A Rising Sun

This 24-year-old post may be outdated now. This post has always existed and I will not delete it. People who see it now can regard this as a prophecy, oh, my prophecy back then. I don't know if it's accurate now, because I don't plan to watch it. Hehe, I had heard that it was unfinished, so I came here to watch it and my book friends spit on it. And if you meet a taster who is lucky enough to finish Akaishi. Perhaps, I can kindly tell you, has the author fixed the problems I pointed out back then ?

I came across this article accidentally and read it. I really read dozens of chapters in one breath, I felt something was wrong, it was impossible to learn from Wu Ming. Looking at the author, hey, it's you, ah, you are indeed an old author. The plot is smooth, the rhythm is very comfortable, and there is no poisonous point at all. What I like most is that most of the fairy tales nowadays are about fighting and killing, which is the urban soldier king who has changed his skin. It's okay to read occasionally, but the ones on the market are boring. There is no such thing as "fairy" in this kind of novels. People who say he lives in the mountains are just flattering him. It's rare to see a fairy-like fighting style. Various wonderful spells make people enter another world at once. I really like it and will always support the genuine version.

It's been a long time since I've read such a refreshing fairy tale. The rhythm is relatively slow, and there are no too intense collisions. It's not a great novel, and there are no plug-ins. It's just a traditional fairy tale. Once you read the first chapter, you will fall in love with it completely. The various spells, practices, and magic weapons in it are all very well written. It is not about gods, but the spells are used better than gods. It is really like gods fighting, killing people thousands of miles away without a trace, and the cause of death cannot be found. There are not so many in-your-face tricks with swords, guns, swords and halberds. The character confrontation is not a simple story about stacking magic weapons and repairs to stack spell names. The protagonist is not the kind of middle-aged boy who always uses super-level murder magic weapons to defy the sky. It is completely in the style of supernatural novels that have been passed down for thousands of years. The most important thing is that the protagonist is very calm and rigorous, and he is very careful in his behavior. He is not a genius, there are no cheats, and there are no passionate plots. He can only make progress steadily and be considerate in everything - why do I feel like I am writing a review of a book about cannon fodder changing his life... Cough... I can feel the protagonist's behavior and planning. It is of a high level, and there is no forced embarrassment like supporting characters subjugating the villain to his death, unlike some... Generally speaking, the writing skills of the master's new book are good, the system foundation is good, the logic is not so twisty, the protagonist is calm and decisive, and the plot of the fight between gods is also very mysterious. I also like the subject matter, give it a thumbs up!

It's so good, the author's work is so appetizing! ! ! ! More updates! More updates! More updates! ! ! !

This book is quite good. It is better than some system flow, model setting, verbal chatter, game flow, monster fighting and upgrading flow, stallion flow, and some hard copying ancient poems to pretend to be cool. It is more beautiful. The author has written elegant and exciting martial arts, and the writing style is excellent. It reads very naturally, bringing you back to the time when you were studying. It's better than fast food novels. Fast food novels are easy to read and easy to read. They are as necessary as toilet paper but not high-quality products.

Can it be done faster? Two or three chapters a day are not enough. Can I start updating 20 chapters a day?

The word 'him' appears so frequently in the article that it makes my head hurt.

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The character of this protagonist is really perfect. He is not like some losers who are angry and surprised at every turn. He speaks and behaves like a clown.

After I finished writing my feelings, I read everyone's comments and thought they were good reviews. But when I saw people saying this and that, I couldn't even sleep. If you think it's good, you can write it for everyone to read. This book ranks first among the immortal novels I've read in the past 10 years. It's not easy to find a novel that is written from the heart. The author writes slowly and is not like them. Knowledge, today I saw the part of practicing in the polar night, especially the golden crow falling down the well. The plot design is really good, the description is good, and the lantern refining later is good, no matter where I look, I really can't find faults in this book. Don't be influenced by them. I will write ten million words in the ending. I will study the legend of mortals cultivating immortals in the future, and wait for my son and grandson to continue reading it.

You have to scold, but you still have to chase.

