I Have a Deck of Destiny Cards

The writing is rather protracted, a crew-by-crew story. The content is okay, but it's just too watery.

Su Geng, can't sleep at night, The writing is not bad, food and grass, you can read it

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When the royal family does not abide by the rules, everyone in the noble family will be in danger. They will either sacrifice everything to please the royal family or secretly develop their own force until they explode at a certain point. In the former, you are a dog. But no one should want to be a dog even if they are nobles. It is very unreasonable. Conflicts are for the sake of conflict. In the extraordinary world, are you not afraid that one day the prince will be killed? If you are decent, everyone will be decent. If you are not decent, people will not play decent with you. Pirates have their own rules. If only the boss is popular and the others eat the leftovers, the leftovers may be snatched away by the boss one day. Then pirates should stop doing it. This is human nature. It has nothing to do with your example. Or you can give a historical example of someone who has done this for a long time.

The first 12 chapters are okay, but I'm speechless in chapter 13. Is it necessary? It's not a personal experience. I just want to avenge the original owner. Why are you so angry? 😥 If you want to say that you had a miscarriage and your whole family was wiped out, I understand that you are so angry, but you are not the same.

Guardian Angel: A holy sword with the power of divine protection, and its attacks will cause divine damage. Every three hundred days of accumulation of protective power, one resurrection can be performed. When holding this sword, you will gain "angel's protection" and be immune to curses and dark erosion, improving all aspects of defense. Death Hat of the World Destroyer: After accompanying Morello to destroy the continent, this hat gained infinite power of death. Wearing this hat can greatly enhance one's own magic power, but it will continue to increase one's own desire for destruction. The hat will confuse the user and those around him to use black magic to kill and destroy. When casting a spell, the hat will sing in unison, strengthening the user's spell. Shuoji's Spear: The Green Dragon Sword has powerful attack power. With the help of this sword, the water flow can be controlled. When fighting underwater, the user can ignore the resistance of the water. Attacking the enemy can restore spirituality (the effect of the Blue Dragon Sword in Teamfight Tactics). The user can cast the buff spell "Awakening Dragon" once a day to enhance his strength and agility. Attacking the enemy can reduce the cooling time of his other spells, gain underwater breathing, and greatly enhance the control of water, which lasts for one hour. Box of the Iron Sun: A holy object of the Sun Sect, it can absorb and store sunlight. It can consume the power of the sun to release the spell "Piety", which allows all creatures with good intentions towards the user within a certain range to gain a shield. The more sunlight is consumed, the wider the coverage area. After wearing it, you will continue to receive the protection of the spell "Steel Sun", which can greatly improve your defense in all aspects and make you immune to fear. Crown of the Broken Queen: The crown that has been devoted to the magicians of the Kingdom of Kamavia has the power to isolate all harm and can strengthen spiritual power. The constant spell "Guard" can summon the royal soul to guard and resist attacks. After the guard barrier is broken, it needs to be meditated again to recover. It will automatically recover after being separated from the owner for one day. Mage's Boots: The magic boots necessary for the Archmage, which can strengthen spirituality, greatly increase the speed of spiritual recovery, and improve the penetrating ability of spells. The Plate Armor of the Dead: The golden plate armor inherited from ancient times, the wearer can greatly increase the movement speed. Comes with the spell "Shipwrecker", which increases the wearer's momentum when moving. Accumulating momentum can increase the movement speed. When the momentum is full, the next attack will be greatly increased. Attacks on the hull can cause additional damage. This spell can be added to vehicles. Comes with the spell "Unsinkable", which reduces all deceleration effects and can be applied to vehicles. Bander Glass Mirror: A teleportation mirror made by the Yodels. The user can use special gestures to open the door passage and teleport through the mirror. The user can use gestures to travel back and forth between the passages by consuming spiritual energy. Holding this mirror can slightly increase spirituality and spiritual recovery speed. Staff of Time (Infinite Convergence): Kieran's staff has the power of time and has the characteristics of two gods. Characteristic: "Infinite". Holding this staff will increase your life and spirituality tomorrow. There is no upper limit. Characteristic "eternal", holding this staff, when the spirituality is lost, the life will be traced back, and when the life is lost, the spirituality will be traced back. Astral Drive: Can enhance life and spirituality, increase spell casting speed and movement speed. Curse Dance, using spells to damage the enemy and greatly increase your own movement speed. Space shuttle, after activation, it enters the astral state and ignores physical attacks.

It is a traditional aristocratic revenge novel in a fantasy sailing world. It has a smooth and reasonable start, completely explaining the background of the novel world and paving the way for the subsequent plot. The protagonist's values ​​​​with a sense of modern civilization are integrated with the moral concepts of the story world, and the gradual character of the character is very natural. The most outstanding thing is the setting of the protagonist's plug-in, which continuously and slightly improves the protagonist's combat power and logistics capabilities. It is reasonable and makes readers full of expectations. The addition of new partners also has a certain and reasonable plot promotion. Overall, it is a good article with a score of 90 or above. I will definitely vote for this book in my monthly vote this month.

