Forced into a State of Love

Light Novel Xiancao☆ Personal rating 9☆ The score of this book is a bit low, maybe because it is difficult to become popular in the field of light novels. But it is indeed a rare light novel that is not objectionable. First, let's talk about the stereotypes of light novels on the market. The male protagonist is reborn with a system, encounters various girls, chases after each other, daily dog ​​food, the characters are severely distorted, and the names can only be found in the dictionary. It seems that if the name is nice, the character image will be established. The advantage of this book lies in the author's excellent writing style, vivid and interesting characters, the male protagonist has normal views, the female protagonist has a very different personality, a pornographic agent, an innocent high school girl, a strange girl, a soft-sounding senior, a stick figure, a legal lolita, a teacher with a fatal injury, a funny and harmful friend... Thanks to the healing mission of the main line, although it is a harem, each emotional line is clear and independent. Emm, if I have to talk about a similar article, it's a bit like the book My Girlfriend Is a Bad Lady. But the biggest disadvantage of novels of the same type is that the main line is blurred in the middle period, and the plot can only be promoted by constantly introducing new characters; the ending of the character relationships in the later period is easy to end. As long as it is an urban harem, 90% of the failures are due to the choice of the male protagonist. Under the background of modern thinking, it is scum to have more than one boat, and it is even more poisonous to abandon the relationship. It depends on whether the author can find a balanced ending. I have seen a better way to deal with it is to leave it blank Anyway, come on, author!

I quite like this book. The author has done a good job in shaping the heroines. Each one has her own characteristics and is cute as a girl. As for the male protagonist, in the online articles I have read, it is rare to find someone who dares to be a scumbag. I hate the kind of indecisive guy who hangs on the heroines. His portrayal is reliable, not arrogant, respectful of other girls, and responsible. Good luck to the author. I haven't read online articles for a while. I don't have a monthly pass for the time being. I will give it to you when I get it.

The chapter on free whoring is over, let's make a summary first. The lower limit of a light novel depends on the female protagonist, and the upper limit depends on the male protagonist. The portrayal of the heroine is quite good. The contrast between Gu Zheng's name and character is straightforward but not lacking in feminine charm. Her competitiveness can be said to be cute rather than a problem 😁. Her character is unique. Her plot is a bit like a matryoshka doll. Little by little, you get to know the charm of this character. But, here comes the question, did the author ignore the design problem of the male protagonist? The female protagonist's problems come from family and other factors, but a male protagonist who lost his mother at a young age, his father was a gambler, and his father was terminally ill, and he watches the countdown to his life every day, looks like a normal person with no personality problems. On the other hand, for a person who earns points every day in order to survive and works to support his family, I can't see the tenacity and calmness in him that wanders between life and death. He is prone to panic when encountering problems, and his actions are not sharp enough. He is more emotional than rational towards others (Marx: Character is a stable state. You can't just look at the time when he throws a gun, but also his daily interactions with other characters). It has been many years since I touched and confronted my mother, and the male protagonist's life and death countdown has been two years, but the two of them together do not look like they are of the same rank.

I think it looks good, I hope there will be more updates, I will definitely follow it!

The characters of this book are very well written. I feel that Mo Yixia and Wen Liang have something in common.

Very good, I hope you stick with it and it will become popular

It's so beautiful. I like it. Cheers, author.

Dying → Dying (a bit similar to the meaning of "endless"): The energy is endless, and the physical fitness and tenacity are comparable to Captain America. Dragon and Phoenix among people→Dragon and Phoenix among people: You are not only a hero among people, but also have an amazing background. You can be called a super human being→Dragon and Phoenix among people: As soon as you are born, you stand at the top of mankind in all aspects. Chef→Cooking Lion: Every lion has a leader, and you are the leader in the culinary world.

To be honest, when I saw Mo Yixia, I was inexplicably reminded of a Korean comic I had seen; A problem girl, a high school student, with poor grades, a tutor, younger than the tutor, who likes to wear a mask, only her mother is at home, and her father is still away, so I can't remember clearly. One of the differences is that this one has an older sister 🙂

I seldom read the comment section, but some readers can stop messing around. The definition of licking a dog is to kneel down and lick another person without dignity. What on earth is there about the protagonist that is related to the word licking a dog? I have a misunderstanding of a certain word, but I still have to mislead others. Is this the contemporary Shennong? If you think that the protagonist is taking the initiative to give, the problem is that he is asking for others. What he wants from the heroine in the first place is never emotional feedback, but points. Everything he does is to survive, not out of emotion, so it is none of his business whether others appreciate it or not? You call this licking? Emotions must change with getting along with each other. If you think that the protagonist will smile evilly at the beginning and the heroine will be full of affection for you, and even risk everything to lick you and fight against the world for you, then please go find a novel from more than ten years ago. I can't satisfy you here In fact, if your eyes are fine, you can at least see Gu Zheng's feelings for the male protagonist. This is not emotional feedback. Some people have seen Chapter 31, why do they still think that the male protagonist is kneeling and licking her? Regarding the problem of cheats, I wrote in the introduction that the system does not account for a large part, and it is useful but will not be used often. The book itself is an exaggerated daily novel, and character interaction is the main content. If you can't accept it, there is no need to criticize it. I have always been disgusted with the so-called Shennong. Please don't insult Shennong. He tasted a hundred herbs and was so great. But some people can easily rate a book when they see a certain word or sentence. The poisonous labels are still jumping up and down in the comment area. If you delete the comment, they may change your account to troll you. It is really inexplicable Everyone has different tastes and preferences. It is normal. I accept reasonable criticism and suggestions. But if you insist on thinking that the male protagonist is a licker, then I can only say that you are suitable for reading ancient cool novels. There may be a docile and well-behaved heroine to help you chase other women I really don't want to delete the comment. Please stop jumping up and down in the comment area.