The previous one was a masterpiece, but when it came to the incident of the half-demon catwoman, it was no longer for people to read. The author's brain circuit began to go abnormal. It was probably a matter of property issues for the sister of a former colleague who was practicing Qi or building foundations. He killed the prince of the Yuanying family, and was not able to finish it. He was hunted down and killed a lot of relatives and friends, etc. Anyway, it was just like a genius... I gave up after watching the whole story. The author really doesn't understand who he is and what he does.

Even if you scold, you still have to scold, and if you chase, you still have to chase.

In the future, when I see someone saying that he was almost able to become a god or something, I scold him every time I see him. Look at his attitude towards writing and updating over the years. You guys are really tolerant and even become a god... Bah.

I haven't read this book yet. I browsed the comment area, and it seems that everyone is saying that it is not good to read after a hundred chapters, and it is not good to read after Tiandu. Then, except for those who agreed with the comments, others seemed to have nothing to say about the plot except attacking others for being trainees. Can anyone tell me whether this book is worth reading?

I have read all of his books, but this book still gives me the same feeling, chaotic. There are currently four main lines, one big and three small. The big main line is full of chaos, the small main line is to return to the Zhao family for revenge, one is to enter the world for Tiandu Mountain, and the other is the battle between the aristocratic family and the Qing Xiu. The Zhao family's affairs will definitely be discussed later, but Tiandushan ended it after two copies were made when he entered the world. There are two hidden threads, one is about the protagonist's aunt, and the other is about the secrets of the world. But the problem is that all the pits are unfinished, and some threads just break after pulling out a little thread. A pit can't play a role in promoting the plot. What's the point of digging this pit? Did you tell Elder Chen about the secret of the Kingdom of God in the first copy? What exactly is the Kingdom of God? How does the flaming bird end at the end of the dungeon? Who is the master of Sun Kerui in the second copy of Guangyuan Mansion? What is her identity? Is there any follow-up to the matter of stealing divine power within the Red Flame Sect and responding to the incense wish? What happened to the treasure made from the fusion of the nightmare and the idol? Didn't you read the secret message of the Heavenly Pardon Order that your aunt left for you? The evil cultists are killing people in Guangyuan Mansion, so they just have people patrolling and that's it? Not solved yet? What is the agreement between Tiandu Mountain and Dazhou? What benefits did it provide? The Yuan Magnetic Ring is useless even after hard work. Everything came to an abrupt end. When I started writing this chapter, I forgot what I wrote in the previous chapter. The training methods are also changed every day. The Chunyang Book has not explained clearly how to practice, and it has been changed to Taixu. Before the world map reaches that point, various hints have begun. After the Kingdom of Thousand Mountains, the Southern Wilderness, the Infinite Ghost Realm, and the Sea Clan appear. It is also a small world opened by the gods, another world, and another starry sky. What's the use of your world map implying that it's so complicated? You can explore me Chixiang. There are so many things that I can write but I don't write them. Instead, I say that I have no inspiration. Some immature ideas are hinted at in the early stage, and then revised again and again in the later stage, and then the work is hastily finished as soon as there is no inspiration.

I paid to read your first few books on Qidian. I think you have ideas and writing skills. I still think Lingxiyi Sword among Taoist priests is outstanding. But you are really not a good person. You keep disappointing people. I will take the time to sort out your mess. Whenever you open a new book, I will publicize it. It is not to discredit you, but you are inherently black. I want more people to recognize it in advance and not waste a penny on you.

I have read a lot of books at my fingertips, and it was not until this book that I finally understood why the plots of his books were so thin, because he only knew these three things. Just like the protagonist of this book, every time the Xueshan sect assigned him a task, except for fighting and teaching, he would not do anything else, and he would not even give a reason. I used to think that the author had other plans, but when I saw the protagonist walking all over the world without investigating the case, I understood that it was not the author who had other plans, and the author himself could not write such a plot, so he directly arranged for the protagonist to ignore it. But one trick can be used all over the world. You can make money after writing these three axes, but you will always stay in the same place. Just like what is written in the book, no matter how good the scenery is, you will get tired of it after looking at it for a long time. I still remember the amazing feeling when I read the Huang Ting trilogy, but now I can't read the new book. My writing has not improved, but my character has become eunuch-like. Your current results are what you deserve.

