At Level 999, I Finally Joined the Adventure Team

I really like the early and middle stages of this book, specifically the plot before the transformation. The biggest point is that the protagonist's character is very open and honest. The protagonist basically doesn't know how to hide, he takes action when he needs to, and he doesn't pretend to understand. I really like this kind of character who always answers questions when there are so many Riddlers. Even if he lies, he will tell the truth first. If it is, it is, if it is not, it is not. There is no identity baggage, and he clearly says that he is stuck in a bug and doesn't understand anything. , Discovering a new skill combination that makes you laugh happily... The protagonist is indeed enjoying the world in a game way. How could he hide the fact that "because of a bug, he can't move his body now and can only use a female clone" for the reason of "turning into a woman will ruin his reputation for life"? Shouldn't this mean opening a female trumpet account for him? I know that the author is creating the plot to capture the new characters, but this way of hiding his identity is considered to be a breakdown for the protagonist. The protagonist previously lamented that he had finally integrated into the team, but he turned around and was banned, and the unblocked time was unknown, and he did not tell his teammates about important things like this... I think this kind of "hiding" is the biggest poisonous point. It is clear that there is nothing wrong with it, and it can even build a wave of goodwill. It is really a plot with unclear meaning, God's will. Another point is that the protagonist's grasp of the direction of matters related to him is declining. The first time you enter the door at the beginning, the protagonist keeps it all, and the same is true when you are raided by the assassination team in reality. But when it comes to the second door, the protagonist leaves the team and the eldest ladies have to fight hard with two B-levels. So far, it is okay. After all, the protagonist cannot be a nanny forever. It is no problem to write about the independent growth of the rest of the team, but when it comes to transformation Here, the protagonist was banned after he was promoted to S-level. In order to escape from the abyss, he was forced to create a female clone (not even his own). After the fight, he lost consciousness on the spot... The situation was no longer under the protagonist's control after he was promoted to S-level. This sense of loss of control was too disconnected compared to the previous one, which is one of the reasons why I didn't like this plot. I am still mentally preparing for the next chapter. I am a little worried that I will still be shi after eating it. It is really a bit PTSD. I hope the author can maintain the style of the early and mid-term and have some Wangdao team stories.

The plot has reached another stage, let me comment again... If the first part (Chapter 1-100) is about following the girl group without knowing your strength, the second part (Chapter 100-200) is about exposing part of your strength and taking the initiative to explore. It explores the "problems" encountered during the previous adventure and recycles some of the foreshadowings of the first part: the protagonist launches an investigation into the "evil forces" and reveals the conspiracy while broadening his horizons. In this way, many foreshadowings of the girl group's background are connected, and the battle scenes in this section are not so heavy. , After all, it is mainly about investigation Some of the "combatants" of the girl group also began to have "special emotions" for the protagonist after those things. I think it was just because of the favorable impression generated by the current situation: the "female brothers" got in the car in confusion, " "Tsundere" is obsessed with the blind date, and the relationship between "Money Fan" and the protagonist looks more like a "master-disciple" relationship. They are not the kind of elements that can form a long-term relationship. After comparison, Lin Xingyao and Ji Jingxi look more like the real protagonist The most discussed part among other book friends is the scene where the protagonist transforms into a female/female doppelgänger. I think this is quite reasonable: the protagonist is afraid of becoming a "women's cross-dresser" in the eyes of others, so she hides her identity. I don't want this to be exposed, but I'll see how it's dealt with later. The author The author's skills have improved. The big scenes are not as chaotic as before, but other shortcomings have become obvious. The author's screenwriting is still rigorous, but the writing style is a bit more ordinary: when the author describes a plot, he uses The number of words will be too high, so some paragraphs may take two to three chapters to complete... And every time the author needs to recycle old foreshadowing and insert new foreshadowing, he has to use a longer length of words to complete it. This should not be the author's wish to waste the word count, but Therefore, the author's level requires so many words to write well This phenomenon is especially obvious in girl groups. I didn't understand why until I read Chapter 201. I can only say that the author's screenwriting ability is still very good, but the writing style is still a bit weak.

