Warhammer: Imperial Navy Promotion Handbook

Seeing these chapters about your dormitory, I got up and looked around, only to find that corruption had spread rampantly across Terra, and the Loyal Fate Academy dormitory had largely fallen. Across the street, two Slaanesh cultists were conducting an online multimedia ritual to worship Slaanesh.

Psionic energy is like excrement in a toilet; psionic energy in Warhammer is excrement, and the warp is the toilet—it's not the kind of ethereal energy that people imagine.

Befriend the Emperor and distance yourself from evil gods—this is why the empire prospers; befriend evil gods and distance yourself from the Emperor—this is why the Black Legion falls. When the former judge was alive, he often discussed this matter with the prisoners, and he never failed to sigh and hate the evil gods.

Your dorm is something else! Fat Nurgle, the second brother of the Mao family, the protagonist looks like Slaanesh, his wife is Khorne, when are Tzeentch and the Emperor coming? I'm already prepared to call the Inquisition.

The author must control the narrative momentum of Warhammer. You can extend the Empire's lifespan, but you absolutely cannot revive it. The more you revive it, the worse the writing will become, and a bunch of random, nonsensical enemies will pop up.

Spiel can't be written, he's practically an overpowered protagonist... Invincible, he wiped out even the most skeletal, green-skinned bug-like warriors, and directly commanded the Regent in battle.

If I'm not mistaken, the protagonist is currently a Luna-class cruiser, right? The official setting is 95,000 people. Novels don't need to be that precise, but a residential area with over 100,000 people, especially one that has experienced riots, is just ridiculous. Even if the population is large, it can't be this many. You could say there are 100,000 people in the lower decks, but no matter what, this number for a residential area is just too exaggerated.

This is outrageous! It feels like if they called the court to arrest everyone in the protagonist's dorm and his girlfriend, they probably wouldn't have made a mistake.

I've read most of it, and I just want to know how someone goes from being a marine to a frigate captain. This promotion doesn't make sense in the Imperial Navy. Even if you climb all the way to gunnery chief, you still need to spend long hours commanding the armored squad. If you were to write this seriously, it would probably be a million words long. 😁

Alternatively, the author could play Gothic Wars 2 to experience shipbuilding and vessels.