
Mortal: Join the Luoyun Sect at the Beginning
凡人:开局拜入落云宗
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- Ongoing
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- 281k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 3d ago
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- Qidian
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I hope the author won't suppress the protagonist. Since you give the protagonist such a big deal, then write it like this! Among mortals, there is no mythical spiritual root. Heavenly spiritual root is not as good as taking medicine. Take Han Li, for example, he went through three reconstructions during the foundation building period and failed to form pills twice. The false spiritual root was less than 130 years old, while Song Yu, the natural spiritual root, was about 100 years old! I don't need to explain the difference here, right? Use the thousand-year-old elixir to refine the foundation-building elixir and eat it as a meal, and compete with the heavenly spirit root! ? And what about the protagonist? Dual Spiritual Roots, the top skills do not need to be re-cultivated. They also use thousand-year-old elixirs to refine foundation-building elixirs and eat them as jelly beans. According to this logic, forming pills over the age of 80-90 is an insult to the readers' intelligence. Don't talk about the Heaven-Building Pills. The Heaven-Building Pills only come into play in the pill-forming stage. At most, Han Li's cultivation can catch up with the true spiritual roots, but it is still not as good as the double spiritual roots of the protagonist. The writing is okay now. It took 9 years to achieve a breakthrough while running around uncertainly. In the middle stage of foundation building, if you can stabilize your cultivation time and cut it in half, it is not too stressful. Return to Luoyun Sect and it will take about ten years to break through to the late stage of foundation building. The protagonist will be around 40 years old, and then it will take about another 10 years to reach the peak of foundation building. 20-30 Years will be spent preparing to form spiritual objects, continue to accumulate cultivation, and look for opportunities. At around 80 years old, he will form pills earlier than Song Yu. This is in line with the background of a mortal and the golden finger of the protagonist!
? ? This introduction? ? Don't dare to look? ? Under what circumstances should I change the settings directly? ? Bai Feng doesn't want male disciples? Is there any Shennong?
Finally, it's not five spiritual roots or four spiritual roots.
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This book is average among ordinary people. Oh, by the way, not many ordinary people can read it.
What Yunmengzong wrote is the same as Huang Maple Valley, Xiang Zhili has to write it, he is invincible.
The timeline cannot be too far back, otherwise we will have to grovel to Mr. Han for dozens or even hundreds of years.
This author deleted paragraphs of comments in the book, so I can't criticize him 👍
Lotus lamp ripening elixirs, all the elixirs like to be mixed with the little green bottle
Are today's novels like this or that? Can someone like Hong Fu do this if he has a daughter?
The main character's choice of a cauldron as his real weapon made me laugh. He practiced fire-attribute skills and took the offensive route, but ended up arranging a defensive weapon for himself. Han Li knew how to arrange swords to strengthen his attack attributes, and the cauldron has no offensive power except defense. You can't just use the cauldron when fighting with others. Just put it on your head 🤔. Besides, you have to join Xutian Palace. Isn't there a ready-made tripod in it? Could it be that you want to give the things in Xutian Palace to Han Li? It would be meaningless to write like this. I hope the author can change the name of the weapon, and he can completely arrange an offensive magic weapon for the protagonist.
The original book does not mention the price of each bottle of Foundation Establishment Pills. Chapter 355 of the original book states that the recipe for the True Essence Pill used in the Foundation Establishment Period sells for 1,500 spirit stones. There is no need to worry about selling the Foundation Establishment Pills. There will definitely be the largest number of Foundation Establishment Stage monks competing for them at the auction, and a bottle can easily be sold for more than 1,500 spirit stones. Chapter 225 of the original book states that a piece of high-quality iron essence is worth 2,000 spiritual stones. The true fire of Li Huayuan's Three Yang Body is purer, and the quality of the refined iron essence is better, and it can be worth 3,000 spiritual stones. In fact, the foundation-building monks in Tiannan bought the elixirs and were reluctant to take them. They mainly relied on meditating hard and running exercises to increase their mana. They only dared to take some elixirs when they broke through a small bottleneck and used the power of the elixirs to break through the bottleneck. Unlike Han Li, who mainly relied on taking a lot of elixirs to increase his magic power.
Nangongque
Senior sister is so cool!
Taoist couple
The heroine only recommends those who have a Taoist heart and can ascend on their own in the original work.
Open a copy
Opportunities are all earned by yourself, don't follow others to pick them up. It's so difficult in the human world, why are there so many people getting pregnant╮(╯▽╰)╭
The rhythm is okay. Later, we can consider designing Qingluan as a mutated spiritual beast. The awesome seventh-level mutant spiritual beast supernatural powers in the original work can help the Nascent Soul fight. After the protagonist forms a pill, he has fire crystal ants in one hand and a mutant spiritual beast in the other, and the fighting skills are guaranteed. Coupled with the natal magic weapon set and the arrangement of several ancient treasures, it is the top level of pill-forming combat power. After all, the protagonist's lie in Tiannan has already fixed that there is only one top-level copy of Fallen Demon Valley, and the good things are still deep in the depths. Unless you forcefully arrange opportunities for the protagonist, or let the protagonist fly in the Xinghai or Dajin, otherwise Tiannan is destined to be a much more stable development place than Chaotic Star Sea.
When writing about mortals, it is better to take the casual cultivation route in the early stage. It is more exciting to go jungle and upgrade everywhere. The routines in the sect have long been ruined!
Yuan Yao
Yuanyao
So what should the protagonist collect🙂
I'm just wondering, so many people have come down from the upper realm, so many people have died, is there a storage bracelet?
The writing and plot are just average.
There is nothing new, the plot style is boring, and the fighting is not neat and tidy. However, it is not a big hit point, so it doesn't hurt to take a look at it.
The humanistic plots are basically the same. Everyone knows that they have no sense of expectation after watching them. The most important thing is whether the author can write something different under the known plot to have the desire to continue reading. I can only say that the plot is still the same even if the map is changed so far. It can't be said that it's almost ugly, but the skin is changed and the plot is still the same.
Zi Ling
Zi Ling
Is there a Shennong? Is the protagonist a dog licker? Is his IQ online? Is the logic reasonable?
I would like to promote the new book of Mortal on the basis of my treasure, and wish the author better and better!
All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!
The player who doesn't even use the sweeping storage bag.
Han Li's 4th spiritual root is in the middle of 5th year. You have two spiritual roots, you are in the middle of 9 years, what a waste you are, do you have any logic? Can you write well?
The protagonist's double spiritual root has a plug-in that is stronger than Han Li's, but it behaves like a pseudo-spiritual root. The plot development is also the same as what Han Li and Huang Fenggu experienced. Especially when they took out two ancient treasures from the forbidden area, they only gave them foundation-building pills and some alchemy tips. What a shame. Then they inexplicably found the teleportation array and went to the Chaos Star Sea. Luoyun Sect is a relatively harmonious sect in the human world. If you have a cheat, the two Nascent Souls will not interfere as long as you are not exposed. Han Laomo's cautious character has been left there. The protagonist can practice at home with peace of mind. There is an alchemy master and he will not be targeted.
Will the author Han Li get the same opportunities as in the original work, and then her fighting power will be the same? It means I'm tired of seeing this and do something new.
It's a bit similar to the beginning of the fanfic from Luoyun Sect. It's a competition within the sect to enter the thirty-year secret realm, and Xiang Zhili is also in Luoyun Sect.
It's okay, I hope there are more original copies, instead of just making the same copies all the time