Every Talisman I Draw Gets Banned

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I read this book as a romance novel with Liu Qing 😁

The people who escaped halfway are here. I think the first problem with this book is that it is written in the name of cultivation but has little to do with it. The growth of cultivation is not linked to the plot. If the cultivation is increased, it is still a low-level talisman. What is the significance of cultivation to the plot? Second, it's almost 250 chapters, and you're still trapped in a small place. It's similar to a cultivator who is still doing odd jobs outside. Who wants to read it? Third, and the second reason, the protagonist's status has not improved. At best, he has changed from an outer disciple to a valued outer disciple. If he comes to build a foundation, he should still serve tea.       ，，，，，， That's when I started watching it. So, it's almost 250 chapters, and it doesn't open a new map, doesn't mention status, and doesn't practice cultivation. How much more attractive is this book? I want to watch the brain-hole talisman rip off a person, a village, a town, a county, a city, a province, a country, and then rip off the human race and the demon race, the righteous way and the demonic way, and the sky and the air, but I don't want to watch it rip off passerby A and then passerby B, B, and D.

Liu's writing is quite cute. Isn't this a good way to write about women? Just don't mix things into it.

It's exciting, but the grade is a bit low. The level is low, and the things you draw can disrupt the upper market and attract big bosses from all sides. You feel like a concept god, but you are cultivating immortality, and cultivating immortals must abide by the conservation of energy!

I have a suggestion, that is, the protagonist's golden finger is not very obvious, and can be strengthened. A game will have some bugs from time to time as it progresses, and this game has been around for a long time. The protagonist is from the time when he time travels to the beginning. You can fix some lifelong bugs at the appropriate time, or to permanently improve your strength in several small realms in a short period of time, or to save your life. There are also some small easter eggs in the game that can be arranged 😁

Generally speaking, it's average, the protagonist's character is a bit disgusting, and the protagonist who doesn't know how to refuse is better than Asasi. The inspiration for the full text is roughly based on the book "Don't Fire My Humanity", let's just use it as a meal replacement.

I originally wanted to enjoy the cp between Jiang Cheng and Liu Qing, but it ended. Judging from the length of the emotional line, I guess the author did not expect it to end so quickly. The emotional change was a bit hasty, and the Dayanzong did not expand, nor did Jiang Cheng's cheap master. I haven't forgotten yet. The protagonist has traveled back in time into a game he made. The main plot of the novel may not even include 20% of what the author envisioned. The protagonist's cultivation level is so high that he can't even build a foundation. Such a grand narrative ended in failure. Assigning Dayanzong to Jiangcheng, the author probably wants Jiangcheng to further develop in the magic cultivator, and even gradually let Dayanzong take the number one position in the magic way. The first stage of Tongtianmen is probably when Jiang Cheng solves the emotional problems between the cheap master and his father. The second stage relies on the relationship between the master and his father to enter the circle of high-level officials. Through his evil talismans, the high-level officials are unable to hold back and have no choice but to let him become an elder. The third stage is probably going out. The plot of Liu Qing should be very late. Emotionally, she and Jiang Cheng will get married, and then explain their identities, and Jiang Cheng will accept it calmly. Then there may be some crisis in the demon clan. Liu Qing in the Mahayana period needs to rush back, and Jiang Cheng also rushes over, and then creates some special talismans to build bridges in the human world, gradually solve the crisis of the genocide of the demon clan, and achieve the great reconciliation between humans and demons. Interspersed in the middle are probably the two or three things about the Dragon Palace Aquatic Tribe, most of which are related to Ao Lian coming ashore again and taking the initiative to look for Jiangcheng. The main problem of this novel is that the ideas are too dense but the follow-up development is neglected. The talismans made by Jiang Cheng are more amazing than the last, and the ideas are clearer. However, after the author wrote it and caused a social sensation, the subsequent plot probably did not have anything to do with the talismans. This is very wasteful and greatly reduces the life of the novel. The author should focus on Jiangcheng's subsequent development and utilization of these talismans, as well as the new interpretation and utilization of old talismans. In the author's background setting, the world of immortality should be very stable, but it is actually a game. How could it be like in the novel, where there are only a few decent confrontation scenes in the whole novel? The protagonist has never fought with others. Without the enemy to force the protagonist, the plot will naturally be as loose as sand. The author will have no goal and naturally have no work to do. If the author focuses on development, why not write about the protagonist using the inventions and ideas of modern civilization to transform the talisman and shock the world of immortality? The plot is promising, but it's a pity that the author has no life and doesn't want to bite the lighter. Reward the author with "high moral praise".

Harem or single? If it's a harem, I'll pursue it.

If this book didn't have the beginning, "Green Tea" would have become popular.