Game of Thrones: The Black Dragon King

You've managed to write about a Faceless Man and create the illusion that he's an immortal god with teleportation abilities. Please, the Faceless Man is simply an assassin who uses a mask to carry out assassinations, not some god who can indiscriminately kill through armies without dying...

If you can't write a novel, don't write one. It starts off well, but then the plot stalls, so the author relentlessly suppresses the protagonist, making him too coerced by Damon to resist. It takes three months to conquer a city, and the author frantically strengthens his opponents and suppresses the protagonist from every angle. Luckily, I haven't subscribed yet.

Advantages: Dragons provide fast and powerful attacks. Weaknesses: The introduction claims it's just about shared interests, but so far it seems more like Damon and the Targaryens' dogs.

What kind of Faceless One are you? Hassan is more like it. If this plot isn't changed, Bao will die a violent death.

1. How far can a person see when riding a dragon at high altitude? Especially since the protagonist also brought a telescope. - 100 meters above the ground: can see ≈35.7 Kilometers - 500 meters above the ground: can see ≈79.8 Kilometers - 1000 meters above the ground: can see ≈112.9 Kilometers - 2000 meters above the ground: can see ≈159.6 Kilometers

Author, you haven't read the original work, have you? If the Faceless Men are so awesome, what's going on with the Targaryens?

The protagonist stays in the stronghold he built using the system. The system soldiers are all there, and there is also a function to mark enemies in red. But! Our supreme and most powerful faceless man directly chases and kills the protagonist! 🙂 Throw a smoke bomb in the middle and you can teleport out of thin air from the siege of the army. You can teleport three or four times!

The beginning was great, but unfortunately, after the Faceless Ones appeared and attempted to assassinate the protagonist, practically killing him in the middle of the army... The quality plummeted, there were almost no satisfying moments, and it became almost like an AI-driven story. What a pity.

The faceless man can attack the army alone

They'd already amassed a huge army, so it was bound to be a wish-fulfillment story. But after chapter 20, it disgusted me. Just one Faceless One made the protagonist look like a dog. If they added two or three more protagonists, would they just die already?