What is a lord? He is the owner of a private territory. Not to mention the assets, even the population belongs to the lord. How do you still divide state-owned assets and the lord's private property? There was no problem originally, but it's strange that you can't figure out the problem by dividing it like this. For example, all your family's money is yours, but you say that you want to divide half of the money for everyone to keep together. The end result is that your money becomes everyone's money. You want to use this money to develop the village and build village roads, but everyone disagrees. If you want to develop the village, you can only use the other half of your private money. Those who really do big things must be consistent in their words. After all, people have selfish motives. Your goal may not be everyone else's goal. Even if the goal is the same, the route may be different. Take building a village road as an example. Where to start building it, when to start building it, where to build it, and whose house it passes through are all issues. You might as well just pay for it privately from the beginning. After all, although everyone adds firewood and the flames are high, there is also a saying that three monks have no water to eat. The division of state-owned assets and lord assets to develop the territory mentioned in your book is also the same. Besides, even if the territory develops very well, everyone will think that it is a state-owned asset that has nothing to do with your lord. It is not you who pays for everyone to live a good life. It is completely thankless. Isn't this the truth?

If the link is too large, the readability will actually become lower and lower. The most unacceptable thing is that the maid Anna and the female pirate are written very well in the first part. They have very distinct personalities. The more they write later, they become more and more out of shape and stereotyped. They are always waiting for the protagonist to push them down or wishing to push the protagonist over.

The author has made it clear that don't even think about the harem. If you come here for the harem, you can leave as soon as you see my post.

Ahhhh, I have always wanted to read the biological growth type battleship voyage novel, but I have never found it. I don't have the ability to write it myself, so I won't talk about it anymore. Please vote for all the people who have the votes. Come on!

List of cards that have appeared so far. Main card: Card of Destiny, card ultimate move. Derivative cards: 1. Stealth attack: red attack card. 2. Magic Seed: Yellow Equipment Card. The seeds of the Magic House, Battleship. 3. Ignite: Purple Witchcraft Card. ……

This distribution method is too outrageous. These people themselves are useless and some slaves. The protagonist's situation is obviously more suitable for taking the elite route. Moreover, this distribution method is as ridiculous as if you open a company and recruit a cleaner, and then give the cleaner equity shares within three days.

I have seen more than a hundred of them, and to be honest, this novel is a bit dangerous. The protagonist has more and more good things, and the protagonist takes all the benefits, and it is easy to collapse later. Secondly, the treasures do not serve the plot, but the plot serves the treasures. In a short plot, the protagonist can get two or three good things. How to write this later, it is too greedy.

If the derivative card is given to others, the protagonist can destroy it at will with his mind, right? This setting is good to prevent betrayal

Isn't the anti-theft work very good?😠

Isn't it good to farm the land? Your island just started to open up wasteland and suddenly it went to the New World to enclose land. Is this how it is written about farming? A hammer in the east and a hoe in the west. I can write everything, but I can't write anything well.

Hello, author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to buy a new car and buy a house. I hope you can keep up the good work and update a few more chapters. Don't affect my income and plans, and don't make my readers anxious. Thank you. (The dog's head saves life)

The author still lacks control, but he could actually write better. There is no need to be afraid of being too big, as long as the author has enough control and can expand the world view, the development benchmark template can use the Immortal Qin Empire and the Netheril Empire, and the world template can use the Heavens. But as a refreshing novel, the most successful thing about this book is that it is easy and refreshing to read. I followed it until the end. Unlike many other books, the more you read, the more tired you become. When you are halfway through or near the end, you are too tired to read anymore. I hope that the next one will be better written and keep the relaxed and pleasant style the best. Come on.

It's a bit too holy. The pig's feet seem to have no cost and are all given for free. There are many thigh-hugging pendants on the ship, and the treatment is also high. The money is given without buying people's hearts. It's said as if they deserve it.

