The Strongest Physical Training of Mortals

The most important thing is that there are basically no logical loopholes in this book, and the protagonist's behavioral logic is very consistent with the character of a time traveler. Instead of being like other fans, who behave inexplicably and adopt a lot of brainless girls, it is not good for their own cultivation. They are just animals dominated by their lower bodies. It is a miracle that such a person can survive in the mortal world.

I suggest you not write about Chen Qiaoqian and Xin Ruyin as female protagonists. This is not to say that they are not good, but that the protagonist cannot lead them without strong golden fingers. They will be incomparable if they reach the advanced level of Jindan or Nascent Soul (and someone must lead them)

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Is the setting of spiritual roots disappearing necessary? They disappear as soon as a battle occurs. How can one survive in the mortal world? His combat power is not good in the early stage of physical training.

Women should take a few. After all, unless the writing is particularly good. Otherwise, many fans would hire girls to make up for the coolness of the writing. Also, the original work is quite confusing. Han Laomo's single-minded devotion to the Tao has caused so many female supporting characters to live a miserable life. So we all live a hard life anyway. Why can't the protagonist accept those female supporting characters who value love and justice and let them live a hard and happy life? It's a hard life anyway. Why can't the main character be cheap😌

Right. Remember to cultivate both body and law. After all, the protagonist comes standard. Stop practicing adult cultivation. Moreover, longevity is not added before physical training. For example, Holy Queen Tianyuan has replenished her spiritual roots and cultivated both her body and mind.

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It is recommended to have a single female protagonist. There are too many brainless ones nowadays, and the writing is not good.

To suppress the protagonist without any brain, you have to set up garbage spiritual roots.

According to the prophecy, the protagonist waits for the Vajra Art to reach the seventh level, then switches to the Demonic Art of Entrusting Heaven or the King of Ming Art, ascends to the spiritual world, and then practices the Brahma Saint True Demonic Art. Although I prefer that the training methods are different from Han Li's, it feels cliched if they are too similar.

I can't sleep at night, please update quickly 🙂

The body cultivation in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality was attracted by the name.

Now Qidian does not let you brush aside, and it is not easy to write emotional dramas. It is also a good choice for mortals to just let the woman disappear for a long time. The main thing is the arrangement of the plot and the occasional foreshadowing. If you want to eat at Qidian, it still depends on the author himself. If you feel that you do not have copy ideas, it is also a good choice if you are smart (learn from) copy ideas in books with good grades. To be honest, Mengxin can really practice his writing skills by borrowing copy ideas from big guys.

Please give me more, it's not enough to read at all, the writing is getting better and better! ! !

Although the scientific cultivator of Mortal Fans is now popular, it is still okay for fans to eat at Qidian. There are very few scenes with the heroine in the whole story. The heroine disappears for a long time and then comes out for two chapters, and then continues to disappear. The most important thing is to have some theories of your own. I suggest that it is easier to write based on Taoist theories.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it was okay. It was mainly a waste stream within waste. There is no need to write it like this. The time traveler doesn't even have a golden finger. Also write about this waste stream. What's the point?

It's not enough. When will it be put on the shelves? Please update more. Your writing is much better than that of most fans. As long as you write more, your results won't be too bad.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

In order to advertise, "The pagoda descended from the sky, I just want to lead the world to upgrade." An essay on urban immortality. You can read it if you are in a book shortage! I read all the novels!

How can a mortal travel through time without you? Teach me, I want to travel through time too.

If you get the Vajra Art (Spiritual Realm), Weeping Blood Monde, or Tibetan Scripture Pavilion or something in the mortal world, you will know how poisonous it is.