What Was Promised Was a Dream, but Reality Turned into a Shura Field?

I think it's unlikely that this book will make money 🤭

The protagonist smokes and leaves. Don't say you just want to leave and you have to say it here. I specially dedicated a chapter just to say this.

I am a long-time fan of this author, so I would like to briefly share my current evaluation of this book. First, I read the last book. To be honest, the early stage, that is, before Chapter 150, was very interesting to me. The delicate emotions and the sense of disillusionment were simply fascinating, but it was also very disappointing after that. I basically fell into a quagmire of knife for knife's sake. Many plots seemed to be imagined by the author with a slap on his forehead. Second, the plot advancement method is still the same. People who have read the previous book can predict the time when the knife will appear in most plots. It is obvious that the author has not made obvious progress in this aspect. However, it can still be seen that the author has put in a lot of effort, because compared to the previous book, there are obviously fewer poisonous points, or even almost none. The plot and emotional advancement are also much more natural, and there are not many controversial points. Finally, I hope the author can continue to make progress and make up for the regrets of the previous book, with less knives and more warmth🙏

I wouldn't be able to write this without a bit of mental illness.

I would like to give a suggestion, if you want to start a harem, the protagonist should not be both pretentious and independent. You want to start a harem but at the same time care about the eyes of the world and keep putting it off.

Here is a unified reply, including the author, who has obviously changed into a new and healthy body, no longer has physical addiction, and has returned to smoking because of psychological addiction😅laughs. And I would like to warn those who think that "smoking is a medicine for adults". They were not addicted to cigarettes when they were young, and when they are worried as adults, they will not suddenly say "Oh, I am so sad, let's smoke a cigarette." Even the cigarette packs say "Smoking is harmful to health." I believe you yourself understand that it is nothing more than addiction and you can't live without it. I really like Ye Wang's words, "Too small."

In the style of Brother Orange, I don't really agree that the label has not healed 😤

Gone. I watched it off and on several times, picking it up and putting it down, picking it up and putting it down again. I really can't stand it anymore. The simulator is completely meaningless now, and there is a woman who has not been written about in detail yet. There are a lot of tangles and tangles. The stomachache disease literature makes me dream back to 10 years. The protagonist's treatment is also, haha, either, regardless of everyone's feelings, he just wants to start a harem, like Mr. Key in "The Opinion of the Student Council", moving towards the goal of happiness for everyone, or abandoning everyone and treating everyone equally. What is the result? If you fall in love with someone else without knowing it, and then your ex comes, just abandon the current one and your ex. The protagonist is not a scumbag created by some simulator, but a scumbag. Nanny, aren't scumbags just not proactive and irresponsible?

One thing to say is that there is nothing to say about smoking in real life, but in the novel world, it is normal for those gangsters and war-like tough guys to smoke when they see blood. It is all a matter of one word. How do I get to this author? Let me explain at the beginning. Is the male protagonist some kind of old smoker who smokes one cigarette a day? So disgusting. To put it bluntly, a male protagonist in a B light novel smokes JB cigarettes. How can you get such a big addiction? I think the character design is not bad.

I specially subscribed to one. It's okay for the protagonist to smoke, but why he smokes for no reason? It feels very abrupt to you. To put it simply, it feels like it was written deliberately, but Mao didn't express it. It doesn't help at all in shaping the protagonist. I just want to say something to you from time to time. Hey, the protagonist is having trouble again. Do you want to screen readers? Okay buddy, admit it, you did it.

