The World of Gods: It Begins with the Mechanical Throne

This is outrageous! The protagonist is kind-hearted and can't bear to see soldiers die, so he just runs away? What kind of writing is this? Are you even Chinese?

There's a question: why did they steal your precious pearl? There wasn't even an explanation. Even if there are good and bad people in this global time-travel story, at least people don't do things without a reason. Why offend someone if there's nothing in it for them? Are all the other characters besides the protagonist just idiots with zero intelligence and a hundred percent greed?

You've written about Shenji Bailian like a mechanical engineer; understand Shenji Bailian before you start writing.

To be honest, after reading only two or three chapters, I'm already certain this novel will have a terrible ending. The reason is the protagonist's personality and abilities, which have huge problems. Why isn't the eight-legged mechanical dog called a mechanical spider? Even the name is wrong! And how is the protagonist able to create them? What's the principle behind it?

His character is no longer reliable; his previous two books, including the one on his alternate account, were both abandoned.

How is it possible for the villain to recruit 50 people? There are also healing professionals and support professionals.

The book is alright; the current quality is similar to that of Zerg. The downsides are some repetition and a bit wordy. Hopefully, it will improve in the future. If not, maintaining the current quality will still be readable (after all, there aren't many novels to read these days).

The synopsis said it was a novel with tens of millions of words, so I had no intention of reading it. I know why.

Aside from the frequent updates, everything else is incredibly addictive. 😰

My sister is truly awful; I don't know why I wrote this, it's just disgusting.