If You Don't Save Yourself with Love, You Will Die.

I was planning to go to bed, but I couldn't bear it anymore, so I got up to write a short composition. I think everything was well done in the previous chapters, including the normal portrayal of Risa and the two Kitagawa sisters, as well as the characters of Yamashiro, the emotional line with Risa, the plot of the male protagonist saving the two Kitagawa sisters, and the plot of Risa risking her life to save the male protagonist. I think it was okay. But at the beginning, I was still saying that I couldn't live up to Risa, and then suddenly Xiaomi appeared out of nowhere, and then he played the classic game and spent money to save people? What is the difference between this and nurturing? I'm suffocated. From here on, the whole plot completely falls apart. I can't understand what the author wants to express. Does he want to express that men will become bad if they have money? I couldn't understand it at all, so I just endured it. When we arrived at Xinchuan VII, it became more abstract. No, buddy, you just killed someone else's son, and then you started flirting with someone else out of nowhere (if you were looking at the male protagonist's point of view, I can tolerate it. After all, it's normal to do some abstract things in order to survive. But the author, you are in Gan Gods and Demons. As an author, can you be so abstract? I can only say I completely let myself go, just because my grades were not good, so I just wrote it casually). The character image that I had created for so long completely collapsed. I just relied on Risa's tolerance to do whatever I wanted. The whole plot collapsed. I also wanted to see how it would develop in the future and whether I could get it back. Unexpectedly, it became more and more abstract. There is also the plot of Shancheng. The entire emotional line has not been completely shaped, and other lines are rushed to start, and the entire emotional line completely collapses. Complain again, author, do you like wives that much? Do you have to have Shinkawa VII? It would be fine if you wrote a vague aunt in the end. Your harem is obviously full of young girls, and suddenly a wife appears? A bit abstract, right? Seeing that the male protagonist wants to join Shinkawa Seven's plan, I really feel puzzled. No, man, I'm really a little down. There is obviously a better solution to find with my aunt, but I don't want to. In the final analysis, although I say I trust my aunt, I actually feel a little distrustful in my heart. Anyway, I was completely speechless and could only say a few words. Abandoned, it was a waste of so many points and time.

After seeing the latest chapter (the end of the first volume), let me give you a brief review The writing is delicate, and the character descriptions are deep and full But it is only in the early stage, and the second half is a bit too... Literary In the middle stage, it is no longer a daily short drama, but an extremely complete large chapter, a large copy that intersperses the several heroines who appear on the stage to perform together. About half of the words are about the male protagonist getting answers from the Riddler after investigating the Kitagawa sisters, but the male protagonist does not investigate in depth, which makes it difficult for people to understand. Solving the other party's problems to obtain system points is the main source of the male protagonist's remaining lifespan. If the system tasks are not solved, the male protagonist will die in a few years, but the male protagonist doesn't care much about the two cousins and lives a leisurely life. That's fine. From the middle, the plot of the Beichuan sisters is not just a riddle, but even a bit confusing. If I hadn't seen the tunnel leading to summer, the exit of goodbye This film may not be able to understand what happened in the middle and fall into chaos... This can be said to be torture for reading... And most importantly, as the second heroine of the male protagonist who has almost completed the strategy, the role of Yamashiro Himetsu is completely unable to participate in this large copy, which makes This character has a very serious sense of fragmentation in the plot... It is not impossible for the author to borrow from famous works. If possible, please don't make the character so "Riddler", so that readers can get some information. In the middle period, when the male protagonist keeps going around and asking questions without getting any clues, it really feels like he is being tortured. The next step is to shorten the copy time. I only updated one chapter a day and wrote a copy of nearly 50 chapters. I don't believe you didn't lose the number of chapters. If you care about the number of chapters, I suggest you not make the copy so long or intersperse other short-term tasks in the copy. Otherwise, other people will probably keep books. Generally speaking, I still hope that the author will get better and better. After all, it is a serialization of online articles. It is really not good for you to write a book using this single-book system... It is not that I hope to change the style like this. It is just that it is best to keep the word count of the copy accurate and streamline it as much as possible.

I feel that the author has good literary talent, the language is fluent and the descriptions are vivid. The beginning of the book should be innovative. My sister's arrangement is quite special, which is good. In terms of plot, the sister aspect has just begun, and a new female character has appeared. It feels a bit split, but it's not bad. The new female character is a more "classic" "rescue" plot. I don't really like this, it feels like it's using "abuse" of women to advance the plot. Besides, it's a bit divided... It's okay if I don't care about my sister. Because it's good to look at this piece alone. Speaking of which, wouldn't "sister" be a "background" like a female character? I have to mention that the protagonist is an "old guy" with a 30-year-old mind. Some parts feel like he has been completely understood by the protagonist, :-(. The overall feeling is that it is a cool novel among light novels.

