
First Player in the Soul Hall
魂殿第一玩家
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3.8M Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
Honours
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You actually survived? ! !
Oh my god, you kid, I thought you stopped writing, holy shit! ! ! ! Thinking back to those days, I was addicted to the online game Sword Fairy, and then I followed in your footsteps and finished The Gods Are Coming (that should be the name) I had been waiting for your new book, but suddenly there was no news from you! ! ! I always thought that you had withdrawn from the circle and stopped writing online articles, but today I suddenly searched it on a whim. I didn't expect to find out that you have opened a new book! ! ! I will directly reward 2000! ! ! Save the novel directly! Add to bookshelf! To compensate for my failure to reward back then. I hope you won't be ungrateful and open more new books for me in the future. I'll give you monthly tickets and rewards! ! ! ! My favorite author is you. I can't help it. Personally, I really liked The Sword Immortal back then. I hope I won't forget the past three months in the future. Looking forward to your next new book, and I wish this book will get better and better results.
I finished reading it in one go. My personal subjective opinion: In the current era of online game literature desert, this book is almost a semi-immortal for those who love to read online game literature. For others, if there is a book shortage, this book is definitely a food. There are no major poisonous points in the whole process, and the combat power does not collapse like other online game writers who are invincible every second. If you are in a book shortage, just jump in!
Let's just say (put a mouthful of vegetables into your mouth), what exactly is the matter (chew, chew), rewrite the old book? (Picks up the coke) It's not impossible (sizzles), at least (picks up the edamame) I have a book to read (gaba gaba), at least the books are not disappearing (takes another bite of vegetables), young people should write more (stuff it in your mouth and chew it), otherwise how can you support your family (swallow).
The author's game knowledge is too low
I just saw the issue of selling attribute-increasing elixirs. This is a hard product. There are hundreds of millions of players around the world and the price will never drop. Please refer to the mobile game DNF Bone Ring which has maintained a price of 200 yuan until now. The enhancement materials for PC games have never dropped for more than ten years. People who play games seriously will buy them. There are too many tycoons who play games with hundreds of millions of people, unless they are put on the shelves every day. There are millions of them, otherwise they will be eliminated by others. The value-added props will never fall, not to mention the merchants speculating. Although there are level restrictions, it has only been two months since the server was launched. The first large army was just a fighter, and new people are constantly joining. The protagonist only made a few hundred in two months. It is a drop in the bucket. I hope to write less of this in the future.
So the poor should not write about the consumption level of the rich 😭 I saw that in an online game of this size, the first elixir that permanently added attributes was auctioned for only 3.20,000, Which is a bit difficult. . . An emperor must use a golden hoe. No matter how hard it is in the Internet age, it's okay to check the transaction prices of real game props. Top props in Fantasy Westward Journey can sell for hundreds of thousands 😭😭😭
Recommended by a century-old bookworm
The writing is smooth, and the current plot concept is based on the original text. The world view and game development are relatively reasonable. When I saw Dou Po + time travel + games, I originally planned to be a Shennong. After reading it, I found that it is really good. It can be considered a good choice at present, and I gave it 85 points.
Regarding the author's insistence that his heroine's writing is okay, but it's because "a small number" of readers don't like it.
Don't you have any idea how much space you gave to this heroine? Would other heroines not be as good as her if they had such a long career? Not to mention that Xun'er's creation time is far less than her popularity and she is still sluggish. Just bury your head in your own world and be an ostrich. The decline in follow-up and subscription is real.
The heroine of the fanfic is well written, but the originality is really not that good.
Before the female character named Su came out, the perception was okay, but since she came out, every time there is a scene with her, everyone wants to dance. It's really not good if it's not original. Can't it be good to write a fanfic 🥵
If it were a pure online game, it would feel very awkward. Most of the female protagonists are NPCs, which makes the whole relationship line look like a paper character falling in love, which is a bit unacceptable.
The writing is very good. It is a true pure online game novel. I feel comfortable reading the author's writing style. There are no poisonous points like other immersive online game novels in the past. The emotional scenes are well-measured and the protagonist's own factors are taken into consideration. I hope to see the protagonist and Xun'er become lovers as soon as possible in the article. The daily life of these two is also very interesting. Thank you to the author. I really like the subject matter of this holographic online game. The strength of the protagonist is also being planned. It is not considered too excessive by the game company, which is also an advantage The interaction between players is also based on games and is very pragmatic Even the villain players do not exceed their duties and are very accurate It is a pity that this novel came out too late. Now the viewing rate of online games... Many other readers only read the title of the book, resulting in bleak results Come on, author, I hope I can continue to write the most satisfying book.