Immortality: Starting from Meeting the Fox Girl

Doesn't it look like Xiaoyi Look at this

The writing is too deliberate and the emotions are too raw.

I have read a lot of novels. The writing style of this book is very interesting. It is completely different from those modern fast-food novels. It has a traditional ancient charm of Ming and Qing dynasty novels. Every line of the words reveals the author's understanding of Chinese classical culture and strong literary skills. Reading this kind of plain and retro fairy-seeking novel is like practicing calligraphy, word by word. Read carefully and read carefully. It is absolutely not advisable to skip reading like a gulp. Not only can it not fit into the story, but it will also gradually lose patience due to the dull process. It is a waste of the author's well-intentioned carving of the text. I hope the author can have the patience to write slowly in the later period, try to maintain the charm of the text, and finally create a "Yangchunbaixue" 😄

Is this book a eunuch? Why haven't I updated in 11 days?

The writing is very beautiful, and the pulse beating between the words is deeply rooted in the heart, but it is like fine chaff. It is not enough to eat to satisfy hunger, but it is a pity to abandon it.

The author was yelled at? Update

The author hasn't updated for so long. When will you update the next chapter?

It's not like this is a joke. Even if it's bad, you still have to give it an ending.

When will the author update the next chapter?

When will the author update the next chapter? Even if you don't follow, please let us know.

I have read Chapter 124. When will the next chapter be updated?

Please reply from the author, when will the next chapter be updated?

The writing is very strange, a bit like the early stage of "Lanke", but the writing style is a bit light, and I always feel that some parts are not implemented properly, and it feels like I don't dare to use force when shitting.

Like the title

This book reminds me of Lan Ke Qi Yuan, which is the kind of fairy spirit that is somewhat unpredictable. I remember someone said that Lan Ke Qi Yuan has been exaggerated, saying that it has no clear realm system and is too messy and vague. I can only say that if you follow those clear systems to upgrade realms and fight realms, wouldn't that be upgrading to fight monsters? Where does the fairy spirit come from? Lanke also has a realm, but it is indeed vague. This also makes it a fairy spirit. Although the quality of what is written later is down, it is undeniable that it really has a fairy spirit (a touch of pretentiousness)

The writing is really good. Could it be that some old eunuch was reincarnated?

Awesome, who are you? How could a newcomer write so well?

How can I put it, the style of writing has no intention of becoming a sage, but it is too holy. You can explain it appropriately. Harem writing must have the consciousness of the harem. We are not here to be sages.

1. It's not that your writing is bad, it's that if your writing style is so pretentious and mixed with romance, why don't you classify it as a light novel? What are you doing in the Xianxia category? Second, selling meat is too obvious and stretched too far. There should be something close, but what? What kind of feeling does this give people? It's the kind of short love story serials sold in bookstores in junior high and high schools that girls love to read. But it's not quite enough to have the kind of love and hate that lasts for a thousand years. 3. If you want to write something marginal, of course you can, but don't be too far-fetched. For example, your hanging settings are simple and powerful but very vague. Vagueness means that readers don't know how powerful you are after reading it. We can't let readers predict and give everyone a feeling. That is, it doesn't matter who the opponent is or what they will encounter, the author will cheat him. If he doesn't cheat, he will reverse it. 4. The plot you arranged may appear to you and not come to mind. First of all, it is said at the beginning that a fox can live for ten thousand years. After receiving feedback from the tree, his life span will be increased by a thousand years. Isn't it obvious that you are talking to yourself when you say that the gap between you and the fox is too big? Is the protagonist brainless? What's the difference? The protagonist has this kind of problem. It can be expected that there is no need to go to the immortal. He can just rely on the protection of the fox to develop a relationship with her or something. But you also want to make the protagonist have a brain, and turn it on when needed and turn it off when not needed? In short, there are many places, but many people have limited personal abilities, so I won't mention them one by one. 5. What is our goal in writing this? I just want to write what I want to write. There's no need to say more, I can only rate it as cool! If you want to write a fairy tale category, you also want to make some money. Then you have to upgrade the flow to be closer to the traditional Xianxia. The latest writing can be copied from a fast food restaurant. It doesn't mean whether they write better or worse or not. Is the type. That type definitely has rice to eat, but it must be of a certain level. And if you just want to make a lot of money and don't want to make a small amount of money on the sidelines of romance, then you have to write some epic novels or humorous novels. The epic novels The Devil Comes to the Sky with a Pure Heart are all of this type. There is so much rice written that you dare not even think about it. There is a market for humorous ones but it's not very clear. The second is to create your own genre. What mysterious resurgence of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, the Lord of Mysteries. 6. The above talks about what kind of article to write, but this one talks about how you need to understand your readers. What do we like to watch and how to write about it to increase the viscosity and make us feel refreshed and comfortable at the same time. There is also the need to cater to your audience readers. When you choose the Xianxia category, you need to know what kind of readers are here. Each of your settings is to select readers separately. What is poison is actually something that most readers who clicked in to read or are currently reading find it unacceptable. The difference is if your writing is good. Everyone can bear the small poison, but every thing that is different from your mainstream readers' novel reading habits, such as setting the world view, plot, etc., Will reduce the readers' desire to read further. 7. The reason why I say so much is that I feel like you have something but not much feeling. It's like you didn't write fairy novels at Qidian before. You are like the kind of romance novel website or the bloody novels serialized in some short magazines. It just gives people the feeling that you have your own set of fixed routines. In short, today when there is a shortage of online literature, readers are increasingly fond of reading high-quality novels. When you meet an author who hopes to write a high-quality book, you should comment on it and provide an opinion. The author may disagree or object. In short, it will provide you with an idea. It is good for you. It's also good for us. Hope to see you in the top ten of the monthly vote list in the future. Hhh slipped away.