I have finished 26 chapters so far I have come back from the first book and I want to say a few words about my feelings I feel that the pace is quite fast, the protagonist quickly establishes his position, and there are no traditional nonsense like quitting the team, which is good The protagonist is not a brainless fight, but he has not been cowardly. I feel that the image is established It can be seen that he wants to dig a big hole. Joining the team should be an entry point Introducing the plot lines of each female protagonist, and there are obvious signs of digging holes in many places. But it may be a last resort in a newcomer's book The female character's personal line is quite exciting, just don't be clichéd. Let's see if we can write something different The misalignment of information between the male and female protagonists is also interesting, but it still feels a bit rushed in some places. Although this thing is quite cliché, it will look good if it is written. Let's see if we can write it in the future The most important thing about Invincible Style is not fighting, but interacting with various people and things. I hope you won't be biased in the follow-up I'll remind you of some poisonous points in advance. Don't try to balance the pressure of the battle. Everyone just wants to see the protagonist's invincibility. You know In short, it's pretty good. I got some of the jokes in it. It gets better after more than ten chapters. Keep the level and don't drop I will definitely support the first subscription That's all. I'll release twenty chapters tomorrow and you'll definitely be popular.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 200. I like Ji Jingxi the most at the moment. She is a young working woman who is very serious about work and relationships. She is also the most proactive. She is usually serious, but in front of the male protagonist, she is delicate and charming. She is a natural succubus. Does Lin Xingyao feel like a female? But so far, I have never played a dungeon with the male protagonist. It's very embarrassing. I don't even know how she fights. I want to see her and the male protagonist play the dungeon alone. Practicing swordsmanship on the rooftop is indeed very romantic. I used to read other novels and always thought about changing the perspective. Thank you to the author for satisfying me with this one. One thing can be rewritten from several different perspectives. It is indeed written very carefully and all details can be taken into consideration. I am also very satisfied with it. For example, Shuang Lanlan's new mobile phone can be mentioned repeatedly: she is happy to receive the mobile phone; her thoughts after being seen by Yue Qing; her thoughts after being seen by Lin Xingyao. Can be mentioned repeatedly from various angles. Very detailed and realistic writing. But it's really too boring. . . My wife is so bored. It's only been a few days since the 200th chapter, so it's really not suitable for reading. Moreover, there are often various misunderstandings in the plot, many, many misunderstandings, and because the author writes so carefully, I have to write a lot more to resolve the misunderstandings, reconcile with this person, and reconcile with that person. Of course the author can resolve the misunderstanding in just a few chapters, which is better than many other novels. I don't object to the protagonist changing into a female body later on, but I thought I was going to use a female body to kill a lot of people, but ended up killing a few gangsters? It's boring, I don't want to hang out even if I have a clone. And the author also has to write about a lot of female characters meeting this person and meeting that person, this person guessing her identity, and that person guessing her relationship with the male protagonist. Luo Liba is talking a lot of nonsense. In short, it's too boring, so just write "I used Bai Yu's clone to find Brother Qin, and beat him down, and then went to the hospital to accompany my teammates, and gave them a meeting gift. As for the relationship, I just said that I am a Chinese teacher." You can finish several chapters in a few sentences. However, Yue Qing in these chapters is quite cute, so this cannot be omitted. The writing is very good and I highly recommend it, but the plot is not very exciting. I don't see how the male protagonist enjoys it. He feels aggrieved everywhere. He didn't fight enough and doesn't want to let go. After the fight, he has to go around explaining that he is not Ye Wuxing. I am tired of him not bothering me. This male protagonist is really frustrated, and if it weren't for the aura of the protagonist, several people in the harem would have died long ago.

The writing is quite good so far, and it looks like the kind of person with the power of shadow. If the flow of quitting the team is like a valve releasing floods, the beginning is the best, but after the middle period, the stamina is weak. This kind of team-joining article focuses more on daily plot design and team member interaction, which is a test of the author's skills. I just don't know if the author can control the degree of pretending that the protagonist is sexy in the later stage. If he doesn't control the degree of enjoyment, it will easily plummet.

