She and I Must Capture It

At the beginning, the dragon wants to kill you, just because she is beautiful. You save her, but you also have to help her and train her. Then she saves the tribe, breaks up with you immediately after saving, kicks you away, and may kill you again. . . . There may be good dragons, so why do dragon hunters kill them so casually? But what does the protagonist say? The guilty one is the Dragon Hunting Saber. Don't kill anyone, just kill the Dragon Hunting Saber. . . . .

Some people say that this ink book has no focus, and some say that the character of the protagonist and the character of the heroine are problematic. If they are right, I accept all of them. The beginning said that the clan members have been changed, and the knife has also been changed. Basically, as long as it is said to be a problem, I will change it if it can be changed. This is my first book. To be honest, my experience and control are relatively average. There are some things that I think are okay, but you will think there is a problem when you see it, so no matter what you mention, it will be changed if it can be changed. The outline is about one million words long. I also hope to give this book a good ending. Please bear with me for any shortcomings and please give me your advice.

Is the protagonist on base? Never be a male eunuch.

It is difficult to control multiple female protagonists, so it is recommended not to have multiple female protagonists. But in light novels, A-Zhai may just fall in love with this. 😠

The writing is quite good, but it seems like she has a single heroine at the moment, but she also gave a harem a soft star and a golden finger?

Is it okay for the male protagonist's identity to be exposed so quickly? The protagonist is only at the second level now. How can he fight the legend? Even if the empress and the college president protect him, these evil gods are playing tricks on the protagonist. There is no time for the protagonist to develop. In the future, either the fighting power will collapse, or the protagonist will be tortured like crazy. If I were the evil god, I would just go up and kill the protagonist. Seeing from the previous article, these gods have already disappeared, and looking at Shuuer and the Free Lord, they don't feel that they are restricted at all. It makes no sense not to kill the protagonist directly. To be honest, this is too outrageous.

The rhythm is messed up, the boss appears too fast, and there is no time to grow up. I feel that no matter how hard the protagonist struggles, he will end up dead. Anyway, I can't see the hope of the protagonist's victory. The gap is too big. An evil god and an apostle confront the protagonist when he is still a novice. The rhythm is completely messed up. The highlight of this book is the emotional development between the female protagonist and the protagonist after being effeminate. You are being targeted by an evil god and an apostle, and you also have to save the world! How can there be time to fall in love? Anyway, I just saw the helplessness and deep despair of the protagonist. It was too cruel. If I were the protagonist, I would just lie down and die, and I still have to practice a lot, especially when I saw that it takes a month to upgrade Apprentice 7 to 8? I was instantly dumbfounded. If the protagonist could level up in one day, then I think the protagonist could still be saved. But this is just the apprentice level. It takes you a month to level up. How do you write the subsequent levels? Anyway, it's impossible to be less than a month, it can only be more. Seeing this, I sympathized with the protagonist. It's so tragic! Want to become a legend? It is impossible to move forward without a hundred years. In a hundred years, the evil god will have killed the protagonist long ago. The exposure time is too fast. Anyway, I don't think the protagonist can survive.

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

It has the feeling of a different world in Japanese comics and youthful emotions. I feel that the author should watch a lot of other world dramas.

Let's just say that the protagonist's character won't be some kind of Madonna character or a perfect warrior character, right? If you really set it up like this, tell me in advance. Before I see it, you will create a plot for me that I can't watch.

If the second heroine doesn't come out, it's better to just have a single heroine.

The first volume is coming to an end soon. If you have any questions about the setting or plot, you can reply below this comment. I will open a single chapter to answer after the end of the first volume.

I don't know why you update two chapters every day. I suggest you just post one chapter every day, and then use the time to write a new chapter to revise the previous chapters.

In fact, when I saw this, I asked politely whether the heroine, who is the prototype of the dragon, is a boy or a girl. What if she is a boy? The heroine will definitely return to normal. Wouldn't it be a boy plus a boy! ! ! ! !

You can just read Yuan Tong's latest book "Deep Sea Embers", which is also considered Xixuan. Learn how to write. Sharpening the knife will not make you a chopping wood. You can't get enough of the story, the visuals, or the character's appearance. I read a book called "The Siren's Blade" before. There are only ten characters in the book, but the story is exciting. You can also read it.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.