Mortal Blood Ancestor

Very good. Once you have mastered Dumo, you shouldn't be polite to Old Demon Han.

Chen Mo all the time, one chapter has 3,000 words, and the two characters "Chen Mo" take up 1,500 words.

Too little, please update more, the fighting style is very immersive, write slowly, don't rush, write 30 chapters in the copy, it is very interesting, don't control the big head with a small head, it is too boring, there are too many versions with multiple female protagonists, it is like watching a pornographic video, boring. Immortality writing talks about how to cultivate immortality. Many female protagonists simply don't pay attention to the fate of others and insist on changing opportunities that are not their own. I hope the author is different from other authors. The author's opportunity does not necessarily have to intercept Hu Han's opportunity. Being in the same world of immortality and finding one's own path is the mainstream.

Traveling back in time to become the current protagonist is redundant. It would be better to just soul-pierce Han Li. 🙃🙃🙃🙃

The protagonists have been changed, but luck is still with Han Li. 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 The protagonist of Lucky Gallia in a supporting role.

The plot is not exciting and rigorous enough, the supervisor has poor initiative, and there are too many numbers at the beginning from Spirit Beast Mountain to Ghost Spirit Gate Water.

I hope the quality can be maintained as it is now. Don't listen to these people and don't let it suck.

All mortals with good grades are polyamorous.

I hope the author won't write too much about emotions. Nowadays, many books about Mortal Cultivation of Immortality are written by fans because of their emotions. They are too irrational and I don't want to read them. Either be more decisive, or else just sigh, there are too many harems written about them now, and I'm tired of them. It's not that I'm asking you to write a single female lead, or else just be more decisive, or else just be a little bit like that. Don't change the protagonist's personality later.

Let's see how long this lasts. If the update is discontinued, the protagonist will be the cup of Styx by default

I really wrote a book for my feelings and for a small group of book lovers.

Changing settings randomly. Among mortals, monsters can only reach level one in Qi training, level 234 in foundation building, and so on. In this book, the first level is Qi training, the second level is foundation building, and the third level is elixir formation. I don't understand what the author was thinking.

The story is quite good, and it should look good if you hand it over to a shooter. Just send him your text directly, because there is actually no difference between your text and your outline.

The fighting method is not well written, I have no idea what it is about.