My Fabricated Cultivation Method: Disciple, You Actually Mastered It?

Actually, it's well-written. I was initially discouraged by the comments, but then I remembered a line from the novel: "If I don't see it with my own eyes and fully understand it, how could I possibly draw conclusions? Wouldn't I be incredibly vulgar?" Here's my monthly pass; the pacing is also good. I finished it all in one afternoon. Highly recommended! Highly recommended! Highly recommended!

I've thought through the subsequent realms: the three innate realms—True Qi, True Essence, and Ultimate Essence. In the innate realm, you cultivate True Qi, which transforms into True Essence, drawing upon the power of heaven and earth to cultivate the Ultimate Essence attribute. Then comes the Divine Intent realm, where you comprehend the will of martial arts.

I hope Qidian will add a function to block authors. 😅😅😅

If you're not talented, don't write poetry; just copy some from the internet. It's not better than yours.

It's so simplistic, repeating the same thing over and over again. There are so many settings online; you could easily copy enough for a whole book, and this is still so simplistic.

Here it comes! The invincible master of the same realm, hahaha! Half-step to perfection, half-step to peak, half-step to great perfection!

The protagonist in the author's writing is like a useless piece of trash, always hesitant and indecisive. The author's own writing skills are also very poor; he's afraid of inconsistent power levels, yet he writes the disciple's feedback rate to him to be so high, numerically overwhelming the protagonist, but then he himself is a coward who doesn't dare to fight. The protagonist's personality is that of a petty, hypocritical, and utterly despicable person.

Forget about internal energy; directly cultivate Yang Spirit Qi and Blood, and you'll be invincible in martial arts.

Let the protagonist discover his ability to make things up sooner rather than later, otherwise sticking to the same formula is too toxic.

Xu Yan's Divine Intent Realm is enough to kill someone in the Refining God Realm. The protagonist is a whole realm higher than his disciple, yet he's still afraid of a dozen or so peak Refining God Realm cultivators. I don't know what the author was thinking; the power levels are all messed up.