Seeking the Dao Across the Heavens

It's a pity that when I read "Join Yuan Shao's Camp" I no longer had the desire to read it. First of all, regardless of ancient and modern times, when a person sees that the fate of another person is death, he will not consider joining his camp, unless he is a blood relative. Seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages is the nature of every scholar, and it is also the way of thinking of modern people. You actually chose to join just for the ultimate luck... Short-sighted! Secondly, does Yuan Shao's demise really have no impact on you? Not quite! Yuan Shao is destroyed and you still want to be a prince? You think too much... In fact, I have a lot to say, but I always say something wrong and stop saying it. In short, joining Yuan Shao's camp will ruin this book. Even if there are so many comments saying it is a running account, I still have the desire to read it! But... After joining Yuan Shao, I can't stand it anymore!

The introduction of Goldfinger is awesome, but the actual application is garbage.

The writing is good and the updates are relatively stable. It is a good book. I recommend everyone to read it 😁

Since there is a theory of luck, the pigs' feet that worship others as their lord should also be gathered on Yuan Shao's head. Xu Shao commented that the author has the qualifications of a prince, Yuan Shao would not care about it, laughed, and was inconsistent.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style feels a bit poor, which makes people have no desire to continue reading.

Come on, come on, wait, don't be in a hurry.

Everything else about this book is okay, but there is a "young" feeling between the lines, and the protagonist doesn't look like an adult.

After reading the 55th picture, I asked: Who is the protagonist going to defect to? Whose 🐶 is it? ? ? ?

If you want to know what kind of character and ambition the protagonist has, you expect the hero to have a scheming character. Nowadays, everyone likes to see a character whose character is fixed as soon as he appears. Who would watch that kind of growth character?

Since it is Zhutianliu, I can tell some things after reading so many Zhutian books. At first, I looked at movies and TV shows or movie novels. Because they were written too much, many of them no longer had any appeal. Therefore, the worlds you choose to travel to at the beginning must be chosen carefully. Also, you need to write an outline again, otherwise it will be easy to write in a mess, thinking about where to write. Zhu Tianliu gradually becomes stronger. This is the most important and exciting point. The process of becoming stronger must be careful. Determine the world in which you want the protagonist to become stronger. Do not change the world you have decided to become stronger just because you have added a world recommended by readers. Another exciting point is naturally the involvement of plot characters, etc. This is where the author's writing skills are tested the most. The characterization and plot development depend on the author's imagination. You also need to grasp the scale well. I have watched several hodgepodge movies, the kind where one plot starts and then other plots are slowly added. In the end, I only read one book, and I skipped it. So if you can have one world, try not to do two-in-one. Of course, if you have the strength, pretend I didn't say it. That's all I'm thinking about now.