I Can See Danger Alerts

Let me talk about my feelings. There are only 5 danger warnings in the first chapter. This is too frequent. It is so dangerous in the sect. How can ordinary disciples survive? This is the same as many simulation articles. All dangers are directed at the protagonist. It will be fine for others, but the protagonist will die. He will die purely for the sake of death.

When you see this name, you can imagine how tired the male protagonist is. It is impossible for a normal person to have so many crises. You are deliberately writing about crises for the sake of writing. Seriously.

I've read the first five chapters now. Let me tell you a little problem. The protagonist is inside the mountain gate. Are the dangers encountered a bit too much? And many of these dangers are particularly dangerous. Like a broken arm? Death! I had vomiting and diarrhea for seven days. Fight with the leopard! Is there too much danger within this mountain gate? There are elders from the master's sect. I have a fellow sect member who is also an immortal cultivator. Even if the leisure level is low, there are so many dangers within the mountain gate. Even if there is more danger, the consequences are too serious. Although it is said that novels cannot pursue reasonableness, hey, I always feel that it is unreasonable.

One word: water; two words: long-winded. I don't know how I persisted in reading these dozens of chapters. Although the content and plot are a bit contradictory, I can still read it. It is this matter that can be understood in one sentence, but it is broken into half a chapter and written in half a chapter. One sentence can be repeated ten times in one chapter, and it can be written in seven or eight chapters. Author, is it because of your personality that you are naturally so long-winded, or are you trying to reduce the number of words?

Spiritual fusion gives birth to a child. 6. To read this book together, do I have to read your last book? ? The content is okay, but the operation is disgusting. This is what I think, you can see for yourself.

I really don't understand. An empire allows everyone to practice magical powers, but then the protagonist doesn't practice, and the supporting characters don't practice either. So why write about him? Why not just make a paper human Taoist soldier who doesn't care about magical powers? Don't understand

What a world, the Immortal Qin Empire, the stunning empress. Don't be afraid to kill yourself! Then you can't control it and collapse! Write well, be down-to-earth, and don't create so much messy crap. Is a good book a bigger world than it is? Why write so much game background?

To be honest, the bullshit I wrote was not a waste of my two hours. Did you go and read it yourself after finishing the coding? I suggest the author read it himself first.

Can the main character's name not be the same as the last book?

Can you please stop writing the spell? There is a reason why your book got poor grades.