[Brief Review] A love story by a new author, it seems to have multiple female protagonists () Although he is a new author in LV1, he handles the relationship between the female protagonists and the protagonist very appropriately. The protagonist has to find the girls again and again to complete tasks for the system, and gradually deepens the relationship with them. As more and more objects are bound to the system, I believe that the protagonist will also have many different cool operations. [Book title] Forced into a state of love [Author] Old Days Idle Songs [Work Status] Serialized (220,000 words) [Recommendation Index] 4 stars [Tag] Shura Field, Daily Literature, Love [Reason for Recommendation] The protagonist Han Zhou spent eighteen ordinary years in his previous life, and spent another eighteen ordinary years after time travel, and finally waited for the system! Han Zhou has been frail and sickly since he was a child. Judging from the physique displayed on the system panel, his physique is only half of that of a normal person. At the same time, he is terminally ill and must consume system points every day to stay alive. However, there is only one bound object that can obtain system points, squad leader Gu Zheng, so Han Zhou completes tasks in front of the squad leader every day. In the eyes of outsiders, this is dog-licking behavior. After the college entrance examination, Han Zhou accidentally discovered another target that the system could bind to - high school student Mo Yixia. Mo Yixia asked him to be a tutor to fool her mother, and Han Zhou agreed in order to get in touch with her. When I was a guest at the home of the arrogant squad leader, I happened to meet Mo Yixia sending a message to Han Zhou, but was misunderstood by the squad leader, who seemed to be jealous... With only two binding objects, it is already so difficult. I believe we will encounter more and more in the future. How should Han Zhou handle the relationship between them on the basis of scoring points? Come and read with me! [Similar Recommendation] "I Really Don't Want to Fall in Love" {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

Too poisonous, a dog-licking article wearing the skin of the system

Ichika almost died in the snowy mountains, but the two men just farted lightly. Gu Zheng was targeted and lost the game, so he ran over and threatened the other party insignificantly. The other party thought that the male protagonist was a clown, so he backhandedly created a Shura field for the protagonist. He was indeed a clown.

I didn't pay attention at first, thinking it was about martial arts, but after reading it, I suddenly realized it was a romance novel 😂 I wish the author will get better as he writes more

Sorry, I didn't read it. The writing is not pleasant... It's not that I want to read some cool and invincible stories. Your protagonist's brain circuit is a bit different from ordinary people. Besides, I really don't see anything in the interactive chapter. To be honest, the setting of Goldfinger is too abstract. You seem to have not handled it well. Even if you downplay it, it is difficult to have a sense of perception or substitution. Your poor handling of Goldfinger has led to the plot being too stiff. And how many years has a person lived on Goldfinger? Just change it one day at a time and brush it every day. I really think it would be better if you suddenly get a terminal illness, and then relax your daily tasks, so that you can slightly control the strange feeling of the setting. My dear brother, I really didn't read it. I've seen your work since it was published. After reading the introduction, I didn't have the desire to click in and read it. If there is no book in the book, I clicked in and I couldn't help myself. I wrote such a paragraph for you. Good luck to the author (๑Ő௰Ő๑)

AI drawing, guzheng,

On the way to mountain climbing, someone has an accident. During the search and rescue process, it is illegal to deliberately conceal the danger. This is not a moral issue for him, this is a violation of the law. You, the male protagonist, have no ability to retaliate, so you can just call the police. You really just want to fight or suffer. No response at all? If you don't respond to Mo Yixia's feelings, I think you want to be in two different situations and don't want to enter into a relationship first. That's okay. I don't say that the male protagonist is weak or irresponsible. I reluctantly say that he is playing the long game to catch the big fish. But what those two scumbags did started to threaten Mo Yixia's life, so you didn't even have the slightest bit of counterattack? What's this

I watched my childhood sweetheart who has been licking for 3 years hear the male protagonist being beaten, and just ignore it without asking why because the other person is a woman. The female protagonist in it is not attractive at all, maybe because she eats too much fine food. This childhood sweetheart is like a tsundere man machine, and the male protagonist also feels that he has no emotional intelligence.

