I Take on the Disciple Immortality in the World of Immortality

Many of the current immortality writings require a foundation-building ancestor to write hundreds of chapters, and I'm really convinced. Even the true immortal ants don't know when they will see it.

The way the characters speak is very similar to that of modern lower-class people, and it feels very disconnected

The writing is good. I really like reading it. Good luck to the author!

When I read it, I felt that the author was not writing a novel about cultivating immortals, but a novel about games. It was like reading a novel.

People who read this kind of writing prefer it. It's about cultivating and showing off. You fighting life and death yourself doesn't fit the style of your writing. But overall I can still watch it

Ant, you are updating too slowly, you are already on your way to death! ! !

I read it in one sitting, it was very good, not toxic A few places were too lengthy and detailed, and I almost wanted to stop what I was doing and fast forward

The character description skills need to be improved. It feels like reading an outline. The plot is interesting.

Find a Tianlinggen to play with him in . If he can't suppress it, just knock him unconscious and "ascend to the mortal world"

Writing must be practiced. There is no concept of what is taught between master and apprentice. Writing is poor, just like a running account.

The details are a little boring, but at least the protagonist's IQ is online most of the time, and he doesn't act too rigidly. The evaluation is just a family stir-fry.

Are the demonic ways here all fishing-for-profit? Mortals who are cultivating immortality still know the magic way.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

Teaching geniuses is nothing but teaching idiots and trash to become geniuses.

Starting from the end of Chapter 55, the plot has become boring. I thought it would be interesting if I skipped to the disciple's return. Unexpectedly, the author became more and more verbose, with more nonsense and more explanations. Many of the explanations were just for the sake of word count, and his inner activities were just talked back and forth. Looking back, I hope it will get better