Peril in the Deep Space
深空绝境
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Future World
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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Using banned drugs in a regular martial arts competition, affecting lifespan and potential—the plot is just too low-brow. 🤔🤔🤔
What year is it? It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of plot. It has a touch of ancient beauty: a classic commoner genius with special talents, who gains the favor of a beautiful woman from a noble family. This woman also has a jealous, sycophantic young master from the same family.
Formulaic articles from more than ten years ago
Most of the powerful scions are villains, while the protagonist's friends are often stunning beauties, which leads to the powerful scions targeting and suppressing him. He then struggles his way up the ranks, eventually growing strong enough to destroy the villain's family. 🙂🙂
Reading this novel makes you at least ten years younger; it's like turning you back in time.
The author put in a lot of effort, but unfortunately, it doesn't fit the current situation. Hopefully, future descriptions can draw inspiration from that.
The writing style and premise are alright. But your opening is unlikely to keep readers engaged. Look at that "High Martial Era," it's so white, and it became a hit. This one isn't going to be popular, we need to find out why. The beginning is filled with long, boring stretches of setting up the plot and failing to advance the protagonist's cultivation.
It's so tacky, absolutely unbearably tacky, it's like stepping back 10 years...
Oppression and privilege are rampant everywhere. Elite children can attack others on campus, while the protagonist, beaten, dares not retaliate. The Federal Council directly favors the elite families, ignoring evidence, simply because the protagonist killed a member of one of their families; he's to be executed. The protagonist goes to great lengths to fabricate evidence to escape punishment.
It's a bit too abrupt...
This plot is really too contrived. Instead of focusing on cultivation, this aristocratic young master is stalking a woman, following her even though he knows she doesn't like him. Doesn't he have anyone else to do things for him? Furthermore, this top-tier rich and beautiful woman has tons of resources, yet she goes to the street to find someone to restore an ancient painting, and this painting…
The formula is too old, I'm not happy with it, I'm addicted!
Shennong's Poison Testing
This kind of idiotic plot might have been popular a decade or two ago, but it's unlikely to find a market now. Randomly piling all the villains around the protagonist and forcibly creating enemies for him feels forced and makes the reader uncomfortable! Recommended for new readers!