Kǔjìng: The Chronicle of Otherworldly Gods and Demons

What's the point of choosing someone who's not popular, not particularly handsome, and not good-looking? It would be better to create a new character, or another handsome and popular tragic hero or villain, such as Shepherd God, King of the Demons, Earth Cocoon Infinite, Xuan Kui Chi Tian, ​​Divine Master, Long Jian, Xia Bodhi, Xuan Tong, etc. There are too many choices. Choosing a descendant of the Demon King from Another Dimension Demon Realm won't generate much popularity or appeal!

The main characters have been revolving around the same themes from Blade's Edge to Heaven's Sin, and this has been repeated several times over. It gets boring after a while; it's just rehashing old material.

This is the author's fourth Pixiv novel. I've been reading them all the way through since Dao Wuxing. Of the four, the first one was the most successful, achieving the best results. The character of Dao Wuxing inherently created a sense of anticipation, leading to several interesting storylines.

The protagonist is a bit too treacherous, even more righteous than Tunfo... Truly a pillar of the righteous path.

Author, is there any point in writing like this? You're writing about a protagonist from another world who doesn't act according to his own principles. What was your purpose in saving Tan Wuyu? A favor? Can you get it back? You're writing like a righteous person, but we read fanfiction for the imagination, not for following the original story exactly. What's the point of your book if you follow the original plot exactly?

The main character's art style is peculiar, and the dolls are too ugly.

Finally, it's open again. Let's proceed cautiously and avoid overexertion.

When will you stop writing this plot? I've repeated it in several books already, and I'm getting tired of it.

Please stop using terms like "first-class" and "super first-class" to describe the characters' cultivation and combat power, as you did in the previous books. It's a bit awkward to read.

This is too weak. When will we finally see some famous quotes from the War General?