I started watching it yesterday, and I saw the killing of the prince in one breath. I almost passed it before I could catch my breath. I originally planned to watch it in one sitting, to see him killing the favored prince for a woman who was not a friend, but suddenly I lost interest in watching it. Slow down, I have to slow down, I thought it was this fairy grass. As a result, it suddenly became genetically modified. Who can bear it? It's not a plot problem, but it doesn't match the character design and style at the beginning. It doesn't match. I was quite comfortable eating Malatang, but suddenly a piece of fried chicken came out. It's not that it's not delicious, but it doesn't match. Are you so willful?

I feel that many people like the kind that kills the whole family at every turn, or kills one person every ten steps. I think the author's core is more peaceful, not so angry, and at the same time, the characters will change well. At first, some NPCs may be angry or against the protagonist, but with the growth of spiritual practice, the anger of these NPCs has gone down, but the anger of some readers has increased.

Kissing the Fingertips is such a good name, and it sounds like a great author once you hear it.

I don't know what he wants to do. It's just like looking at the scenery on the roadside. One moment, he fights a powerful opponent to the end for a big grudge or a chance encounter, and wants to protect a small town to the end. The next moment, he treats the people of the world as if they are feathers and pushes them towards the end of the road. The characters are very separated.

Good books should be rewarded🤓

It's really embarrassing. If you look carefully at the front, you can see that the protagonist and Zhuang Xinyan are not even friends. Under normal circumstances, the protagonist would not even visit. Not only did I watch this chapter specifically, my reaction was also abnormal. When Zhuang Xinyan heard that someone was visiting, even though Xiaosi mentioned the appearance (very different from before, very different style), she still thought of the protagonist. The protagonist saw what Zhuang Xinyan said was strange, deliberately explained, and inexplicable. Zhuang Xinyan had already chosen not to need help, and he even spent a lot of money to buy information. Knowing that the royal family was behind the attack, he still wanted to assassinate the royal family. This is the royal family, and your sect must obey its orders. When the protagonist contacted and transformed before synthesis, he transformed into Zhuang Xinyan to serve him. I wonder if the name "Zhuang Xinyan" has a special meaning. Is it the author's first love? 🙂Otherwise I can't explain why it suddenly became abnormal.

Fingertips to pump. Stay updated and do your best!

The author's writing style is actually very good, and he grasps the meaning and charm of the immortal chivalrous very exquisitely. He can often vividly describe the chivalrous spirit and the ethereal charm of the immortal way with just a few strokes. But in terms of building a world view and setting the background, it is unspeakably bad. It all starts at a high level and ends at a slow end. Obviously you can write some small but beautiful stories, set the story line and story background circle and just call it a day. However, you always have to write bigger and bigger, to engage in cross-border ascension and change of maps. It is recommended that the author should write smaller and complete the story line from beginning to end. Don't always expand the world view and do things that you are not good at.

What the person who posted the long picture made the accusation is probably true, and many people's comments can confirm it. I couldn't stand it when I saw the murder of the prince. The protagonist has no motive to kill. Many people say that this is the style of the author's protagonist, who often goes on a killing spree because of trivial things. I can't stand it. Think about it, is it reasonable for Zhang Yu to suddenly be bullied by money and power at the auction, and then suddenly rob and kill him for revenge? For other protagonists, this may be their job. But Zhang Yu has always used his realm to overwhelm others. There has never been anyone in the Mingcang sect behind him who has more financial resources and power than him. In the eyes of others, he is probably like a towering peak. The sky is high and the sky is vast behind him. His body and the sky and the earth are unstoppable. His relatives and friends are leisurely and contented under this high mountain. This is the charm of Zhang Yu. When did Zhang Yu pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger as a guest star in the robbery, this character design collapsed. Character is really important. Something that is obviously very disconnected happens to the protagonist, which is like a sudden catastrophe entering the brain and causing death.

This is not a bad ending, what is a bad ending! Bad review, a waste of my money and time.

The old eunuchis gone

What I wrote before is good, but there is something wrong with the killing of the prince. What is your operation of reducing the protagonist's IQ to zero in order to create conflict? Even if you write that the prince had a hand in your mother's murder, that's fine. It's just a casual relationship with someone who has no friendship, no interests, and has been taken advantage of. Are you thinking of CCB?