Tokyo: My System Is Way Too Competitive

The beginning was a bit depressing, the plot was actually okay, but I really disliked the basketball temporary trial card part. Now, it seems you either give the card the corresponding ability after completing the task, or you don't give it such a powerful one at all.

Stop casting the lead actor as Hanzawa Naoki; isn't that just pure self-indulgence?

The beginning was alright, but in the middle, they started sabotaging the story to make money off low subscription numbers, resorting to endless lyrics or script-like content. Writing scripts, filming movies, singing and releasing albums—now sports are heavily emphasized, and the content is almost identical to sports fiction. Are they trying to pander to sports readers?

This author feels familiar to me. Have I read your books before? You play football.

You're just going back to your old ways with this football approach, jumping from one thing to another, a complete mess. It's not even as good as mastering one sport. This is just padding the word count; I'm not reading anymore, I'm so disappointed.

I've already saved a hundred chapters in my drafts; I'll stop writing before I reach a million words. Don't worry about missing out, I hope everyone will read it every day, thank you!

I don't understand why we always start with debt...

The name looked familiar, and when I clicked in, it was indeed you. Don't make it as bad as your last two books; take your time writing.

My personal advice is: if you want to draw comics, then draw comics; if you want to play basketball, then play basketball. If you want everything, you'll end up with nothing.

I read light novels for the romance, but you don't have any romance at all. I'll have to consider reading your books in the future.