Cultivation: From Insect Master to Ancestor of the Immortal Sect

Insects, I wonder if the author still remembers the five insects in the real and fake Monkey King in Journey to the West? The "Five Insects" is not a Buddhist term, but the ancient people's understanding of living things. The ancients divided animals into five categories, namely feather insects (poultry), caterpillars (beasts), and intermediary insects (later often called beetles, referring to insects with shells and aquatic animals <such as shellfish, Crabs, turtles, etc.), Scale insects (fish, lizards, snakes and other scaly animals, including winged insects), and worms (also called worms, which means hairless, refers to frogs, earthworms, etc.), Collectively called "Five Insects" (from Baidu).

First, the author of your golden finger-made insect, can you use your brain more and give it a nicer name? I don't ask you to be like Master Gu, where the insect has a system and a story background, but the bunch of diseases in the fairy tales are always a little tasteless; Second, can you name it better? My bugs should be written more clearly about class promotion and mark the classes; Thirdly, the golden finger 100 spirit stones to change the longevity of the bugs does not look very good. It is written like refining Gu, or combining the cultivation method with the cells in the body, or combining the search for strange objects, which is good.

The eagle is called the Little Divine Phoenix The phoenix can live for 70,000 days without hurting its eyes, but the eagle can be seriously injured for 70,000 days per day

The plot after going down the mountain is difficult to describe in one sentence. It's not that it's not good, but it just doesn't match the previous style of painting. The front is the style of immortality and immortality, and the back is the fantasy style.

Lots of typos, rubbish novel

The male protagonist is still at the fourth level of Qi training, and he is still the cannon fodder at the lowest level. Now his cultivation limits the development of the plot. The civilization of cultivating immortals also takes a technological approach, which makes it even more difficult for you to write about.

After it was put on the shelves, I kept talking about it, and the water flooded the golden mountain.

The third chapter is not very well written. You know that he will die from lack of water, but you still kill him. When you kill him, you know that he may have a backup plan, and you still show up in front of the enemy. In the end, you win the war mainly by bombing. The randomness is too strong. I suggest you modify it here.

What's going on in Chapter 125? Why are there so many typos? I'm tired of catching bugs from the beginning, so I'm too lazy to catch them in the next paragraph (¯―¯٥)

The combat power and economy are not logical at all, the theme is okay, but the hang-up is too big.