Zhong Kui Calls Me Good Nephew

I feel that Zhang Guolao's writing is quite ridiculous. He didn't meet the protagonist to ask whether he would sell the donkey. He came to the house and was sent away by the housekeeper, saying that the donkey had been given away. A normal person would ask the housekeeper if he could meet the man and discuss it. After all, it is the foundation of his own enlightenment. Without saying anything, he visited Du Mansion at night and wanted to steal it. Is this Zhang Guo, one of the Eight Immortals? This is a bandit! In our words, you have gone crazy and still want to become a fairy. Just dream.

I couldn't stand it when I read the second chapter. "The family has only a small amount of property." The result was ten acres of land and several tenants were hired. It made me laugh. It's so cool. One person cultivates one acre of land, right? Author, do you want to check the yield of one acre of land in the Tang Dynasty?

When writing Zhong Sheng, the author should not forget that the protagonist is a time traveler, and his original body is dead. If he can't control even a little residual influence, the character of being a native and a time traveler alternates back and forth. It will be too dramatic. If you want to write, write it well.

Will you die if you don't drink? You have traveled through time, and your dominant thoughts are ringing.

Good guy, luckily you are Zhong Kui's nephew. I thought you were a fool in modern society!

The underworld cultivating immortals insults the meaning of the word immortal in the dictionary. It is the same if you replace the immortal with something else. For example, the purpose is to become a five-spice defense, but it is difficult. During the process, you are intrigued and deceived. In order to become a five-spice defense, you will do anything. The system is one fragrance and two fragrances, and finally you become a five-spice defense that has the same life span as heaven and earth. So is there any difference between doing the defense this way and being an immortal?

It's better to write the male protagonist as an aboriginal, a native who wears time-travel skin.

Are you a time traveler? After being beaten to death at the beginning of the game, the protagonist was able to break into the governor's mansion alone the next day. You got it for your martial arts skills

It feels like it has been digested by the ancients, without any sense of modern people, only memories, purely about the ancient underworld, it is better to directly write about the ancients and not to hang up the skin of time travel.

Interesting science, Zhong Kui is not a real person in history, but a Taoist immortal image created by the possession of a magical weapon called "Zhong Kui". Gu Yanwu conducted textual research on Zhong Kui's history in "Rizhilu". It is said that Zhong Kui's original name is "Zhong Kui", which is the reverse sound of "vertebral". The vertebra is the sacred rod used by the ancients when they held the "nuó" ceremony. Over time, "Zhongkui" has become a symbol of exorcism. Since the Wei and Jin Dynasties, some people have been named Zhong Kui. For example, Yao Xuan's real name in the Northern Wei Dynasty was Zhong Kui, which was written to ward off evil spirits. "Kui" was sometimes written as "Kui". The myth of Zhong Kui catching ghosts began to appear in the Tang Dynasty, and later generations gradually enriched the content.

To be honest, the author, you are not a murderer, you write about killing as if you are playing. It is recommended that the relevant departments check

The more I look at it, the weirder it becomes. I am always open to 55 with everyone, and later on I am also 55 with my children. The protagonist's last name is Zhong Ming55.

At first glance, he looks like a reckless man. There is a huge gap between his character and the character of a cultivator. He doesn't feel like a reborn person. He just feels like a brainless reckless man.

This description of combat power is really strange. When he defeated Maitreya, he said that he could hit the ground ten miles away with one punch. He beat the Xuanjia soldiers from behind until he was half dead from exhaustion. If you have this strength, you can teleport with just a kick of your legs. If you can hug the Taoist priests, why use a sword? If you have this strength, you will die in one hug.

He has no IQ at all, he is simply a brainless, irritable, bad-tempered, brainless person who gets angry every day.

The author never rests for a moment, he is really a model worker

He's just a reckless man with no brains.

The content is actually okay. At the beginning, there was no distinction between the time-travelers and the natives. It looks like it's integrated but I didn't write it down. If you put that aside this book would be fine. It is recommended to change it. I don't dare, it's just a big poisonous point

Irritable, easily irritable, brainless, always killing and killing, just like being mentally retarded without a brain, is this the cultivation and temperament that a cultivator should have?

I want to say that it was quite enjoyable to read. You can be a fool and a dog, and you are full of treacherous tricks. You will be stabbed to death with a sword. This book is positioned as a refreshing article.

Zhongsheng... We are dialect beasts, the same pronunciation as animal 😂😂😂

The author doesn't even read the comments section. Many people are talking about this in the comment section. Chapter 2 says that the protagonist's family has some assets, but the family only has 10 acres of land. In the Tang Dynasty, 10 acres of land could support a family? I'm afraid the author is trying to apply the modern yield per mu to the Tang Dynasty.

Have you written so many books and still write like this?

I just took a look at it and saw that there are too many punctuation marks.

I'm here to criticize again, and I won't spare a single book, right? So many people are criticizing me, and I feel sorry for the author.

Wu Zetian's previous imperial examinations were still a bit poor, and it was basically a game of aristocratic families.

... The uncle's temperament is passed on to his nephew. The emotional uncle and sister-in-law have an affair!

I wrote about going to the court, but it felt boring. It doesn't fit the character of the protagonist you wrote. Moreover, if the article is good, it will continue to be good. If it is not, then don't do it. Otherwise it will be very uncomfortable.

The boss is a very perseverant person

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