Starting from Shituoling and Embarking on the Journey to Immortality

The writing of the novel can only be described as unsatisfactory. The author's grasp of the characters is very unlikeable. The background of the novel is that this world is full of demons, and the people at the bottom are deeply oppressed and suffering. This author's protagonist is not only unsympathetic, but also indifferent to the death of other lives. But at the same time, it is also hypocritical and pretentious. When the old lady who protected him in the early stage died, the protagonist shed a few crocodile tears to save himself. The puppet sister under his hands said that she would be a hostage. I have become a tool in the hands of demons to trap humans, and I feel complacent that they are not considered human beings if they are unconscious, and they will just die if they die. The most terrible thing is that this author is an emotional pervert. By writing a substitute for the dog-licking villain who has no power to take revenge, he then forcibly added a scene to the protagonist (the clown) to watch the villain, the dog-licking monster (the clown), eat the female character who was licked. It made me deeply lament the darkness of human nature. The false monsters in the author's works are boring because they eat people without spitting out their bones, but the characters who embody the darkness in his own heart are the real monsters. I think, the author, you are hurting yourself by being a licker in reality, and then you end up talking about it in the novel. Honestly, I insisted on watching until the end just to see how perverted he really is. The author is not suitable to write that the protagonist is a weak person who survives. He's obviously cheating, but he's still a piece of trash. It can only show how pale the setting is. If you cheat, you have to be worthy of the cheat. I really didn't expect that after cheating on the world view of Journey to the West, I was still watching humans being eaten by monsters without any emotion until today's latest chapter. If another character appears now and is cheating, the literal level cannot beat the monster. The background is that it is a common phenomenon for demons to eat humans. It writes that in despair, one still has to resist the demon, and when he sees a man-eating demon, he tries to kill him, and for those who are temporarily immortal, he marks them and kills them later. Temporary adversity does not make you an accomplice of the devil, but the only resister, a fighter. Wouldn't it be better to write about a little bit of light in the darkness during this process? You are so tired in real life, who wants to see you writing about bitterness, hatred, and colluding with demons? You are here to consume readers, do you know that?

Do you think the lion camel collar in Journey to the West is a metaphor? Wrong, the lion camel collar is actually written about the history of the Ming Dynasty Qu Dajun (late Ming Dynasty) Preface: There was a great famine, and people sold their bodies to the market, called Cairen. There was a man who married into a certain family, and his wife suddenly took three thousand dollars with her husband to send him back quickly. She left with tears in her eyes, her husband left her behind, her arm was broken, and she was hanging in the market. The couple starves to death together year after year, so it is better for the concubine to go to the vegetable market. If you get three thousand dollars, you can travel a mile. The texture of hibiscus is fragrant when cooked, and the milk is used as wontons and people are eager to try it. First cut off the two arms and hang them in the butcher's shop, then cut off the thighs and hold them for soup. If you don't order fresh meat, you will feel hungry after seeing every piece of it. The meat of men is too fishy to be eaten, and the fat of women's skin is condensed and there is less sweat. After three days of my body, only one soul remains. I beg my husband to find a place where the sun is setting. A woman who is born to be a good cook can make her husband live a happy life. A few people were buried alive with full intestines, but luckily the black kite didn't peck them early.

In the first few chapters, I just created some kind of lolita sound, and I was convinced. The novel written ten years ago was almost like this. It was obviously a dark fairy tale, but you are completely like this? Such a good subject matter is a complete waste and has been withdrawn.

I can't stand it anymore. The main character is sentimental and can tolerate his natural depression, but this guy is also mentally ill and has a serious brain disease.

The subject matter is okay, but the author's writing is too rubbish. It's better to hurry up and watch the bad habits lower your IQ.

Can you understand what the author wrote?

Good guy, I haven't stopped after reading a few chapters. When I came to the comment section, I saw some book friends with the same understanding. The male protagonist is indeed hypocritical.

The starting point is really bad. This book is well written, but there is no data. It's a pity. I hope smart push can promote it.

I really can't read it, brother. The character's behavior is logically confusing, the IQ is worrying, the plot is lengthy and lacks conflict tension. I can't just write a book by myself. Can't you see so many negative opinions in the comment area?

He has never thought of a way to leave, but always thinks that he cannot leave. What does the author think?

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the protagonist giving initiation and teaching skills to Xiao Pai. The main character is a real virgin, not suitable for me

😅Some people are still bragging about this, so get away

It's so hypocritical. The protagonist is driven entirely by emotions and not by brain. I haven't seen any analysis of the pros and cons. They are all the author's psychological activities of compassion and compassion. To be honest, it's a bit disgusting to read these 23 years ago.

What's the point of this little pain? I really don't like this character. After reading so many books for so many years, there are very few characters that I don't like right away 😅

A very rubbish book. The protagonist is a virgin and retarded. The plot description is blunt.

The writing of the first few chapters is okay, how to write the dark flow, it is like a mother talking about home life, all kinds of sentimentality, Holy Mother

They persuaded me to quit after less than 12 chapters and wrote a post. There was no abusive content and it was deleted after just over 60 likes. Is the author feeling guilty?

It's been a long time since I've seen a protagonist with such a low IQ.

Recommendation: The protagonist travels to the Shituoling Mountains in Journey to the West and becomes a dishman raised by demons. Facing the hell-like world of demons, the protagonist has no choice but to survive carefully, practice hard, and want to escape to a paradise where demons are not rampant. In the end, he finds that demons are everywhere in the world and he can only resist to the end. The beginning of the book depicts a miserable world, because demons are rampant and cannibalistic, and immortals and Buddhas also regard human life as nothing. This background makes people look forward to the protagonist's journey of resisting and slaying demons. I believe this book will become a masterpiece! Book title: "Starting from Shituoling on the Road to Immortality" Author: Four Rice Waves Status: Serialized (110,000 words) Elements: Demons and Demons Traveling through the Fairy World Hot-blooded Recommended reader types: Fairy novels, fans of hot-blooded literature Highlights of this book: ★There are many original creations in the world of monsters Although this book is a time-travel to Shituoling in Journey to the West, the author has made many original descriptions of the state of monsters and monsters on this basis, which shows his good intentions. ★The description of the protagonist's journey is consistent with reality The protagonist does not have a desire to resist at the beginning, but decides to resist after experiencing fear, escape and despair, which is more realistic. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

It's very well written, why hasn't it been updated for so long?