Reborn: The Li Family's Path to Immortality

Since you have come back from the tribulation, your realm and understanding should be there. You just need to keep quiet. The early stage will be over so quickly.

I always feel that this book is a new version of an old book. Or an old author. A young man in his 10s or 20s today would not be able to write something like this. Because this routine is an old routine. Time, time is always so elusive.

A book of fairy seedlings has been authenticated... I would like to give three suggestions to the author. One is to never rob. I read a book that said that when pig's trotters saw someone else auctioning a high-grade spiritual plant, they said that this thing is necessary for my path and it is worthy of me. Otherwise, it would be a grudge against me. This woman is destined to me, and not letting me get her is the revenge of blocking the way... The second is not to cultivate demons. There is a book with a monthly price of tens of thousands, which is to prepare a blood sacrifice for millions of mortals in a city to practice martial arts... Also, eight out of ten books are about going on the road of corpse refining... It is hard to watch... The third is to have less emotions, don't stall... Taoists and Taoists, Taoism is in front of the couple...

Don't make the protagonist so strong. In the late stage of foundation building, he is very powerful at most and in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, he will be a bit desperate.

It's getting more and more verbose now, and I have to explain it again and again. . Explanations over and over again! I can't stand it anymore! !

A reborn immortal cultivator, with such a high level of cultivation in the previous life, cannot just do the elixir and talisman making during the Qi training and foundation building period after rebirth! And write a bunch of useless stuff

I saw the free chapters of this book before it was put on the shelves, and then I spent a dollar to unlock it by posting this post. It is not easy to write a book and keep updating it, and it is even more difficult to write it well and achieve results. In order to show support for the author, I would like to briefly talk about my personal reading experience of this book. If there is any inappropriateness or nonsense, the author will forgive me. I have read a few books on family cultivation, from the early books of the same kind, The Rise of the Shen Family, Everlasting Immortality, Qinglian to the later one in which the author's wife cuckolded the author, Xuanjian, etc., Have sprung up at the starting point, but there are not many good and outstanding individuals who read them. The author of Xuanjian said that the arrangement of the novel is the one that makes sense, and the reality is the one that is unreasonable. How to use the reasonable and ups and downs of the plot and character arrangement to express the resonance of unreasonable reality. This is the reason why good books have high subscriptions. How the protagonist or various characters can grow up in the world structure and plot conflicts without losing intelligence and stability is the author's ability and the rise of a great god. From what I have read in this book, the protagonist, who is reborn after ascending to the upper world, is not tactful enough in his actions, and there are many characters and descriptions of the clan girl. The plot seems too dragging, and the repeated pretense and slapping of the clan girl every time she improves her realm is really not as enjoyable as reading. The arrangement of conflicts may also be limited. Regarding writing problems, issues such as the Huang family's friendship with the Lingshi mine and other issues, the family's senior leaders criticized the wisdom of other families' senior leaders as not worth mentioning. They emphasized that they should enter the core level early and arrange some family-friendly events, teaching, searching for spiritual root disciples, interspersed with clan sisters, etc. It's not that it's impossible, but it's too tiring to read,

My Yin Yin, why did you leave the show? . He died miserably in the first life, and died of old age in the second life. Can't we take care of the family's luck? ? At least the elixir formation was successful! !

Your shortcoming with this kind of subject matter is that you overly suppress the past cultivation experience of the reborn person. You have been suppressing the article.

I can't figure it out, I can't figure it out if I wrote about my past life in the Golden Core realm. After all, developing the family can also play a role in breaking through the Nascent Soul. You have already passed through the tribulation period in your previous life. If your family has wool to use, what can I help you with?