Tokyo: My System Is Way Too Competitive

The beginning is a bit depressing to read, and the plot is actually okay, but I really don't like the basketball temporary experience card part. Now you have to either give the experience card the corresponding ability after finishing it, or don't give it to such a powerful one.

Don't let the protagonist play Naoki Hansawa. Isn't this just for fun?

It was okay at the beginning, but in the middle, it started to show off the lack of subscriptions to make money, either with continuous lyrics or script content. Write scripts, film movies, sing and produce records. Sports now account for a very high proportion, and the content described is almost the same as sports articles. Do you want to please the readers of the sports department? The beautiful young lady who appeared earlier was inexplicably missing from the camera later on, which was anticlimactic. My strength persuaded the last reader to quit, I was really stupid, I just decided all the money, and it was a huge loss. Didn't the King of Bad Ends talk about it? Do you know why there are no readers' comments later? Because the remaining few have been persuaded to leave, they left messages and raised issues, but nothing changed, and they even got worse. I read the last one today because I didn't want to waste Quan Ding's money. I left a message to complain about my tens of dollars before abandoning the article. Bye-Bye.

This author gives me a sense of familiarity. Have I read your book before? He plays football.

You're playing football like this and you're back to your old ways. You have a stick here and a stick here and there. It's a mess. It's better to reach the pinnacle of a sport. You have a low number of words. I won't watch it anyway. I'm so disappointed.

The draft box alone has 100 chapters in it, and I can't write less than 1 million words. Feel free to follow it, I hope you all will follow it every day, thank you!

I don't understand why I always start in debt...

This name seems familiar. I clicked in and saw that it was indeed you. Don't be as bad as the last two books. Write slowly.

My personal suggestion is that if you want to draw comics, then draw comics. If you want to play basketball, go play basketball. If you want everything, you will have nothing.

I read light novels for the love story, but you don't have that at all. I'll have to consider reading your books in the future.