Rain Master

Generally, shouldn't a rain master (or someone who experiences rain) try to understand nature? It doesn't have the kind of style one might imagine.

With so many water-attribute cultivation techniques, why bother with rain-based classifications? Why not just let the protagonist create their own rain-based classification system? Others can create it, but the protagonist with a cheat-like ability can't?

This Chu Hongxue is shameless; he's even worse than that woman from before.

The main and supporting characters are indistinguishable. A minor character who only appears for a few episodes dies, yet the story is described in great detail, with half a chapter dedicated to his psychological state at the time of death and an entire chapter to his death itself. Does what he was thinking at the time of his death have any impact on the subsequent plot?

It seems the author had a lapse in judgment when writing those chapters. How did the other book handle it? They chose Yang from Yin-Yang and Five Elements, then Yang from Lesser Yang, and finally Yang from Lesser Yang. Yang is further divided into Greater Yang and Morning Sun, so the Morning Sun should be chosen first, from Greater Yang to Lesser Yang. How did this book handle it?

This synopsis gives me the feeling of a novel from about 10 years ago 😂

The only downside is that the male protagonist is a good-for-nothing. In my opinion, cultivating three paths simultaneously is utterly useless. If cultivating three paths could lead to immortality in a thousand years, then specializing in one path for ten years would be enough to achieve immortality, and then cultivating other paths at the immortal level would be a piece of cake.

I saw echoes of Chen Xiang and Han Li in the protagonist's backstory, but the writing is truly baffling. The early background introductions, character descriptions, and relationships—couldn't you have included long, detailed explanations? And then, after the protagonist goes off to find a master, you still write like this as the plot unfolds?

The beginning was alright, but the part with Chu something was written inexplicably, the character design was weird, and they were rushing to develop the romance too much, were they? They haven't even written many chapters yet and they're already adding a romance plot? 🤐

Starting from chapter 29, the writing gets progressively worse. The beginning was actually quite good, which is a shame...