I Can See Danger Alerts

To be honest, five danger warnings appeared in just the first chapter alone, which is way too frequent. If it's this dangerous even within the sect, how can ordinary disciples survive? It's like many simulation novels where all the dangers seem to be aimed at the protagonist. Everyone else is fine, but the protagonist dies—it's like the protagonist is just there to die.

Seeing this title, you can imagine how exhausted the male protagonist is. A normal person couldn't possibly face so many crises. If you deliberately wrote crises just for the sake of writing, it's pointless, honestly.

I've read the first five chapters. I have a minor issue to point out. The protagonist is inside the mountain gate. Aren't there just too many dangers he encounters? And several of these dangers are extremely serious. Like losing an arm? Death! Seven days of vomiting and diarrhea! Fighting a leopard! Aren't there just too many dangers within this one mountain gate?

One word: padding; two words: verbose. I don't know how I even managed to finish these dozens of chapters. While the plot is somewhat contradictory and illogical, it's still readable. The problem is that things that could be understood in a single sentence are stretched out into half a chapter, with a single phrase repeated ten times or so, enough for seven or eight chapters. Is this just your personality, your natural tendency to be verbose, or are you just padding the word count?

Spiritual union leads to having children. 6. So, to read this book, do I also have to read your previous one? The content is fine, it's just the execution that's disgusting. This is just my opinion; you can see for yourselves.

Honestly, I don't understand. An empire gives everyone supernatural powers to cultivate, and then what? The protagonist doesn't cultivate, and neither do the supporting characters. What's the point of writing about them? Just because they have paper dolls and Taoist soldiers doesn't mean they value supernatural powers? I don't get it.

Damn it, countless worlds, the Immortal Qin Empire, a peerless empress. Aren't you afraid of ruining yourself? And then you can't control it, and it collapses! Write properly, be down-to-earth, don't create so much messy garbage. Does the quality of a book depend on which world is bigger? Why write so much game background?

To be honest, this is utter rubbish. It was a waste of two hours of my time. Did the author even bother to check it after finishing it? I suggest the author take a look first.

Could you please not use the same name as the main character in the previous book?

Could you please not write out the incantation? There's a reason why your grades aren't good.