The protagonist is a rare type. He just wants to slowly experience the life he wants: he won't stop eating beef because of external things, and he doesn't want to become the kind of peerless expert who can't stand up to the cold. The protagonist won't hide his strength too deliberately. If someone asks, at any rate, his reply is: " "The strength that can be exposed on the surface" I don't say well about the girl group, they are all classic female channel characters, but the protagonist probably doesn't want to have a harem, but just wants to cultivate a strong team. How does the author deal with the one-sided (?) Emotions of the girl group? There are no clues yet The plot generally has no intellectual plots or sloppy phenomena. Some of the intellectual decreases can be regarded as within the reasonable range of human negligence. It can be seen that the author wants to avoid that kind of bloody drama with zero IQ. The plot is quite serious and rigorous in conception The disadvantage is that the author's "Team Battle" + "Continuous Battle" are very poor. Whenever multiple people and multiple lines are going on at the same time, you have to be more tolerant of the chaotic scene, and when the plots are superimposed... It can only be said that it is the same as cooking: "If the order is right, it will be delicious, but if it is wrong, it will become a mess." (The only spoiler I can give is: the "materials" prepared by the author in 108 and 109 are very good - I can see that the author's idea really wants to avoid pitfalls, but the order and technique are a bit hypertensive) Hey, continue to observe... I almost couldn't stand it and wanted to give up the book because of 108 and 109, but when I saw the content at the end, it became normal again, so I continued to observe.

I feel like watching the plot of Little Days anime which is full of introductions.

After reading two chapters, I quit and checked the platform... Today's light taste is too good, 99%. The author has read a lot

After seeing the battle between Tiantianhua, I will think about the plot. This book has major problems in the underlying logic and the protagonist's character. Skills are at full level. At present, all skills are at full level except for some unique skills or special skills, but this is my speculation. In fact, this is a trouble-free writing method by the author, but in this plot, the problem is big. Assuming that the basic skills are at full level, are the skills such as deception and inducement considered to be skills? Are they already at full level? If so, why not rely on yourself? Of course, to put it bluntly, the motivation is insufficient. As far as cooking is concerned, if you want to make money, you don't need to fight for high-level authority, at least you don't have to be so anxious. Of course, the author also patched this area in the first dungeon. The reason is that the protagonist loves adventure. To be honest, the time is too late, but it can still be considered rounded off. In fact, this part of the plot is to introduce the heroines. We will talk about this later, but first let's talk about maxing out skills. The protagonist's ability is essentially inflated when the skills are fully leveled. Newcomers are actually not suitable to write invincible. The reason is very simple. Power needs to be expressed through the plot. If the performance is not good, no matter how awesome the setting is, it will become a joke. Even if you only have the basic skills at full level, you still need to write a plot worthy of this setting, otherwise you will be dragging down the protagonist, which will lead to poisonous points. In addition, there is insufficient setting for the skill level. In fact, special skills also appeared in the first copy. This is obviously a patch. If the author had thought about it from the beginning, he would have described it when the skill is at full level. It is obviously used as motivation and to make some growth fun. From this point of view, the initial setting is actually a bit of a failure. The protagonist is not suitable for knowing too much information. It would be better to set it as someone who has heard of famous bugs but does not know much about the game itself. This allows readers and the protagonist to understand the information simultaneously. At least this patch will not be so obvious. Now let's talk about the protagonist joining the heroine team. The same motivation is not found well. Let's just talk about a simple fact. If the protagonist is so awesome, why doesn't he go out to show himself to others? It's still a setting problem. This problem is connected with the problem of special skills. Why doesn't the protagonist go to others to show himself to solve his dilemma? Black accounts are not a problem. With the protagonist's ability, if he shows up and joins the force, there will naturally be people to help solve it, so why not do it? The first instinct is not to join the force, so why not? Because the protagonist is not invincible because there are special skills, but the special skills do not hinder the protagonist. After all, the protagonist can learn them, so why not do them? Because you are afraid of causing trouble with the villains of the protagonist's family, and because of the existence of special skills, you cannot guarantee that you are completely invincible, which is much more reasonable. Of course, this is a problem set by the author's own main plot. Since I have mentioned the problem, I will briefly give some suggestions for modification. Just take a look. Modify the character and motivation of the protagonist. In terms of character, I will not comment on the character. I will just talk about the motivation. Change it from coincidence to purposeful approach. If you take revenge as the main line to clear your grievances, you can join the heroine team in a reasonable way. At the same time, you will have sufficient reasons to take the initiative to gain the favor of the heroines. Then help the heroine investigate, while using the heroine, investigate his own affairs, and then initially understand the people in the association who are not enemies, such as the heroine's mother. After that, we can further cooperate and gain the favor of the heroine and her family while eliminating the moths. This is a very clear and clear main line.

