Game of Thrones: Starting by Summoning the Dragon Queen

The biggest flaw in this novel is that the protagonist's overpowered abilities are too much, but the overpowered abilities the author gives to the enemies are even more outrageous. For example, there's the headshot lock-on ability, the long-range accuracy cheat (the crossbow can hit a moving target from hundreds of meters away), and the morale lock-on ability (nine out of ten mercenaries will…

Is this still Western fantasy? What's with this "head instructor" and "big boss's only son" stuff? It's got a whole martial arts feel to it; a proper knight should be written as a bandit...

Legend of Aurora

The plot is exaggerated, and the "manifesting a living person" trope is a major flaw! A smart person wouldn't summon a hero in front of others; at the very least, the hero should walk over from a distance. Also, the currency system is poorly designed! Giving away tons of gold coins is a bad idea; it makes gold coins seem worthless!

The opening naval battle was terrifying; plate-armored, heavily armored swordsmen were being torn to shreds by swift swordsmen with their armor-piercing attacks. The protagonist, after all, had studied Meyer's swordsmanship—was this how your Meyer taught you to fight lightly armored enemies?

It's better than a typical light novel, but the logical flaws are too numerous. The initial ship battles are mindless, and points are too easy to obtain. Moreover, each point increases an attribute, which is simply overpowered. The combat power will collapse in the mid-to-late game.

In the medieval context, if you could produce sugar, you could just sell it directly. Making Coca-Cola would be redundant. Moreover, it would be out of touch with modern society. Large-scale production and transportation would be problems. Ordinary people were too poor to afford Coca-Cola. If you relied on nobles, even if they were to drink more, they wouldn't be able to drink much.

After reading dozens of chapters, all I can say is, wow, Game of Thrones is about the intrigue, backstabbing, and power struggles among nobles. Political intrigue is the main theme; the title itself is Game of Thrones. This fanfiction, however, portrays the protagonist as simply slaughtering his way through a low-magic world in a high-magic world, with absolutely no political maneuvering—just…

Your assessment of the average soldier's tolerance for casualties is severely unrealistic. Militia or bandit gangs typically collapse after losing 10% of their troops in a short period, mercenary groups experience mass desertions after losing 20%, and regular legions also see frequent desertions after losing 30%.

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