A girl fell under a pool of blood, and her hands stained with blood were raised tremblingly. Under the dim light, the girl's expression was very painful, and her eyes were no longer as bright as before. She used her last bit of strength to squeeze out a sentence from between her teeth: "Quick... Update... New..."

The author is not a great writer. If I must say it, he is a small writer who came ashore. He was at sea before, but I feel that marginalia has never been what the author wanted to write. Although he likes to write it, readers also like to read it... I have read everyone's comments in the past few days, and the author is also reflecting on it. Some words are indeed too pretentious, and the author will gradually change. New book issue, reading is really important! Please read! If you think the book is good, you can catch up and put it on the shelves, and then save the book later. By then, the author will update it faster. The new book issue can only have two chapters a day. Thank you for your support, thank you everyone!

Is there a harem? If not, I won't watch it. If I don't watch the eunuch, don't say there is one. Then if you mention it after a few hundred chapters or near the end, it will be considered there.

Open the harem of yarn, I like to read Little H books so much, every time there are some crazy people commenting on the new book, threatening the author to abandon it if he doesn't open it, write his own style, and readers will come naturally when the writing is good.

It's strange. The writing is there, but the plot feels a bit deliberate. Judging from the previous chapters, the protagonist has never practiced spiritual practice or studied classics. Then he gives the tiger some mysterious advice, which makes me feel that the protagonist is not qualified. The protagonist can warn the tiger not to eat spiritual things, but why is it related to karma? Has the protagonist ever understood this world? He has never had any profound contact with the extraordinary in this world.

The journey of the protagonist and Yi Yi to Beijing to find immortals is very fairy-tale and heart-warming. It feels great to get to know spiritual beings on the way, intersperse short stories, get rewards, and gradually become immortals. However, there are still some flaws in the delivery of some characters and words 🤐1. For example, before Aunt Yiyi wrote that she really had love between men and women for the male protagonist, the male protagonist looked at the "beautiful man" in a daze, which should not be described as: a bit jealous. It might be better to "feel a little confused". 2. If Xunxian opens his spiritual wisdom and all things are equal, it will be the same as what the Snow Tiger Mountain God warned: Do not eat humans in the future. Based on the subjective idea that humans are immortals, it might be better if they cannot eat things that unlock spiritual intelligence 🤐

Since coming out of the mountain, the protagonist has been trying to pretend and hide some coins, and then the supporting characters will immediately attack themselves and praise them all. For example, in the painting of Saint Master Brothers, the protagonist inexplicably pretends to use magic to draw a stroke, which has no purpose at all. Then the two brothers and sisters started to attack and praise themselves without seeing anyone, which was completely baseless conjecture. Along the way, the author has been deliberately trying to boost the protagonist, but it still seems a bit weak. ... Fortunately, the writing is good and the writing style is pleasant, so it doesn't seem to be a big problem. But I sincerely hope that we won't write this kind of drama in the future where a tool man mindlessly praises the protagonist.

The characters have a strong sense of separation. You wanted to have an affair with the fox at the beginning, but what the protagonist said was unclear, and later on, you deliberately wanted to set up a gentleman for the protagonist? It's awkward for people who read it after reading more than ten chapters

The writing style is quite good among many online articles, but overall it feels like it's artificial and pretentious.

Our harem party just doesn't talk, it's not that we are dead 🥵🥵🥵If you want a harem, you need a harem🥵🥵🥵