Hate Me, Miss Witch!

In the early stage, the famous scenes and famous lines were perfectly integrated, and I had to praise it while having fun In the middle period, when the important plot (Camelo) and the supporting role (Licking Dog Cup) started to play tricks, the viewing experience plummeted, and it was difficult to read immersed in the invincible text + the plot with a strong sense of déjà vu. The character creation (such as the current Lao Da of Chenxi Club) is not as good as the villain in the first chapter. From the end of the first volume to the beginning of the third volume, the monthly ticket rankings soared but the perception dropped. I hope the third volume can be written better. By the way, I wish you the best of luck in winning the title (

Although I have finished reading it now, I almost gave up the book at first. The main reason is that the plot at the beginning of the book is weird, and the protagonist's cynical and unemotional performance after the battle with the Ashes Order even lowers the popularity of the book. But after seeing the first online communication with Her Royal Highness the Second Princess, especially the protagonist's indescribable opening statement, "Your Highness, I have actually been admiring you for a long time. When I first saw you, I even thought about the name of the child we gave birth to," I felt the desire to read on. We might as well understand it this way - the impact of the protagonist's degree of defiance on the perception can be quantified to a certain extent: When the protagonist performs a slightly defiant behavior, I frown slightly; When things get better, I leave; When the protagonist's behavior is seriously outrageous, I don't hesitate to turn away; But when the protagonist says something extremely outrageous, I will read on with expectation, because at this time, the protagonist's outrageous behavior is no longer a shortcoming of the article, but a selling point and style. The subsequent plot proved that the protagonist was not abnormal, but was not written well before. It was also around the time it was put on the shelves that the sense of anticipation began to grow. The specific evaluation is as follows: Advantages: 1. There is still some imagination. It is a very dramatic way to make sacrifices in front of the girls when they are weak so that they will never forget themselves. 2. Be able to live happily and have a good sense of humor. 3. The heroines have a certain degree of diversity and satisfy all kinds of xp. 4. Shura Field is well written. Disadvantages: 1. Low information density. Too many unnecessary explanatory paragraphs are interspersed between normal narration and description, causing the book to change from "readable" to "accelerated readable". 2. Repetitive description. "One thousandth of a second later", "one thousandth of a moment later" and similar descriptions appear too many times in the battles in this book, which affects the perception. It can only be said that the author has successfully found his own "terrible" and "nothing to say". 3. Some heroines are not handled well. Not to mention the Queen of the Night, who doesn't even have a character card. As the main nun and saint-like XP in this book, Su Lun's role is pitiful in the entire middle and late stages. It can even be said that she almost never appears. The other female protagonists have many opportunities to exchange their feelings with the male protagonist, but Su Lun does not have it at all, and I don't know how to handle the ending. The above is for reference of book seekers.

I feel like Fairy Grass is worth getting into, but I'm not sure yet. So, you can give me another hundred chapters and let me take a look

Her Majesty, Please Respect Yourself + Unscientific Beast Control + The Evil Master Doesn't Want to Be Destroyed. The character design and plot are 90% similar to Her Majesty, Please Respect Yourself. The realm of beast control is the same as Unscientific Beast Control. The ending of traveling through time and space to save the heroine and the Evil Master Don't Want to Be Disillusioned are similar.

Sylvia

The follow-up reading and data of the new book issue are very important, especially the follow-up reading every Monday and Tuesday. So all readers who keep books, please spend some time every Tuesday to read the latest chapters. Maybe... Someone will watch it, right?

By the way, is this historical reverberation just like in "Unscientific Beast Control" and "Spirit Controller"? Is it just a special secret realm, or can it really change history? If it's the latter, wouldn't the history of this world be able to be insulted and raped at will by strong men who control the power of time and space?

Black silk black silk black silk

It's a very good book. The plot design and writing style don't sound like a new author. It's a pity that the length is too short and there are too many female protagonists. Most of the pen and ink is devoted to advancing the story, while there is very little emotional description of the heroines. Su Lun and Xi Bao were basically reduced to backgrounds in the later stage, and the relationship between the princess and the dragon lady was also a mess, which is really a pity. It would be nice if I could write more about daily life and write about the past in detail. .

