The Immortal Locust

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the writing of your novel is very awkward. You say it is a decisive killing, but I feel that the protagonist is too soft-hearted. It is said that it relies on locusts to gain power. You also find two unnamed subordinates and accept a disciple. The little girl is not simple at first glance. She also found the bones of an ancient monk, which feels strange and strange.

Early stage, middle stage, late stage, peak, perfection. One qi training realm, forty-five small realms, really, disgusting

When I read a book, I care about logic. This is not too much. It is too much for the foundation-building robbers to rob the Yuanying family. Don't tell me what the reason behind it is and who is protecting it. According to the immortal way, even if those robbers put their lives on the line, it is not profitable enough to ask a Yuanying master to offend another stronger Yuanying family (people who are not strong at the same level or above will always be ants in their eyes)

I was speechless after reading thirty-two chapters. In the first four chapters, the protagonist is said to be decisive in killing, but in the second chapter, the protagonist inexplicably swears to kill a peerless genius who sacrificed 300,000 mortals with his blood. Is it weird? Is it none of your business if I just ask a question? ? I was speechless. You want to write such a selfless and righteous protagonist. Why did you write the protagonist so selfishly in the first four chapters? Anyone who read it will not say a word that the author is really a talent.

The Nascent Soul Family, for example, could create a golden elixir-level secret book, and also come up with a bunch of things in a flashy way, which is incredible. It would be understandable if it were a Jindan family.

Aren't you just playing with bugs? Why don't you kill the bosses and the like, go shopping and make your muscles flow, and even train your mind on the line between life and death?

You sacrifice 300,000 people in a city with blood at every turn. How many people are there in a feudal society? In the end, the bad guy was protected and taken away. If you expect retribution from heaven for anything. I estimate that you are a cultivator in the last days and will be destroyed.

No wonder I was able to sign it. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking traditional category... No, the ones with new ideas don't count as traditional categories, haha

Opportunities that can't be escaped, heroes who save beauties, ugly ducklings that turn into white swans, and monsters that can't be jumped out of are leveled up step by step.

The peak of the middle stage of Qi refining and the early stage of the late stage of Qi refining? I was going to write like this. I ate half a dragon and was still at the peak of the middle stage of Qi Refining The most important peak is very poisonous. The memory of death suddenly attacked me. A few years ago, an author liked to write like this. He directly flooded the readers away. He seemed to think that he had written well. What about half-step perfection in the middle stage of Qi-Refinement, perfection, half-step great perfection, great perfection peak, and then the early stage of the later stage, and the early half-step perfection. Good guy, I have a deep memory.