The Rise of the Family: Start with Daily Intelligence

What I want is the qualification to stand in front of you.

There are all positive reviews and no negative reviews. It seems that as long as there are negative reviews, they will be deleted. Those who give positive reviews are all machines. If I comment like this, it will also be deleted. I don't know how long it will be kept. If you are deleted and unable to comment, you will be permanently banned.

The villains are the ones who are destined to be the villains. The Li family, the Zhang family, and the Liu family are all destined to have their destiny. They are constantly encountering various rare treasures and adventures. Even if they are in danger, they can still escape death. The protagonist's family is quite unlucky. Even if the chance is robbed, the family members are also unlucky. They will die when they encounter any danger. The protagonist has a lot of opportunities and exchanges of information to get promoted to the foundation building. The Liu family and the Lei family get the opportunity to be promoted.

It feels like the author wanted to write a group portrait. The result is that the protagonist has too many roles and the protagonist has accelerated his cultivation. He has been in seclusion for a few years. There are many supporting characters who are very talented. There are more scenes at the beginning. There is no description later. His children do not recognize him. For example, Fu Molan, the intelligence said that he will become a Yuanying in 200 years, so he should be adopted by a Qi training family. As a result, the protagonist cuts off his beard. After so many years, it is still a foundation in the protagonist's family. With these resources, it is difficult for people to believe that he can become a Yuanying in 200 years. Doesn't this delay others? 😳😳😳😳😳

Don't let Shangguan Hongyu down. Don't have a single female protagonist in family stories.

If the Nanman invades, can't you just kill them?

I really don't know what's the point of writing about a family cultivating immortality? People's hearts are selfish, and the family's cultivation of immortality is purely to cultivate enemies for themselves. Are people from the same family worth cultivating? No, only a handful of people deserve it. Even if these very few people become successful in cultivation, they will definitely fight among themselves when there is a conflict of interest! He also selflessly dedicates himself to the family, what are you thinking about?

The first 50 chapters are really encouraging to quit. The author should fix them when he has time. I have already made four or five small mistakes. There is no need to forcefully create conflicts, although you can solve them quite quickly. The first 50 chapters are all trying to persuade people to quit. How many people will stay? Look at how hard you have written 5 million words. The first 50,000 words have a higher weight than the last 5 million words.

The writing of the heroine is too cliché and the plot and details are average. Please write as little as possible.

An abstract family, how can a family be formed with just these few resources? People are much better than this kind of family when it comes to chance. It's outrageous. If you have a huge world to enjoy and have a lot of things, it's okay to say that the king does not see the king. It's okay to have few means and a low rank. A group of people with few foundations worthy of being called a family?

I have caught up with the latest chapter, it is good to watch, more to come. I also hope that the scenes with the children will be more and the scenes with other tribesmen will be longer.

After doing the math, I found that this relationship lasted seven years, so that was the seven-year itch. I also saw Da Da talk about the plot of the novel and movie. Could it be that your fiancé slept with your best friend? If it's just a piaochang, let's go through it. Seven years is not easy. They should be family members. They have gotten along with each other, and they have been together since junior high school. They should all be first loves. Childhood sweethearts are so rare. They are both engaged. It means that the men have no other problems and feel that they still need to give each other another chance.

Your book is very similar to Golden Finger from Fantasy Lords: Starting from the Pioneer Knights.

The most common problem with such daily intelligence cheat articles is that they attach too much importance to cheats, which leads to the protagonist always doing things according to the daily intelligence, thus turning the plot of the article into a running account with no main line. The information is constantly updated every day, and the protagonist does the same thing, with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. This article seems to have a clear theme, which is the rise of the family. However, the rise of his family was extremely sporadic. All in all, the book seems to want multiple lines of development. However, the lack of writing power to control multiple threads leads to the plot being incoherent and very fragmented. The intelligence guided by the golden finger is not very related to each other. It can only be said that the correlation between them is that they are all equipped on the same person. Are there any objects in intelligence a that are necessary to do the things in intelligence b? At present, it seems that there is not. Is there any interpersonal relationship in intelligence a that is indispensable in the execution of intelligence b? It seems that there is none at present. So going back to what I said at the beginning, perhaps the biggest irreparable flaw of the intelligence-based Metal Fingerprint is the fragmented nature of the intelligence, which determines the fragmented nature of the protagonist's behavioral logic. The fragmented nature of the protagonist's behavioral logic contributes to the fragmented nature of the plot that extends around the protagonist. Sometimes the writing does not feel like a novel, but like an accounting article. I remember it was a story about the protagonist following the advance ledger of family information to clear an account in reality. Maybe there is nothing we can do.

The progress is a bit slow. At this pace, writing about Nascent Soul, Transformation, Void Refining, Fusion, Mahayana, and Tribulation will not be completed in the next year or two. It is true that the plot description and character portrayal are good, but some plots are a bit like matryoshka dolls. The protagonist is like Tang Monk and everyone wants to seize the body. Some side details, such as some family conflicts, are actually unnecessary, such as Mrs. Yongyi's plot to fief, etc. A work is like a work of art sculpture. The bloated parts should be optimized appropriately, and the thin and deficient parts should be supplemented appropriately. It is not easy for the author to carve out bit by bit, but can you think about it from a macro perspective of the entire work? Look at the entire work as a whole and then adjust it, so that it will not collapse easily.

The names of low-level magic weapons are too big, like Dragon and Phoenix, Taixu and the like.

I just read a hundred of them, but I always feel like the heroine is a bit fucked up! Don't know why?

The leveling down was too harsh. At the beginning, Mo Lan said that he would be a Nascent Soul monk in 100 years! As a result, after four or five years of cultivation, I was still at the fourth level of Qi training. How could I become a Nascent Soul monk 100 years later with this qualification! And that ghost pet, and the little green snake were both suppressed too hard.

After watching more than half of it, the protagonist Kuku gives birth to a baby and doesn't care at all. The other characters are okay, but the sight of the protagonist's child makes my blood pressure rise.

Shangguan Hongyu

I think the plot of this book is a bit interesting. There are many different aristocratic families with their own calculations. The plot is not monotonous, and there are no big loopholes in the logic. It is quite reasonable. It's a pity that it's not very popular. I don't know if there will be eunuchs.

1. When writing an intelligence article, the villain should be a little smarter 2. The pig's feet should at least be calm and let the supporting characters or servants highlight the pig's feet's decision-making 3. I hope the author will continue to write family stories. Come on.

I think the descriptions of Liu Meizhen in recent chapters are okay, and they seem to be a bit stronger than the male protagonist.

Liu Yunzhen was reincarnated and came back from time travel. She is not scheming, but constantly burying the hatchet.

At the beginning of Chapter 400, I would like to ask if the protagonist's grandson will inherit the throne? If the next county king is not the grandson of the protagonist, that would be too poisonous, and I don't want to see the rest.

Intelligence documents are like this. Once exchanged for cheap, they will be lost. Just thinking about the information can make you lose your head... But this style of pretending to be slapped in the face is really a bit old... The villain is just like eating Xuan Mai and trying his best to kill people one after another. The meeting is also funny. Every time the dark plot is revealed by the protagonist's intelligence document, it is more pitiful than the clown.

The label says it says time travel, but the first two chapters seem to be written like indigenous people. What are the ingredients? Can anyone tell me about Shen Nong?

I originally signed up for hundreds of chapters, but I was really speechless when I saw that Chun Yuyue was written to death. It was originally a good article, so why did I add counter-material to the good article? I'm not in the mood to read anymore...

Excellent and refreshing article, very comfortable to read, more updates from the author

I think it's good to have new stuff coming out.