Tokyo: I Divorced My Ex-Girlfriend's Sister

When the night cat smiles, life or death is uncertain When the night cat cries, the whole audience exclaims When the night cat sells it, the price is not bad When the night cat tightens its grip, readers become addicted                                                                                             did not know.

Can. Come on, I hope the author writes better and better

You actually have to hire a cat to stay up all night writing a novel. It's so bad that I won't read it.

Uncle Cat, can you please stop asking me to pat that pink wound on you? I'm only 12 years old😢

This book is a breath of fresh air in stand-in literature, and I'm reluctant to read it. Ever since the protagonist was reborn, I was reluctant to watch it for fear of accidentally finishing it.

It's a pity that the author who has been with me through life and death has been beaten by me, who has been through life and death.

The game Uncle Cat played last time was so fun. After three months, my belly started to swell. Do you know magic?

Well? Doesn't the cat who stays up late not smoke? Why did I find Bai Jiang on him?

The book is good and the group is also good. The group leader is a tomboy who posts photos in women's clothing

The author should simply get rid of the bad habit of eating and sleeping and focus on updates.

The book is good, the grass quality is good, you can eat it with confidence

I always feel that since I can get divorced, it would be too hasty to get back together after rebirth.

In the multi-part rebirth story, the fight between the protagonist and the two sisters is very interesting, but the buttons before rebirth are too small, and the plot develops too quickly, causing several people to know that the other party is reborn. Now in Mingpai Landlords. The secondary line is the protagonist's business career, which basically becomes the major event generator of the book, and the advancement of the plot depends entirely on this. But I still hope to cover other events. Although I want to write about stock trading, it's best to mention it in one go. Stock trading is super boring. Business wars can be written about, but there are too few that can be written brilliantly. It is almost as good as Ichiban acquiring shares in a TV station. In short, as soon as the monthly ticket is given, I will start to gain weight.

But since the male and female protagonists got divorced, I couldn't bear to watch it.

It's okay, but the plot design and processing are too light (or light novel). Based on my personal reading experience, it may feel a little bit dramatic when I'm not depressing. Furthermore, some of the heroine's character templates are biased toward the stereotypes of ACG works. People who like them may particularly like them, but I really don't feel anything about them, but it doesn't hurt. If the author can maintain his standard, this book will at least be a source of food in the end. Finally, some more big thunder characters😋 Come on.

The author is stupid and asks wise men for advice. Short comics and long comics are both acceptable. Because the male protagonist will definitely set up a studio later, and the female protagonists will also help him draw comics, so we collect comics that everyone likes and bring them in when the time comes.

The more I look at it, the more it looks like plagiarism!!!

Have you experienced my life? You just write these plots and take it for granted.

After reading Chapter 29, I feel that it is not like other Nikkei. The Nikkei flavor is not strong. There are only 3 heroine color cards. Then there are a lot of female supporting characters in these 29 chapters. The male protagonist's sister's best friend is very close to the male protagonist, but there is no heroine color card. I am not sure if it is the heroine. The sister seems not to like the best friend and the male protagonist. It's close. The sister may not be biological, and I'm not sure if she is the heroine. The author said there are 4 heroines. No girls are left out. If you don't confirm, add more. So I feel that there is a small chance that the sister and best friend are the heroines, but they are probably not the heroines. After all, the hero's sister only appears by name in these 29 chapters, and there is no plot. To sum up, I decided to wait until all the heroines are confirmed and then see what the book reviews are like.

The reason why the sister broke up in the last book is exactly the same as this one, and the attributes of the two sisters are also similar. Although there are many improvements in plot design and writing, the character design still feels a bit difficult, especially when the sister sends her husband off, the sister takes over, the connection is broken, the sisters turn against each other, and the Shura field, the sense of déjà vu is too strong.

You... You are... The one who cannot be forgotten!

The most important thing in the new book period is to follow up. How much you read depends on how many rounds of recommendations you can get. Recommendations are calculated every week based on the number of chapters that are updated on Tuesday. So I would like to ask all readers who are interested in reading books to help me scroll to the bottom of the latest chapters on Tuesday, so that it can be counted as an effective follow-up. ...... Additional explanation, be sure to read it! This book is often eroded by mysterious forces. In order to avoid a bad reading experience, it is best to read it as soon as possible. If there are more words, the author will open a mysterious space and put the content in it.

In fact, judging from the text, the author gives me the feeling that he has written a lot of similar novels, but he doesn't seem to understand how to write this kind of novel. The advantages of this book are still very obvious, that is, sisters + empathy. At least that's what I read at the beginning. Later, I don't know if the author wanted to finish it as soon as possible because of poor grades or something else. In short, the appearance of other female protagonists is a bit blunt. The second one is tsundere. I have to say, this is really poignant. No wonder the female protagonists in Japanese comics are all tsundere. I like them all. The author's writing on tsundere is quite good. At least the interaction with the male protagonist feels quite natural to me. The most important thing about tsundere is coquettishness. As for the shortcomings, there are indeed too many. I think this is also the reason for the poor performance of this book. The first point is that the main plot is too weak. Although it is a daily light novel, there must be some main plot at least, otherwise it will be like a running account and the impression will be too bad. The second point is that the author seems to have forgotten the biggest gimmick of this book, which is sisters + empathy. There is no gimmick at all, as if this setting has been eaten by itself. The third point is that the character of the protagonist is too weak, and the relationship between the female protagonists and the male protagonist progresses too fast. It can be said that there is almost no pulling plot at all. This completely violates the bottom line style of this type of novel. If I just overturn it, I might as well read Liu Beiwen directly. In this regard, I think the author can read the Tokyo Equipment. The water is really water, but it can be seen that there is indeed a pulling. Then there are some other problems. If the author still plans to use this style for his next book, I think he should first read more of the same type, otherwise it will be difficult to make further progress.

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1. Don't delete those who ask for mutual relations in the comment area? 2. The relationship between sisters should not be too strong, but they are all pure enemies, right? 3. It's been 6220 years. Now the text is copied to link up with the plot, right?

It's so well written, why doesn't anyone read it? Such a delicious article gives me a full meal

This book is destined for me 🙂. I saw it on the shelf before and discarded it because I didn't have any coins. Now I have some coins and saw it again.

The familiar feeling is back, it's all back, it has a sense of atmosphere, environmental details, lightning protection and top-notch Nikkei, this should not be unexpected

The writing is very nice, come on, I'll give you 25 monthly passes 😎