A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Farming System, Grant Me Eternal Life

Everyone thinks that your book is about collecting girls, not about practicing and fighting to find secret realms. Isn't it enough to read about the eunuch training stream? Moreover, there is no female protagonist in the eunuch training. Your protagonist has a golden finger and will not be short of resources. You are also going to follow the path of the eunuch training stream. Writing these things all day long must not be read by many people. At first glance, you, the protagonist, must also be wandering around the sea of ​​​​stars to be a casual cultivator and follow the path of Han Li, and then abandon the women of Tiannan first. I really have no idea of ​​​​subscribing. It's still hard to open a harem. All the mortals have been taken in. They don't take in Yan Ruyan, who has a spiritual root. They don't take in the good-looking Nie Ying. They don't take in the pill-forming Hong Fu. They take a few pill-forming female cultivators and take them to Luan Xinghai. The protagonist will be treated politely wherever he goes. There are not even 3,000 beauties in the harem, and there are too many missing girls. 🙂

You, the three sisters of the Mo Mansion, are really meaningless. There are so many good-looking female cultivators that you have to fight against these mortals.

Is there Nangong Wan as the heroine? Just watch if you have it

This book of yours has a little bit of everything, but nothing is completely enjoyable. I can only give it a seven out of ten. Let me tell you why. Do you think the author makes sense? The first book title is not good and I have no idea of ​​reading it. Taneda immediately makes people think that the protagonist is the ascetic monk Goudaoliu. There is a feeling that the protagonist gets up and works hard to practice ordinary things and then improves his strength. However, the golden finger is the source of most of the protagonist's strength. If you write about the protagonist and work hard, the more you write, the more inconsistent it will be. Readers are not looking at you. It should be renamed directly to cheat, and the cheat function can be added. Farming will suddenly make people stop thinking about it. You should also write less boring stuff in the story. You can cover everything from planting alchemy to refining weapons and retreats, and just write things that your readers will like. The character of the second protagonist is not good. Your description of the protagonist is not good. He is always passive. He is neither decisive nor domineering. It feels like he cannot accomplish anything. As I read it, I feel that the protagonist has a green-haired turtle character. You can go and see how Meng Ruishenji writes the protagonist, which is very easy to imitate. If it doesn't work, you can learn from Tang San's Double Standard. At least the protagonist's character should be more distinct. I was speechless while reading the new chapter. Why do you ask questions when your protagonist is already dominant? Why don't you just give orders to Yan Ruyan? What else do you ask? It gives the impression that the protagonist is too cowardly and can't get anything done. Directly ban and control, just be a slave of the furnace. Cultivation of immortality is not about being a good gentleman. The third story is boring. I think the readers of your book support it because there are so many girls. You should write more about the story of having girls as dual cultivators. You can just take the literati to look at the character list. Your book is not competitive. Please see how you can describe it in a subtle way, otherwise you won't be able to retain it. Don't write about secret realms that are not as big as the original novel. Readers have no impression and no subscription base. The protagonist already has a golden finger, so don't do something that is not available. Killing people and stealing goods is no better than farming and grabbing secret realms. 🙂🙂🙂

The original work contains a story about the beauty of the country, the spiritual roots of heaven, and the speed of cultivation.

Don't let those ladies in Mo's house go. After all, they are mother and daughter. Wouldn't it be nice for the whole family to be reunited?

Can you let those mortals in Mo Mansion go? Collect all the mess. Slipping away

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yan Li, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Xiao Cuier, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Mu Pei Ling, Bai Yaoyi, Holy Ancestor Yuancha, Holy Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Black Phoenix Fairy, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Le'er, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, the four ladies of the Mo family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)

Renaissance among mortals. If the protagonist is required, he must open a harem (the original work did not open it, which is a pity) Goldfinger must be strong, otherwise he will not be able to lead so many people. It's cool (the original work is perfect), but the protagonist cannot be a pure fool Complete the original work's settings, which are reasonable (some of the original work's settings are full of loopholes and are too ancient to adapt to the current environment)

Nowadays, the world is dominated by the trend of promoting women in the harem and the trend of cultivating eunuchs. The harem pushes the girls out of the harem and accepts all the pretty ones. The double cultivation plot is added. The protagonist needs to upgrade quickly and the plot is enjoyable all the way. Readers do not demand that the author write more exciting things. The key is not to mess up the plot. The eunuch cultivation genre has no female protagonists. It can be Le Ziwen, Long Aotian, or people cultivating immortals, but it must be interesting and different, and the requirements for the author are relatively high. Other nanny essays, old slave essays, gifts for a daughter, difficult immortality essays, valuable treasure cultivation essays, daily essays, and prose essays are no longer popular.