Don't have too many heroines. The more plots are created through multiple heroines, it means that the old heroines have less roles, and they will inevitably be suspected of being studs. To like three or four people is sentimental; to like too many is considered sentimental. The balance must be grasped well

Get close to the heroine and take good care of her. When she can't live without you, have your body separated and thrown in front of her. Let her turn completely black, and work hard all the way to the top to finally see the target of revenge, only to find that the figure turned around and it was you 🙂🙂

First of all, I have never been an author, but I would like to say that it is difficult to write 100 chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said it at the beginning, I've never been an author.

Advantages: The pace of the light novel is relaxed and there is no bitterness or hatred. The character description is quite vivid. The female character is okay and the emotional drama is interesting. Overall, there is no big poisonous point ​ ​ Disadvantages: The description of combat power is not clear. I am still confused when I read it. There is basically no clear concept of combat power for the people in the protagonist's external group; ​ There is too little worldview shaping and no description of the world. It simply creates a world centered on the protagonist; ​ There is not much description of the protagonist's life. The plot goes from moment to moment, and I don't feel the flavor of life. It is more like watching someone else's condensed movie commentary ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ There is no explanation for this ​ There are also historical dungeons with pets. You can say that this is a simple space-time phantom or something like the past time and space of a parallel universe. Since the creatures in it are real, why doesn't the protagonist try to get more things in it? This is a completely small world. The protagonist never considered that he could contract a pet in it from the beginning. Anyway, he just lacked a really good pet and got it here. There was no explanation later.

The combat power is indeed a bit messy, but who cares about the combat power🙈I want to watch Shura Field. Saint, Dragon Knight, Master. The other two can guess it, but they don't know which world the saint's world represents. The three worlds are probably still close to being completed, but the combat power is indeed raised a bit quickly. I know it is to prepare for the next world to kill the gods. But over-connection is still a lot worse

Byd deliberately blocked 250, right?

The writing is very good, the pace is too fast, and there are too many forced sensational parts. It would actually be okay if the plot had a faster pace, but the constant sensationalism was a bit annoying. Emotions must have ups and downs, and if there is no suppression, they cannot rise. Of course, the emotion part itself is also a matter of rhythm in writing a book. I really don't understand why such a good writing style cannot even control the rhythm to a satisfactory level 🙂

I feel like the combat power is a bit confusing. Why is the protagonist suddenly above legendary? I didn't even realize it.

The beginning was inexplicable and uninteresting, but in the middle it became more interesting. The ending was a bit hasty, and the promised extras were not written.

My king, my king, my king

It feels like a lot of books have been sewn together, not only the plot but also some of the text have been copied directly.

Shijiang Shijiang

It's right, so right 😍, it's exactly the same as Her Majesty the Queen's writing style. I don't know what the author is, but the author must have read the book in the lamp, which is the kind of book that stitches together many books, but has its own style, light and bright feeling

The Queen, the Queen, the Queen

So far, this novel is very good, and it has a lot of jokes. When I first read Tsukuyomi, I was wondering if there would be a "Stupid Oudou" plot, but I didn't expect that there would be. I feel like there are still a lot of things that haven't been written in the Aurora line. The character design of Sylvia, including the plot, is quite well designed. I hope that the subsequent women will not repeat the previous routine. I hope that the more I write, the better I get, and that I don't end up with a situation like the final priesthood. Come on

Halfway through, I forgot where I saw it. I'm convinced.

A good book, mainly because it stitches together many elements without being very depressing Eri Ryuki's inability to travel, unable to speak and the setting of the "key" Amaterasu Tsukiyomi of Japanese mythology (mainly Naruto) Many dramas Just accept what you can accept, anyway, this book does not have any poisonous points so far (It is not a good thing to stitch too many characters when you see those referring characters, after all she is just a substitute

It is indeed a book that I have fallen in love with. I ordered it yesterday and today it is listed as a top-notch book + 10,000 orders.

There is also a book about rebirth, but the protagonist has been the partner of various goddesses in his previous life. Which novel is that? I can't find it halfway through. The queen is still a trinity.

I just happened to have read two of the novels in the lamp and the villainous young master doesn't want to be ruined. This one really hit my strike zone!

Reading your book in one session is better than reading it in ten years 🙂