Long review, written by the author I haven't read it for a while and didn't expect it to be finished. I still feel that I really fell in love with the radio after reading it. I obviously couldn't read it at first. After a long time, I discovered it again and read the comment section. I was really bored and wanted to see how incredible the writing was. I didn't expect to stay up all night and read it in one go. To be honest, I don't feel much about this book anymore, including the previous one. I haven't joined any book club, so I don't know what the author's mental state is. I just feel that the themes of these two books have fallen into a cliché. They are nothing more than the content of Saya's alien and saving a strange girl who is forced to open a harem. It feels like the author has lost his inspiration and is stuck to this theme. These two books did not give me that amazing sense of pleasure after reading them. The latter really gave me an emotion-driven plot experience. The protagonist seemed to have no clear goal until the end of the book, and it was impossible to express the main line in time or the order of events. However, after careful study, I found that such a smooth and heartfelt plot was guided by the emotions throughout it. To this day, I can still recall the various emotions at those key nodes, such as Yu Ye's departure and then quietly return to see, the big brother's death and the transformation of trees, the robot Yu Ye, and many stories of female protagonists whose names I have forgotten. This should be the so-called radio wave. I don't know the specific mental state of the author, and I haven't read any earlier books. I feel that if you still write a book, there is really no need to stick to the theme of alien species and saving beautiful girls. There is no need to be immersed in the shadow of love reading all the time. With your writing ability, there are a lot of things that you can control and write. I would say that not only the theme can be changed, but the character can also be changed, and the protagonist does not have to be ordinary and indecisive. All in all, don't let Love Reading become your only peak.

. . . . . The writing is good and the plot is good. But it was very depressing and aggrieved to watch, and the male protagonist was also aggrieved in the way it was written. If you want to read sweet love, don't come in. Japanese light novels. The more you read them, the more uncomfortable they become. It's not that the novels are bad, but that they are very good. This novel should be classified as a science fiction love story. The protagonist is useless at every critical moment, and all kinds of files and archives are useless. Reality is tired enough, and the author still resorts to novels to trick tears, which is outrageous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Awesome, awesome! There is a girl minotaur plot in this book (one of the heroines seems to have slept with a girl who likes him). It can be said that it is not the case, but the author deliberately uses ambiguous language. Finally, I added a reset, but the memory is retained, I'll see if I don't mind. To be honest, I'm really disappointed. This trend was already seen in the last book. So goodbye.

I hope it won't be like the previous book where the plot is just for the sake of the knife. Of course, the ending is "he" like the previous book.

After eating the person and wiping them clean, he told her he had cheated on her. Although he was telling the truth, it was too..., And if Liuli really wanted the protagonist to know that she existed, she would have just said no. After dawdling for a few chapters, it felt like she had done nothing. Also, when fighting the inspector, it was too concise. To be honest, when I looked at it, I was the most I didn't even understand whether the inspector was dead or not (maybe my reading was sloppy). When the scum plotted against me, I was wondering if the protagonist had no brains. We agreed to join them together, but it turned out that I didn't feel anything was wrong when we were one on one. Didn't I notice something was wrong when I watched the video? That scum should also appear in it 😒

There is no system involved and the male protagonist is like a. . . Not writing simulations later is like changing the style, turning cool writing into romance. . I really can't stand it anymore. 😒😒

Hey, didn't you change the text in the last few chapters? Why does it feel like it doesn't match the plot I watched a few days ago? Didn't I get caught? Why has it become normal again?

The front is okay, but the back is so bumpy that I can no longer understand it.

Well, I would like to ask if there is a new book club account. Recently, I found out on QQ that the group is gone. I saw that my girlfriend at that time had entered through the system. . .

This book is finished, has the author said that he wants to publish a new book? If so, is there a specific time 😢

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I'm glad I finished reading it, but it's still very vague. Not only the setting, but the ending also feels very vague. It looks like I'm cutting the book in a hurry to finish.

Why is it over? After reading the book for a while, I came back and found that it was finished with just over 200 chapters. This kind of setting can definitely be used to write a few more copies. What a pity.

It's so cool to see a tsundere like Saeka turn into a yandere.

Qing Shuizhe has never been a time traveler, everyone is a savior

It feels much worse than the last love reading, a little disappointing, not sweet enough, not sharp enough.

The author is great. If the book was written in Japan, it would definitely be a hit. It has the flavor of a Japanese light novel romantic comedy 😃

I hope the plot will be more innovative, it feels like I'm resting on my laurels, but I just love watching it 😍

I just like people like Shaxue, it's pretty cool

Author, have you read the Monogatari series? Can I go and see it? Can I take a brief look at it?