How this book manages to be both boring and interesting at the same time. There are a lot of boring parts, but there are interesting scenes interspersed in the middle, which is very similar to the situation when watching TV dramas interspersed with a bunch of advertisements.

The author of After the Snow Mountain was probably taken away

It turns out it's you, the eunuch. I just said it looked so familiar.

The poor performance of this book is due to the author's own writing. Sometimes it has two heroines, and then it is changed to a harem story. However, the plot is extremely delayed. I don't know why a good daily campus love story must add fantasy elements.

The portrayal of the heroine Gu Zheng was a complete failure, and the character design was not as good as the other female supporting characters. I felt that it would be better to write a single heroine plot of Mo Yixia. Forcibly inserting Gu Zheng into the story was unsatisfying. The first perspective of this character in the book and the reader's perspective are too unflattering. Anyway, as far as the current perception is concerned, the female character on the character card, whether she is the heroine or the supporting role (Ya Ya does not participate in PVP), is fuller and more likable than her setting. Perhaps it would be more likable to set her up as a pure older sister or younger sister in this kind of role. If she has to be a lover, it will be very distracting, and even though the author has written many times that Guzheng is beautiful, in the plot with her, I still can't help but substitute her into the image of a steel Barbie.

I would say light novels should not use too many literary techniques. It is not bad to recycle foreshadowing after breaking off the cliff at the climax. Not to mention other readers, I was really speechless if there were too many. Not to mention the readers who are following the update, I have accumulated a large number of consecutive readings. The plot of the little coma is jumpy and confusing, and it does not include the causes and consequences to bury the hook for the readers to guess. Didn't the author realize that there are very few chapters in about 300 chapters? The author yourself said that sometimes what you want to write cannot be written without the writing style, so don't write it. Forcing yourself to write some writing skills that you have not mastered is very disappointing. Some novels are very interesting and can be read in one go. When I am bored, I will read this novel to kill time. I don't want to read it anymore. Isn't it good to memorize the protagonist's memory before? How about writing it all in one go? I don't know where I learned it. I just jump to conclusions without writing the causes and consequences, and then start from daily writing and finally recycle the foreshadowing. The already boring plot finally reaches a climax and then gets interrupted. If the writing is good, readers will just endure it and keep reading. But author, you have said that your writing is not good. Don't mess with those writing techniques that are in place but not in place. Just write the story honestly, okay?

I'm not telling you that, enduring the poison and watching more than 400 chapters of guzheng relay running before and after confessing one's love, it was really pretentious and embarrassing to death. I felt that the author was so excited about writing that he didn't care about the perception at all. The first one was repeated over and over for more than ten chapters, just like Terry The male protagonist in Ultraman has always been like a U-shaped character. It's too wordy. I agree with the way of writing it back and forth, and I also agree with touching it as a narration to introduce the story. But why does the author write it so embarrassingly that his toes touch the floor with the pain of youth? (Most youth pain literature is also very down-to-earth, but this one is not as floating in the air. It once made me wonder if the author had gone to college.) The small story still hints at whether the Riddler can get out of Gotham. I still say the same thing. If you want to use advanced writing methods, you must have corresponding writing to support it. The written words make people have no sense of substitution. People who read your storyline will only feel that the plot is cliched from time to time because of the narrative structure and because the plot development is too cliche.

I hope I can collect them all. I like the female characters very much.

Mo's writing is very good, but Gu Zheng Que's writing is not that good. I didn't read much, but the story about how Gu Zheng talked about being isolated didn't really create a very good character. No matter how I add it later, I feel a little bit indifferent. I don't understand why the author set up such a heroine and didn't bother to conceive it. It's hard for readers to read😣. The childhood sweetheart's story neither highlights the arrogance nor insistence on herself. I am proud of the idea of putting myself first, but I am obviously shaken because of what happened in junior high school, so my motivation for striving for first place in daily life is a bit unclear. I feel that if I still insist on striving for first place at the beginning, but because of certain things and the junior high school events of the protagonist, he starts to waver, and the protagonist comforts him. In this way, whether he furthers his feelings for the protagonist or strengthens his determination to be number one, he will feel much better. (Personal Thoughts)

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I caught up on the latest chapters in a few days. To be honest, the only ones I can read are the beginning, the middle, and the latest chapters. The rest are a bit inexplicable and pretentious. The other female characters are all well portrayed, except for Xiao Xiaoxiao. I feel that the author has fallen into the curse of "Chekhov's gun". Every time he fires a shot, he must fire back again, without considering the situation of empty ammunition. . . Write about daily life, tasks, is the main character's condition bad? As a result, the plot and characters are always superficial, and the lack of ideas is because the protagonist is assigned a lot of things to do. The author is tired, and the readers are also tired. In fact, it can be solved with just 3 words "subtraction"

The writing is really good, especially the emotional drama of Yi Xia, which is very well written. However, the small supernatural plot is a bit unclear and the plot is draggy. Sometimes there are inexplicable plots in other weird places, but generally the writing is very good.