My Fabricated Cultivation Method: Disciple, You Actually Mastered It?

Wow, wow! The author has such a wild imagination! Not only has he written an unconventional creation myth, but also an unconventional Investiture of the Gods. It's a pity this book should be just as good as Battle Through the Heavens, but why isn't it popular? Maybe the title is bad?

The protagonist is willing to teach despite his deception, and the disciple is willing to learn based on his imagination. The master and disciple complement each other, and the realm setting is good. However, the plot is too monotonous, and the constant crushing of opponents in battles is too bland. The daily descriptions are like writing a diary, and some scenes are forced to be funny, which feels like a drop in intelligence.

I really want to ask the author, what's the point of this feedback you designed? It seems like not having feedback wouldn't have any impact anyway, since the protagonist doesn't need it. The apprentices basically handle all the fights, and they almost always crush the opponents. Isn't this hundredfold feedback redundant for the master? This so-called protagonist just sits there drinking tea from beginning to end, barely even standing up. I don't know what the point of their existence is.

Unbelievable. High school student writing? I'm not saying anything more. Otherwise, I'll get flamed.

The book's concept is decent. The main problem is the excessive amount of time devoted to the self-created cultivation techniques and the disciple's training, which makes the reader drowsy. Novels are meant to be read for their plot, and over a hundred chapters are still focused on the disciple's cultivation. The main storyline hasn't progressed much.

The plot is just endless nesting, and the level of prestige of the realms created later on has completely disappeared, basically no different from ordinary realms. Then there's a lot of nonsense, with a single sentence repeated about ten times within three chapters!

This disciple is too overpowered, even more amazing than having a cheat code. He can create cultivation techniques casually, and just by giving him an idea, he can create a cultivation path. It's even more exaggerated than having a system.

Overall, it's a pretty good book. The writing is smooth and the balance of subtlety, pretentiousness, and behind-the-scenes maneuvering is just right. The subtlety doesn't feel suffocating, nor does the pretentiousness feel forced. The minor characters in the plot aren't unintelligent, with only one or two occasionally appearing.

It can help pass the time, right?

Nice