you suddenly need to transcribe the chat group?

Sleepy==_==_=

It feels like the protagonist is letting himself go more and more later on, and it feels like he's going to the dark side.

Come on, your book suits my taste quite well.

The Three-Body Problem you wrote is the same as the defense in Yihua Kaitian ()

The front part is okay, but the back part is completely insane. He kills people when he sees them and robs them when he wants them. Confused thinking

It's a bit unfinished. It could be written to a higher level, and the ending of the story could be gentler.

Is there any novel similar to this kind of substitute text for the heavens? ! Beg!

Can you update more? Recently, I've been updating once a day. It's still so watery and uncomfortable to watch.

This book is very suitable for my taste. I hope to read more😀

The situation started to collapse a bit! It's getting harder and harder to see from behind! Abandoned