Yang Guo: Was I Ever That Crazy?

I don't understand it a bit. The protagonist's golden finger is emotional points. It makes people have emotional ups and downs. Then what kind of talent do you want to copy? Should it be to be a storyteller, or run a newspaper, copy novels, tell ghost stories or something?

I heard that there is an original heroine, right? A fan writing an original heroine?

There are Guo Fu, Xiao Longnu, Cheng Ying, Lu Wushuang, and Gongsun Lue in the original work, so there is no need to add the original heroine, right?

The idea is good, but the sentence breaks, punctuation and writing style are a bit uncomfortable.

I don't understand. Hong Qigong taught the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, but he lacked some internal skills. The protagonist also wanted to find a Taoist temple to donate some money to learn internal skills. In the story of Yitian Slaying the Dragon, Shi Huolong practiced the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, but he failed to practice it.

Is there something wrong with the punctuation you use?

System flow: The entire world is just a plaything of the system, and the purpose of the system is to provide fun to the system's creator.

Hurry up and push the martial arts contest to get a bride, it's smelly and long.

The writing is neat and tidy, and the dialogue is neatly word for word.

I have opened a new book, which is good. In fact, Jin Yong fans have a much larger audience than Pili fans. It's just that there are too many people writing, so it's not easy to write new things. Come on, author.