I, the Son of Luck, Am No Match for Your Three Generations of Immortal Cultivation?

Just finish reading the mortal chapter. The following chapters on cultivating immortals are all the same routine, with a different name. First, start-up funds, then hidden methods, then poisoning methods, and finally development, and then enter the new world and start the cycle again. 😐

I can also write similar plots in each chapter, and the more readers read, the less interesting it becomes.

Already invested

It is recommended not to read it. The number of words in Zhangzhang is very low. It is very rubbish. There are panels in Zhangzhang, even twice in one chapter. There is no writing, it's all panels. Of the two million words, half a million of them are panels.

The protagonist runs around all over the map. He can't stay on a map for more than a few chapters. He is like a disaster star. When he gets there, he will fight.

The author gave the protagonist an earth spiritual root but wrote that the protagonist can only cultivate immortality with a medium-grade spiritual root. I am really speechless. Others cannot cultivate immortality.

A little gangster can beat up ten adult men who have been working all year round, and a small boss can beat thirty or forty. Is this a martial arts sect or a local gang? Who with such strength will come to collect protection fees for a piece of trash like you? In a word, you are not allowed to carry sacks to pay taxes.

Author, have you misunderstood Hong Fu Qitian? You are obviously turning a bad situation into a good one! Hongfu Qitian is sitting at home and all opportunities will come to his door!

There is one point that is poorly written. Your handling of data is completely random. I just read Chapter 170. It has long been described that the ability to upgrade to a level has increased dozens of times. As a result, when writing specific data later, it was very awkward. It takes the protagonist a day to reach the hundreds of kilometers described in Chapter 169. Does the author have any common sense? A migrating bird can fly very far every day. The protagonist's foundation building can't fly as fast as a bird? Then how did your description of running out of afterimages during Qi training and using level 2 talismans to practice Qi go faster than the speed of sound? When the protagonist transferred Qi training, it was clearly stated that 3000 kilometers 7,8 days is very slow. Then in the middle dozens of chapters, the protagonist's speed is hundreds of times faster. In Chapter 169, is the protagonist a flying curve? The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. I can't help it anymore and I have to vent here.

What's better than the system? Originally, the cultivation progress was 0, but after taking the elixir, the progress was improved by more than half! The luck value consumed by getting married is only reduced by one-fifth! What's even more awesome is the distance of 3,000 kilometers. The protagonist said he could fly there in seven or eight days! OMG! 3,000 Kilometers! Fly for seven or eight days! The average speed is less than 20 kilometers per hour! It's not as fast as riding a bicycle!

This is to make the time traveler protagonist look like a real indigenous protagonist. It's boring.

Every time I see the protagonist's apprentice calling the protagonist master, I feel like the protagonist is a car mechanic. Is the author really confused about the fundamental difference between a master and a master?

There must be a sister and a child bride at the beginning... Without this setting, most writers probably wouldn't know how to develop the plot. Another "sister flow"

Luo Li is so chatty, there are a lot of things going on in his mind, and he also has the inner thoughts of the person being killed before killing him. He talks a lot, and the word count is all too low. I really regret subscribing to 100 chapters.

The last book was a really cool and fast harem novel, and the results were good, but the pace of this one is slower.

I won't say whether the writing is good or not. The most unbearable thing is that every time I get an opportunity, I have to shout "what". It's too dramatic.

The plots of each stage are 99% similar. They predict disaster and run away immediately, and then improve their cultivation level after predicting the opportunity. There is no other plot, so you can watch it when you have a poop or have insomnia.

This childhood sweetheart will only be thought of when the protagonist wants to have sex. I think it is purely for literary purposes. It only takes half a chapter to go home and chatter. Whatever benefits there are, hide them away

How could there be a catastrophe in an extraordinary and concrete world, with such destiny and luck?

The writing is very poor. After reading 10 chapters, you can understand the author's level.

It's all from a third-person perspective, it's all a fucking account, there's no emotional change at all, it's unrealistic. One hundred more dollars

What's the use of a heroine? It feels like it's to satisfy the male protagonist's desires, no different from fjb

The data written is very illogical. There are also many unreasonable things in the Hunyuan Talisman practiced by the protagonist. For example, the earliest Fireball Talisman can be upgraded to the Green Lotus and Earth Fire Talisman, and the amulet can be upgraded to the Black Turtle Talisman. This shows that low-level runes can be evolved by relying on heavenly materials and earthly treasures or by comprehending various heaven and earth Dao patterns. In this way, low-level runes can still be used after high-level evolution. There is no need for similar runes to appear repeatedly, which is a waste of life runes. Position, for example, the functions of the Golden Light Talisman and the Wanjian Chao Zong Talisman are basically the same. Just upgrade the Golden Light Talisman to the Wanjian Chao Zong Talisman. In fact, the runes need to be expanded and written. The talisman represents the world, and everything can be a talisman. One talisman is one world, but the rhythm is not grasped well. The protagonist's fifth, sixth, seventh and eighth grade opportunities feel completely irregular and too scattered, plus the data is a mess

To be honest, it's okay to read it as a short story. There are no ups and downs in the plot. You can pick up treasures every few pictures and continue in another place. In fact, you don't need to read the content after chapter 200, just look at the table of contents. If this book is free, you can still read it. It's a bit of a trap if you spend money. The main content changed the location and the treasures were actually written the same in every chapter. I was determined to see if there were any surprises at the end. I overestimated the author 😴 After reading more than 300 chapters, I looked at the table of contents and found that I could understand it. I finished reading 😁😁😁

It's unremarkable. Among the many novels about cultivating immortals, it can only be said to be a dispensable type.

The protagonist also wants to upgrade the Hunyuan Talisman Pen and other magical treasures to become immortal weapons!

Subscribe to a chapter and speak. Is the protagonist of this book still a disaster? The last one poisoned me to death. Every time I changed the map, people and creatures perished.