The Mahjong Boy Who Never Breaks His Yao

Keep it up, you're the only one still alive who writes about mahjong.

At least the first chapter of the previous book was enjoyable; I could at least read around chapter 300. This book... The second round is about going head-to-head with the protagonist of the previous work. Then I found out that the protagonist was related to Bai, and that they even created this disgusting, foul-smelling thing called the Doom Authority...

Keep it up, big brother who writes mahjong articles!

I still prefer the Tianma part of the previous book, and the character development in Mahjong Soul was also good. The concept of authority felt like a mistake; it wasn't as engaging as the superpowered Mahjong. This fanfiction felt a bit boring, especially considering the close timeframe.

This feels like a sequel to the previous book. The beginning is a bit inexplicable, and it directly touches on the underworld, like some kind of underworld mahjong game. Many people couldn't continue reading the previous book after the mahjong plot ended, and this one is being updated slowly with two books published simultaneously. I really don't have high hopes for it. These last few chapters make me wonder if Alan's writing skills have declined.

What's odd about this is that it focuses too much on the protagonist of the previous book. He already showed off his abilities in the previous book; we're here to see the protagonist show off in this one, so there's no need to waste time on it. In fact, spending too much time on it makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. The mahjong part is fine, but the timeline could be expanded to include more characters like Yagi Yui, a new generation character.

It doesn't have the same feel as the previous book (I don't know how to describe it). Part Two: It's not about Gastrodia elata. I've read quite a few fanfictions about Gastrodia elata, and many of the early ones were much more exciting than the previous book, but they were all abandoned, and basically none of them even reached the point of covering the whole country.

If an author is going to include illustrations, they must at least make sure the reader understands what they're talking about so that the reader can comprehend the plot.

So does the author have a group? I finished reading the previous book but still didn't see the group number...

Actually, so far it's been alright, no major problems. This book is only at the very beginning, the plot hasn't really unfolded yet. I just have one question: why does the male protagonist have to be written so extremely femininely? Either make him a female lead, or make him a normal male.