Adolescence Will Not Meet the JK Ghost

Wait, I don't mean any harm. Did your inspiration come from Japanese comics about a city where I don't exist?

Wc, I just missed you, the author, on another book a few days ago. I didn't expect you to start writing again today. I must support you.

The title is not Fuyuki City, and the introduction is not about salted duck. Suddenly I no longer have the desire to watch.

It's true or false that Orange is back I'm really back! ! !

I watched it for a long time, but I didn't see any reason why the protagonist fell in love with the heroine and her sister.

The beloved Orange has returned to the starting point of his loyalty!

Damn it, why is it you?!!!

Wait, this doesn't seem to be a model. I misread the title.

Isn't it just like the butterfly effect to keep going through reincarnation? If you watch it for a long time, you will get tired. . I hope the author can polish the plot

Your name is worse than the original name. The more you change it, the worse it gets.

I'm thinking you can't control your limits anymore. You're just a junior high school student, aren't you afraid of being banned? The result is cut directly

Orange God has opened a book? Real or fake? Damn it, I really opened the book!

Adjust well, brothers are waiting for you to come back 😎

To be honest, this book looks better than Teenage Dreams

The poor performance may be due to the weak presence of the main plot at the beginning. The death of the heroine does not seem to be a very urgent matter. In other words, there is a lack of urgency. Moreover, Zhou Mu's reason for solving the case was a bit sketchy. He went deep into the enemy camp under the guise of seduction and directly found first-hand evidence, and there was no reasoning element. Personally, I feel that the main problem is the lack of explosive points in the early stage, which makes this book relatively slow to gain popularity and picks readers.

It's good but the details are too different. I hope the author can polish it and live out the second life!

1: The subject matter is novel. There are beautiful girls, fantasy powers, and suspense reasoning. It is similar to the novel "Winter Comes Again" and has shadows of the "Summer Comes Again" anime. It is good to build on the shoulders of giants. 2: The necessity of the main task is relatively poor. The death of the female protagonist has no inevitable impact on the male protagonist, and the causal relationship is far-fetched. In the first chapter, the pursuit of the real murderer is compared with Moji. The story drives the protagonist, but the pig's feet themselves do not drive the plot. 3: The suspense reasoning in the first chapter is relatively weak. When the sister already knows the ghost, the lack of explanation only affects the perception of flirting; the plot of the deputy squad leader seducing the male protagonist enters the final stage too fast and unrealistic; the "Lin Gui" is a ghost but does not show the ability of a ghost. He only swallows the "soul" later. The foreshadowing to kill the heroine is very useless, just like making a plate of dumplings just to make a bite of jealousy. 4: In the conversation between the male protagonist and Lin Gui in the hospital, he didn't care about the curse of Lin Gui. He was obviously a person who had experienced surrealism, but he had doubts, disapproval, and imprudent attitude towards surreal things. As a result, he was very motivated when he entered the forest house alone. The death of the heroine and her mother later left the audience with no "real feeling" to react. The development is like this, that is, "Oh, this is it" and there is no emotional resonance. 5: What the author is better at is the "emotion" between young people. This book is also the author's attempt at a new theme, and the unsatisfactory results are expected. Although cutting books is normal in this career, cutting books like this without a large number of true fans will still disappoint the audience, and the requirements for the next book will be higher! 6: I hope the author can find his own direction, contribute to his career, and let readers who like your book have more and better works to watch. I wish everyone can be happy in their lives!

The first twenty or so chapters are all about digging holes, making it confusing to read, and it is too difficult to attract new people. In short, pure brainwave writing

There are so few people watching it, I think it looks pretty good

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If the new book is still the same as this one, it still won't be long if I keep fussing over it 😃

The opening content actually feels smoother to read than Winter Reappearance.

I didn't expect it. I didn't expect it. There are too many books that I haven't read. I'll die if I come here today.

I just added the bookshelf and cut it before I even looked at it. . . Many times. The recommendation came at a bad time. 😐

Why cut it. It feels okay

I gave 15 monthly passes, but fortunately I didn't read the content. My dream girlfriend felt uncomfortable when I cut her off. I've learned a lesson.

Does the author have a simulation system text? The first heroine seems to be from a post-apocalyptic world.