The Mahjong Boy Who Never Breaks His Yao

Come on, the only one who writes about mahjong is still alive

At least the previous book had a good start, at least I can get to about 300 chapters This one... The second game is a confrontation with the protagonist of the previous game Then I found out that the protagonist has a relationship with Shiro, and also created a disgusting thing like the power of doom... I still remember that the writing of this book is better than the previous one... I asked where it was better. I lost my memory at the beginning, and then was blocked by the final boss (although it must have released the sea), and then was given a gift of authority (swill)... I like Butterfly Swimming in the Sea of Shit

Come on, big brother who writes mahjong articles

I still like the Gastrodia elata part of the previous book more, and the character creation of Quehun is also good. The setting of authority feels like a failure, not as good as Super Power Mahjong. This fanfic feels a bit boring, especially if it's so close in time.

This is it. It feels like a continuation of the previous book. The beginning is a bit confusing, and it also directly writes about the underworld, like some kind of mafia mahjong. Many people didn't read the underworld after the Gastrodia plot. Your book is also slow to open in two chapters. I'm really not optimistic about it. In these few chapters, I feel that Alan's efforts have slowed down.

The strange thing about this book is that it has written too much about the existence of the protagonist in the last book. He has already finished pretending in the previous book. We are here to see the protagonist pretending to be cool in this book, so there is no need to spend more pen and ink. Spending more pen and ink will make it a little uncomfortable to read. There is no problem with the mahjong part. The timeline can include more new generations like Yagi Yui.

It doesn't feel like the last book (I don't know how to describe it) Second editor: It's not Gastrodia elata, I have read a lot of Gastrodia elata fanfics. Many of the early ones are much more exciting than the previous book, but they are all eunuchs, and basically I can't write them all. Guo On the contrary, I didn't like the Gastrodia content in the early stages of the book. It relied on belittling the protagonist to flatter the girls. I also didn't like the various writing methods of the original characters in the middle and early stages. However, I liked the content in the middle and later stages more, whether it was black or white.

The author needs to use pictures to at least let the readers know what they are talking about. Only when they can understand can they understand the plot.

So does the author have a group? I didn't see the group number after I finished chasing it...

In fact, I see that everything is fine so far, there is no big problem. The book has only reached the beginning, and the plot has not developed much yet. I just have a question, why does the male protagonist need to be written to be extremely feminine? Either he should be a female protagonist, or he should be a normal male.