Changsheng: My Realm Is More Than Perfect

The writing is excellent, but I think there are some things wrong with the plot. It mainly sets the ancient background at the beginning. The protagonist is a servant, but the master-servant relationship with the prince is written as a modern brotherly relationship (you must know that in ancient times, even brothers had to pay attention to their dignity), so it reads a bit awkwardly. , And the character of the protagonist is shown to be indifferent and quiet, but the problem is that it is different from the historical background in which it is set. The character of the protagonist is written as not valuing the kindness of others towards him. To put it harshly, he is rather supercilious, which is inconsistent with the ancient culture of morality and loyalty. So in fact, the only problem is that when the author set the ancient background, the core values ​​he applied were modern, which caused a sense of dissonance. A little humble opinion, I hope it can be helpful to the author.

As long as the protagonist is not a loser, I will continue to pursue it. There are so many geniuses in martial arts who become useless when it comes to cultivating immortals.

I hope that the protagonist Wu Mengmeng can create a gang by himself in the future, called [SWAG]. The gang's philosophy is [to save people with one's body and love the world]! ! !

There is no point in accepting this apprentice, I don't want to read it anymore

The writing is good, but sometimes it feels a bit artificial.

The emperor of a country goes to explore a secret place and takes the lead. What do you think of this setting?

No readers will like this book because of the setting of the Second Prince, but many readers will abandon the book because of this setting. Many authors turn away from the book because they do not understand this simple truth.

Hello, I am your reader. My hometown is in a rural area and I have a donkey. This donkey is very talented and very good at grinding. It is very creative, and the whole village loves to eat the noodles. In fact, countless wealthy people from big cities come here to buy the noodles it grinds. This donkey has extraordinary wisdom and works hard every day. He has been working hard and grinding countless excellent flours. Among them, the highest quality flour even won the world-class "Best Flour" award. We all love this donkey, it is the god in our hearts. But now it is passive and idle and no longer grinds flour. We try our best to coax it and give it delicious food, hoping that it will continue to grind flour. But it didn't want to continue working at all. It said, "I'm tired and want to take a rest." As a result, it was dragged to the entrance of the village by the village chief and the villagers who were angry because they could not eat high-quality flour. They killed it and made it into donkey meat and burned it You said it was true. The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this. Why did it just... Hey, what do you think I am talking to you about? By the way, when are you going to update?

Don't engage in any spiritual root or soul cultivation. Personally, I think this system is really useless.

The second volume is a bit too complicated. Whether it's the plot, the training, or the copy of the legal magical power map, if there is such a big scene in just one Qi training period, the realm behind it will probably collapse.

What shameless old thief changed his vest to write this?

It was okay at the beginning. I couldn't deal with the plot of studying medicine.

The setting and plot are unreasonable. The author is probably not very young and his thoughts are not very mature. The writing is okay. You can read it as a white text. In the pursuit of logical rationality, more than 90% of the books in the starting point cannot be read.

The writing is top-notch, and the plot is confusing and incomprehensible.

I read a few pictures, rambled here and there, had no idea what to do, and couldn't stand to watch anymore. .

You can read the Qi training chapter. After building the foundation, the protagonist starts to have a bad life. This is a common problem in all novels.

It's well written, but I'm a little confused. The imperial court has the world and all the resources and talents at hand. Why is it that there are only two realms of the emperor and the Taifu, but there are three realms of Jianghu? Why don't the realms of Jianghu be separated into one party or even establish a country and become the king? And then support the princes in their fights. Even if the prince he supports wins and becomes emperor, sooner or later he will have to turn against him.

It's a very good book, not too shabby, and has a rational protagonist. Better looking than most of the guinea pigs on the list.

Why has the protagonist been playing dungeons since he left the sect? It's okay to do it once in a while, right? Why do you keep doing it? It's really tiring to watch. I'm either fighting or in the middle of a fight. It's completely different from the previous rhythm.