Sufferland: Defying Fate with the Dragon-Reversing Blade

You can let the protagonist get a few more vests, like Shi Yanwen, the Tibetan Man, and the Black and White Man. I really want to see Su Huanzhen's reaction when she sees Shi Yanwen again. Like this, just when everyone was fighting to the extreme, the pure yang penetrated the ground, and only a powerful palm energy of pure yang was seen coming from the sky. I was surprised to hear the familiar poem horn ringing: recalling confusion and killing, how was the hatred in the past, writing black poems on silk with endless hatred, working hard and sleeping all night in vain. The long-lost Yunzhou great Confucian scholar Shi Yanwen is passing away.

Pig's feet is going to kill his father and become enlightened. I'm optimistic about you. Come on, Ouli? !

Can the heroine be Nvya? The devil has to fall in love! ! !

It feels like the author is a little lost now and has added too many elements of cool writing. In both Strange Phenomenon and Mysterious City, the author copied the outline and pressed fast forward just to usher in the Emperor Qi Tian. But the plot and characters of Qitian Emperor itself are very blank and single. The overall look and feel is not as good as bosses like Guiliang, Alai, and Liuhuo. The text of the novel does not cover up the truth, and in the end it will only bring about a paler depiction. Finally, pay attention to rhythm control and screening of the original plot. At least it should show the cunning, cunning and oppressive feeling that the period boss should have.

The author of the Japanese chapter was really excited about it!

At this point in writing, I feel that the flavor at the beginning is gone😔. I wanted to read Daolong. Later I found that it was okay. However, starting from Daoji and Demon, it seems to have changed a bit, but I can't tell where it has changed. I must read it every day. I haven't read the last few chapters of Japan. I just don't have the desire to read it. The further I go, the less desire I have to read. Does it lack the taste of Thunderbolt? I can't explain it clearly, it just became a kind of routine. Maybe I watched too many dramas, and I always hoped that the protagonist would have a reversal. But later on, the Sword Saint and the God of War were all taken over, and I was a little confused. The Central Plains side seems to have become dispensable again. Except for Lian Emei being alive and the rabbit being dead, it is the same as the original version. Apart from Yue Tianxing and Dragon Soul, is there any big difference? Moreover, there is no prioritization of Japan and the Central Plains, and the emphasis on Japan is too great. The space on the Central Plains is pitifully small. As for the previous "Nan Mo", I can still watch it. When I came to Japan, you basically updated it and I replayed it. I support you. But what happened later was the Four Gods? I just looked at the table of contents and it was gone. 😞 I don't want to read it. It's not that the original is not good, but you need to keep the feeling of thunder, otherwise the separation between front and back will be too big. Forget it, I just read the last chapter again today. I was a little excited. Please forgive me for the confusing sentences. I hope this book will be popular, and I hope the author can write it well. I like puppet theater novels, and I also like the world built by puppet theater. If you are a fan of the same person, you must be the same 😁. A small amount of original work is fine, such as the one you wrote about Dark Evil Emperor That's good. It adds innovation to the original version, rather than changing the Japanese chapter. Alas, I kind of doubt that you didn't write the Japanese chapter... Okay, I typed so many words without knowing it 😄😄😄

There is no humanity in the writing, and the protagonist does not get married or have children. The alliance doesn't celebrate when it wins a battle, it doesn't hold banquets, and it doesn't upgrade its meritorious soldiers.

The author's current writing gives the impression to Pili fans that he is copying Baidu Encyclopedia and adding a few clips. The world view, character lines, and plot are all poorly written.

Author, would you like to consider using the last Guiyang Liuzhanqian to fuse it with the Cang'er knife? And like the Jidu Sword of Lord Wu Luohu, it can be long or short. The Cang'er Sword is really handsome. It cooperates with the dragon energy in the invisible body of the sword to form a dragon armor, which has both attack power and defense. 😏 .

It's been a bit sluggish lately, and it doesn't have the excitement of a battle of wits and courage with the villain. The protagonist has control over everything, so why is he just having fun?