The writing style is top-notch among many Japanese daily light novels, and it is a more traditional romance light novel. I think the poor performance may be because the book title and system (Not Love to Death) are a bit outdated or ordinary. Sometimes it has to cater to the market to expand the audience. In addition, if it is not a fan, the appearance, body, temperament, and characters should be richer and more distinctive, so that readers can immediately have a specific fantasy in their minds. So far, Yamashiro's characters are fuller, and the author is very good at describing emotions, which is good

Is the author a girl-controller? There is still a little more, can I take it away? 😱

To be honest, after reading more than 200 chapters, I feel that the progress of the emotional line is really too slow. After rescuing Risa, there is no emotional scene that I want to see. There is only one-sided dedication of Risa. The male protagonist's relationship makes me feel very uncomfortable. There are only a few touching descriptions. To be honest, I don't want to follow it. After reading so much, I still feel uncomfortable.

The introduction is really inconsistent with the temperament of the protagonist. The protagonist has a frigid or forced frigid character (Tokyo literary style), but uses such an overly lively and heartless introduction (classic two-dimensional). The result is that the sense of separation brought by the first few chapters is too strong. Simply put, it does not match expectations, and it is easy to give up reading. In addition, the temperament of the introduction itself represents the style of the book, especially the introduction introduced in the first person. The introduction is the words of the protagonist, and the content of the introduction is the actions of the protagonist. Although I have only read a few chapters, would the protagonist in this book say such heartless words as in the introduction? In this kind of daily novel, the creation of the protagonist itself is the highlight, and the first few chapters are the key to follow-up reading. If it cannot be unified with the image in the introduction, then this sense of separation will cause more loss of follow-up reading than you think.

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It's good-looking, and the climax part is handled well. It's not toxic, just too little. Please give me more. If it's still of this level when it's on the shelves, I'll definitely order it all.

It's invincible. The male protagonist first said how much he liked Risa and couldn't let her down, but then he went to Tokyo to have a secret secretary who had no emotional basis and went to bed with her. This is not a love story, this is pure coke 🤭

It's bad. I saw the latest update one night and saw the character of the new heroine. Isn't this a surprise? I'm a little afraid that the author will suddenly go crazy and make something that no one wants to see. (In fact, the background of the new heroine pretending to date other people already has elements of surprise in it. I hope the author can develop the plot more normally in the future. I'm a little scared.

So, is the protagonist a eunuch? Is this a eunuch novel?

Why do you have to give the male protagonist a weak buff? Without this buff, I think the look and feel would be better. If it is to increase the system's presence, I feel it is not necessary. He can be manipulated by others casually and it looks awkward.

It's very smooth, but the style is very literary, sensational and even pretentious. The gap between ordinary and extraordinary is too big, but there are too many intersections, which is a bit divorced from reality.

This is not an aunt. She is no closer than a biological mother. The protagonist enjoys the love and convenience that his aunt gives him with peace of mind. He has to worry about cleaning up the mess every day. Doesn't he feel a little guilty in his heart?

Shen Nong's appraisal is completed. It's a pity that there are too few of the prosthetic eye jelly grass. Love stories are more enjoyable than fantasy and leisure stories.

I don't have any feeling for Kitagawa Weixiang, it's better to be a three-person character

Let's talk about Yamashiro first. I personally had a very bad impression of the first meeting and the plot in the hospital. First, I hit the male protagonist because of a few words, which gave people the feeling of being grumpy. Later, it was the same old story, with the male protagonist and the female protagonist having a relationship for various reasons. I didn't pay close attention to the plot. It should be getting better, right? Weixiang and Yui, the plot of the two people, the Riddler did not tell any information in the middle, and the male protagonist had almost no participation. The plot of the male protagonist and other female protagonists passed by in the middle, and finally a copy was made to tell all the information. There is also Gao Shan who appeared in the middle. Wow, don't write a useless character (it may be that one of the female protagonists will not be written later). First, Gao Shan said that the woman Dou Sha who was close to the male protagonist was close to the male protagonist. The male protagonist directly said the opposite, touching other people, that's it. Kill her,...🤔There is nothing in the end The male protagonist, after the other female protagonists have given so much to him, and nothing was given to the female protagonist in return, he accepted it with peace of mind, and only gave him a gift of nearly two hundred yuan, and that was it. As well as the work, I thought it was a campus light novel in which the male protagonist meets various problematic female protagonists on campus and then saves them. Now, he directly goes to Tokyo to participate in things related to the underworld. A high school boy has no strength and relies entirely on his aunt's background. It became Shuangwen directly. If there was anything that couldn't be solved, my aunt would arrange it directly. There are minor points, and the plot can be followed, but if you read campus light novels, you don't have to read it, as the subsequent development is basically irrelevant.

My beans are indeed quite good. Shen Nong has tasted them and you can read them. They are food.

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