Heterodox Demon Mage

The writing is alright, and the ideas are interesting! But the character design... Bro, you're a demon! You're not even human anymore! Sweating and turning pale after your first kill, disgusted by touching the corpse—it makes the murder scene nauseating! Are you trying to make the protagonist more human by writing these psychological phenomena? When you kill NPCs in a game, do you feel sad too? Demons and players are no different; it's just a game!

This is written more righteously than the truth! A transmigrator, the original owner's subordinate betrayed him for his sister, almost losing his life. And you insist on saving his sister? Are you his subordinate or his subordinate? Do you think you're the boss?! Don't tell me the sister was chosen by a powerful figure; that was just a fluke. A subordinate can betray you once, but he can betray you countless times.

The protagonist starts with significantly reduced power, and then follows Chen Si to learn swordsmanship. Doesn't Chen Si notice? The game is already over from the very beginning.

It's well-written, but the part about risking one's life for a subordinate's sister is a bit uncomfortable to read. I don't believe in so-called brotherhood.

The idea that a subordinate could use martial arts to prove their innocence after being falsely accused is a bit far-fetched. 1. The authenticity of the technique cannot be proven. You can say he is the murderer, but what makes you so sure? 2. If the two people did not confess to the crime after being identified, then on what basis are they considered the murderers?

Let me explain the difference between "technique" and "principle" as I understand it. Technique: usually refers to specific methods, skills, techniques or means. The Dao refers to the conceptual level of laws and principles. Technique, microscopic, specific. The Tao is macroscopic and abstract. "Technique" is the means and method to achieve "Tao".

The author fumu is gone, so I'm not writing anymore. Please understand!

The author describes an unprecedented peak period for the Great Fu Dynasty, yet even then, there were bandits whom the government couldn't control. This logic is brilliant.

Well, a proper account of events.

I've read over twenty chapters, so it's a decent read for now. However, the protagonist's cheat is a cultivation technique, and this technique originates from the original owner of the body, meaning the protagonist directly obtained the most powerful technique from the natives. I wonder if this limits the world-building and scope of the story.