Tenma Takes on the National Tournament, Starting at Shiraitodai

You have already written about Gastrodia elata. Why is the protagonist a male? 😡

The emotional line in this book is too plain. I've written about Gastrodia elata so much that I just kept writing.

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Come on, this whole favorability system is fully married in Quehun 🤓

I found that you, the protagonist, have a lot of talents, abilities, and heavenly relatives, but in the end they are not as useful as a few powers. Let's say Susano-o kills the fate of both hands of the protagonist. The protagonist can only use quantum switching to give up other abilities to cope with it. Miyazaki can directly affect the protagonist, not to mention Niemann's memory manipulation. The protagonist really has no resistance at all to the negative influence directly aimed at him.

Can there be less of this mess and more games? The last book was like this, force-feeding. I came to watch mahjong, not a romance drama.

In fact, what I don't understand is why it is necessary to add a main plot of saving my sister. The Tianma world is just a daily world where you can easily play mahjong. Even if other mafia mahjong worldviews are included, the main plot should be about playing mahjong to break through ghosts and gods. I hope you can write your main plot well, otherwise the role of sister will be the same as Xi Lian, the main plot of Bengtie 3.7, With not much role. In the end, just forcing a happy reunion will really be feeding readers Akaashi.

Once you get married, you can write about Gastrodia for a lifetime, okay?

It feels like the author is resting on his laurels. It was clearly Shiratai who started the game, but instead of building a good relationship with his teammates on the same team, he instead followed the path of the protagonist team in the original book. He simply sacrificed his strengths to pursue the weakest. How is this different from this book?

From the beginning of the last book, I have always felt that there is something wrong with the pretense. The face-slapping and pretense in these chapters is a bit like the tasteless and pity feeling of the previous book. I know that I want to describe the pig's feet from the side as awesome, but the problem is a passerby. Even if you win a one-on-three fight, you are awesome. You are an upper-class person with iron gun jade. No matter how awesome the passerby you describe is, we readers know that he is trash in the Mahjong universe, like the woman in the 7th section of Mahjong Baidao. He is very awesome in Baidao. The problem is that the Baidao champion and K Dash were both beaten in the Dragon and Phoenix position, and their Taoist hearts were broken.