Cultivating in Tokyo by Adding Points

Those who have been persuading the author not to write monsters are true. The author has already written about monsters in the introduction. Not to mention that listening to your suggestions is equivalent to changing the outline. It is also right for others not to listen. I have been reading books at Qidian for so many years, and most of the readers who changed the outline have died violently. And have you ever thought about it, most people who read this novel will still click on it when they see monsters written below. Those who read this novel are not those few Crimson King. Is it worth it to delete the monsters and drive away some people who like to read monsters, and then drive away some people who don't like the author's random changes?

There is a problem when you join Chaofan. Why can your protagonist gain statistics in the sports field by relying on high attributes? There are no other extraordinary people entering the sports class. How else can you be a tennis prince or a football player from the beginning? Joining Chaofan after writing for a while is completely self-inflicted.

The mother of a classmate, the neighbor's aunt, the school student union president, the new music teacher, these elements can be added

The author really shouldn't have chosen this kind of track. It has completely become a Japanese-style story. The protagonist is aimless and improves for the sake of improvement. The author may have wanted to write a stream of consciousness, but it is a disaster, so far. He is a very uncharismatic protagonist with no passion or enthusiasm. There is also a kind of arrogance under the casual surface, contempt for hot-blooded idiots in football, and the choice of school is all inexplicable anyway.

There is a sense of gap. When I wrote about football earlier, the protagonist was Superman killing everyone. When the kendo club begins to have extraordinary monsters, the protagonist loses any advantage if he doesn't stack up his armor well, and the story changes from an invincible and cool story to a normal urban monster story.

The writing is good, but I still have to criticize your work 😆. The product is not right. I read this novel for the purpose of spiritual practice, monsters and love 😍. It turns out that there is too much football content, just like the picture on the packaging is a bitter black coffee. Coffee, it tastes as sweet as hot cocoa with milk 😫, which is not suitable for my needs at all 😆😆 Although, the football part does have some points that make me happy, and those who meet the needs will probably like it.

The plot is very well written so far. I feel that the plot is very real. I hope it won't be about monsters, otherwise I won't have the same sense of immersion as I do now.

After finishing writing about football, I feel that the author's enthusiasm has dropped a lot. Although I don't understand football, I feel that the first part of the article is very graphic, but the later part does not have the same feeling.

In fact, I will try to write a hybrid style of Noragami and Natsume's Book of Friends, combined with kendo battles. It is not a universal superman, but a small and fresh Japanese romance, different from other spiritual recovery themes.

Too much sports content will dissuade too many people who don't like watching sports themes. . .