In fact, if you look at the introduction, it is essentially an invincible article. It has four different directions: daily harem nanny quitting the team, and the final ending of a big war. It's all written like this.

I've seen Chapter 161. It's good to watch, but some aspects of the plot are a bit jarring, whether it's the accidents caused by "bad luck" that can be created to advance the plot, or the sexual transformation caused by "bugs". I found half of a caterpillar inside after eating, which means my diaphragm has arrived. A coincidence is a coincidence, and a bunch of coincidences come together to create a crisis. It's hard not to criticize and forcefully create a crisis. You said that the villain has a high IQ and has a back-up plan. I've tolerated it, but the result is that the protagonist team has been stupid many times. Multiple coincidences come together to create a crisis. It's true that people can't love the heroine. I want to watch it now, but I feel a little uncomfortable. I don't know what to say.

There are too many characters, are they distinctive, it's too confusing, why not cut it and re-open it with the same theme?

What does it mean to suddenly add a lesbian?

Where do you get Japanese light novels from? It feels like Japan's otherworldly adventure is elbowing me again.

Some settings are indeed not good enough, but compared to many literary and youth books, it falls into the category of readable. In my opinion, the highlight of this book is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroines and the development of their characters. If it is well written, it will not be bad. As well as evaluating whether there are any problems in writing your own book, focus on your background data and analyze the areas where the data is poor combined with comments. A lot of authors who blindly change their books after reading reviews have died.

The two-dimensional flavor of the explosion 😆

Tj's silence? No one asked in the comment section?

Doesn't the protagonist's initial attributes of 0 mean he is dead?

Wudi Wen still suffers every day 😥

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and to be honest, the author's writing is okay. The protagonist is invincible, the heroines are not vassals, the plot is relatively rigorous, and the villains are not clever. But it just feels a bit depressing. There are too many enemies. The orthodox villains are enemies, and the official organizations are almost all potential enemies. Even the official organizations are almost all potential enemies. Other heroines' family members are all enemies, and there are too few positive characters. Although the protagonist is invincible, the problem can only be solved when the enemy causes an incident. Personally, I prefer the protagonist to understand the incident in advance and organize people to kill it before it happens. Of course, this is just a personal preference, and the author does not need to care. But I agree with a comment in the comment area. With more than 100 chapters of plot, the proportion of adventure and strategy copies is a bit small. The impressions are almost all about the power struggle between the protagonist or heroine and the villain.

I have such a big update~ Why is it gone? I don't have any silly material these days.

No one cares anymore...

Meow meow meow? Meow?

I had no hope at first, but I didn't expect to survive. Just give me two monthly passes.

There is no need to worry about whether Ye Wuxing is the male protagonist, because it can only be, otherwise it will be even more disgusting. For example, if Ye Wuxing is the clone that the male protagonist threw into the abyss before, the male protagonist is at least just vulgar, not the male protagonist is purely disgusting.

I'm going to update it 😫

The theme is ancient and the plot is anti-routine

It's quite a fate to meet you in the vast sea of ​​books. I hope we have a chance to meet you again next time.

Meow Meow Meow

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