Although you say it needs to be original, you said in your introduction that you have alliance skills and equipment. After all, you still can't go off topic and you should still add some alliance stuff. Equipment - Flaming Scimitar: Eternal Enchantment - Fiery Interrogation: Every fifteen minutes, the scimitar will generate a curse of fire, which will continue to burn the enemy's life and spirituality after hitting the enemy, and temporarily increase its own agility attribute. Eternal Enchantment - Fire Drain: Drain fire to replenish curse energy. Equipment - Collector: A firearm that can automatically enchant bullets (attack special effects), and has the eternal enchantment - Death and Taxes: enemies with less than 5% health can be directly killed by attacking. Knowledge - How to grow healing citrus: How to grow healing citrus on a boat, citrus can heal the spirit. Knowledge - How to make a powder barrel bomb: It can create a powder barrel with powerful explosive power. The powder barrel can easily destroy armor and ships. Item: Anxin Fire Back Furnace Mirio's back furnace is engraved with the elemental axiom of flame. The Anxin Fire in the furnace gave birth to the fire elemental spirit "Fire Treasure". With the help of the Fire Treasure, you can cast spells, and the Fire Treasure can also assist in alchemy. Knowledge: The Alchemist Baron's Manual The manual recording Lenata's core technology, including a variety of alchemy potions and weapon making techniques. Weapon: Osiresh's Whip Sword Use it by the water to absorb the water and turn it into a whip sword. Due to the lack of the divine seal of the Joy Demon Osiresh (the magic ball around Nila's waist), using this whip in arid areas requires consuming your own spirituality. This whip can directly damage the opponent regardless of the enemy's defense. Spell: Holy Mist Gwen has the ability to control "Holy Mist". This is a protective spell from ancient times. Her scissors, needles and sutures are all blessed by the holy mist. Weapon: Double-sided poison blade A dagger with poison and black magic. It has the characteristics: "Backstabber" attacks the enemy from behind and will definitely cause a critical hit to the internal organs. Knowledge: How to make the Scary Box The Scary Box will automatically become invisible after being placed. It will automatically open when it encounters those who approach it, creating the illusion that the enemy is most afraid of, and constantly releasing poisonous stingers. Spell: Deception Magic Able to teleport over short distances, become invisible after teleportation, and temporarily enhance one's own strength. Torch Staff A staff that preserves the eternal flame. It is indestructible and the holder can gain immortality. The eternal flame protects its owner from erosion and corruption from the outside world. Knowledge: Soul Blade Forging Method The secret method of the Kinkou Sect, using the power of one's own soul to create a soul blade. With the soul blade, one can travel through the spiritual world, and the soul blade can protect one's own soul from infringement. Weapon: Relic Pistol An ancient relic that can breathe out the flames of holy light and can restrain undead creatures, evil spirits and demons. Rare Item: Golden Dragon Egg The golden egg of the Dragon God can randomly hatch a giant dragon among the following dragon types. The dragon is bound to itself and shares one of the dragon's talents. (Star Dragon, Golden Scale Dragon, Jade Dragon, Storm Dragon, Illusion Dragon, Dark Spirit Dragon, Giant Rock Dragon, Blue Wave Dragon, Shadow Dragon, Angry Winged Dragon.)

I don't have a problem with having a female protagonist But if there is a harem, I will curse because I have already paid to watch it

Chapter 90 divides the spoils, which feels a bit too idealistic First, in Chapter 90, the mastermind behind the scenes is the mini-boss killed by the protagonist himself, right? And not including killing so many sea beasts before finding the boss, and spending five drops of life potion to save people after the battle, let alone the battle, just these five drops of life potion can be said to be very expensive, right? The protagonist said that I want a piece of flesh and blood and a vest that can be restored. Second, the author didn't write it clearly. It feels like the protagonist uses his share of the loot to buy materials to refine things, and then uses them in the war to capture the loot. The protagonist uses his share of the loot to buy materials, and then the crew's share of the loot is theirs to control.

After more than 200 chapters, I feel that the author has gone astray. He went on a great voyage and suddenly started farming. This is just a base area after all. But before the first base area is built, he builds a second base area on another continent. This is too nonsense. What is the purpose and significance? Aren't you afraid of others attacking? If you are not afraid, it means you are basically invincible. In fact, it can be seen that your combat power is about to collapse. If level 7 is fighting against level 3 or level 4, you can still win with such a big difference. You can win relatively easily. Although you rely on props, there are no restrictions on the use of props, so your combat power has collapsed.

There are too many comments to reply to all, please forgive me. Any punctuation marks, misuse of idioms or typos will be corrected one by one. Plots that are more controversial will be optimized and adjusted as much as possible. Because of the chain reaction, the plot cannot be changed significantly, so please be patient.

Come on, come on

It's great. My whole family dies at the beginning. I want to avenge my parents and kill the second prince. That means destroying the kingdom, destroying all its allies, and destroying the righteous gods because they are unjust. A book like this is probably about escaping, becoming stronger, chasing, becoming stronger, and chasing. 🙃🙃

I didn't pay attention to the comment section. I clicked in and read it myself. I thought it was very good. It was considered a relaxing article. Although there was a big feud in the beginning, there was no depressing feeling of walking on thin ice, which was really good.

That one is too short. I looked at the author's previous books. I can't read this one. The characters in the plot are awkward. The pet's name is wow. It's so awkward that I can't read it.

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