Peril in the Deep Space

Banned drugs are used in an ordinary martial arts competition, which affects lifespan and potential. The plot is too low. 🤔🤔🤔

What year is it today? I haven't seen this routine for a long time. It's a bit of ancient beauty, a classic civilian genius, with special talents, and then he is appreciated by a beautiful woman from an aristocratic family. This beauty also has a jealous dog-licking family son, conflict, defeat, assassination, strangled in the cradle, a blessing in disguise, pretending to be slapped in the face, feelings are warming up, fighting monsters and upgrading, picking up girls and saving the beauty. So cool

Most of the powerful children are villains, and those who have friendship with the protagonist are often peerless beauties, which in turn triggers the powerful children to target and suppress them, and then they bump up and down all the way, and finally grow up to the point where they can destroy the villain family 🙂🙂

Reading this novel makes me at least ten years younger, rejuvenating myself

The writing settings are okay. But it's hard to retain people at the beginning. Look at the Gaowu Era, which was so white, and it became popular. This one doesn't become popular. You have to find the reason. The previous paragraphs are full of settings and boring plots that cannot advance the protagonist's spiritual practice. And it's very cliche. Nowadays, people can guess the plot behind it at a glance, so don't write it. If you really can't write it, just stick to the main line, Shui Baiwen. I suggest you take a look at how it is written now. Nowadays, people with high martial arts tend to like the tomato type, or the eagle type. It's really difficult for you to go. The story couldn't retain people, and people left before the setting was revealed. It's better to start with plain water. In fact, most readers only read the material of novice articles. This mainly reflects that high school students have more time and gold coins, while semi-literate youths cannot earn many gold coins. There is also a protagonist who is too cliched in the early stage, reflected in his speech and style, and is very discouraging. This is poisonous. There are still many ignorant and so-called big-faced plots. It is better not to write them. If it is more flat, it will be more flat. Look at Gao Wu Era, isn't it? If your writing style matches that kind of narrative style, it will definitely be stronger. His writing style is still not good enough. The words and sentences are repeated, redundant, and there are a lot of question marks, but you can still read the story. The best way to tell a story is to make it most comfortable for readers.

It's so tacky, so tacky that I can't stand it. I dream back to 10 years ago...

Oppression is everywhere and there is privilege. The children of aristocratic families can hurt people on campus, but the protagonist dare not fight back when being beaten. At the federal meeting, they directly favored the aristocratic family, regardless of the evidence. Just because the protagonist killed a disciple of the aristocratic family, he was sent to die. The protagonist tried every means to obtain evidence to exonerate him. You can obviously be a lone wolf, but you have to forge evidence and return to the federation, and then speak about the evidence, and then you are suppressed and persecuted. The human society in the book should have perished long ago

This plot is really a bit too blunt. The young master from an aristocratic family is not busy practicing, but he is following a girl. He still follows her even though he knows that she doesn't like him. There is no one around him to help him, right? Besides, Top Bai Fumei has a lot of resources around her, so she has to go to the street to find someone to repair the ancient paintings, and the value of the ancient paintings is not low. Moreover, Bai Fumei also said that the ancient paintings have true meanings. If the protagonist gets it, he will get it, and the protagonist will pay back an equal amount in the future... Isn't she worried that the protagonist will not admit it... And as you explained before, the probability of becoming an original energy master is extremely low, 5 out of 1,000. Even buying the elixir of life requires a loan, and it may take a lifetime to repay the loan, not to mention the higher-value ancient paintings... What is Bai Fumei? What is the probability of a five-in-a-thousand bet... If you want to say that Bai Fumei is brainless, he just likes to be charitable and doesn't value ancient paintings at all. But your description gives the impression that this ancient painting is still very important to her... It's so weird

The routine is too old, it's unpleasant to watch, and it's addictive!

This kind of plot to subdue one's wits might have been popular a dozen years ago, but it's hard to find a market now. Putting all the villains inexplicably around the protagonist and forcibly making enemies for the protagonist is too far-fetched and makes people uncomfortable to watch! Recommended for new book lovers to read!