Tenma Takes on the National Tournament, Starting at Shiraitodai
天麻从白糸台开始征战全国大赛
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- 1.1M Words
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- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
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You've already written about Gastrodia elata. Why is the main character a man? 😡
Finally, I've written another book on Gastrodia elata.
The romance in the previous book was too understated. It was too restrained, focusing too much on Tianma (a traditional Chinese medicine concept).
Stop writing anything else, let's get started with Gastrodia elata!
On Qidian, your Tianma is the best, the most complete. Stop writing others, hurry up and start writing, and you'll get monthly tickets and subscriptions.
Keep it up! This whole affinity system is perfect for getting married in Mahjong Soul! 🤓
What I don't understand is why there has to be a main plot about rescuing the younger sister. The world of Tenma is just a casual world of playing mahjong. Even if it incorporates other yakuza mahjong worldviews, the main plot should still be about playing yakuza mahjong until you break through to godhood.
I've noticed that your protagonist has two high-level abilities, a ton of talents, skills, and divine favor, yet they're still less useful than a few powerful wields. Take Susanoo's attack, for example; the protagonist's dual-wielding energy is so strong that he can only use quantum switching, sacrificing other abilities to deal with it.
Can you please cut down on all this nonsense and focus more on the actual games and matches? The last book was like that too, forcing me to read more stale content. I came here for mahjong, not a romance drama.
How about Ikkyu Ni spend his whole life writing about Gastrodia elata?
It feels like the author is relying on past successes. Despite starting with Shiraitodai, instead of building relationships with teammates, they're following the path of the original main characters. This is a complete waste of time and energy. How is this any different from the previous book?
Since the last book, I've always felt there were issues with the "show-off" scenes. These last few chapters' face-slapping and show-off moments feel a bit like the last book – bland, yet not worth discarding. I know it's meant to indirectly portray the protagonist as awesome, but the problem is, even if a random passerby wins a 1v3 fight, is that impressive?