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There is a reason for the poor performance of this book. Take the character Tao Banxian as an example. A person who can adopt many children will kill the protagonist just because he accidentally blocked his way of making money? And the protagonist actually gave up on killing the person who almost killed him twice in a row just because the enemy was a man who adopted some children? Haven't you heard of His Heroes and My Enemies? I was so poisoned that I died when I saw this! The author still has some skills in writing, but some plots and characters need to be learned from other popular books!

The first part of this book is okay, but the quality in the later part is not good. For example, he refuses to kneel when receiving an imperial edict and talks back. A small fifth-level Qi practitioner dare not say he is invincible in the mortal world. How can he have such a bad temper? In the past, he stole alchemy books from an official's house, encountered the tenth level of Qi training, and almost died. However, he didn't improve his memory, supported the court, and used rigid logic to force the halo of the protagonist. .

The author himself goes back and reads what he wrote 😁.

After reading novels for so long, I have rarely seen such a disgusting plot. People want to kill you twice, and you let them go. No matter what the reason is, people are already trying to kill you. If you didn't have some strength and luck, you would have died. Can you be more careful? In reality, if someone wants to kill me, it will happen twice. I don't care what the reason is, whether it is the law or the police. I must kill the other person first. If you don't kill the snake, you will suffer the consequences. I believe that a normal person will understand. Only those with abnormal brains will let the other person go. Are there any benefits to doing this? Are you looking like a saint?

I have written 4 books with almost 7 million words, and I know it is still v1. Thanks to Shen Nong in the comment area 😁

The heart is as high as the sky, and the life is as thin as paper. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have been reincarnated long ago.

I didn't understand the ending. . . . . Can anyone explain it?

The killing of bandits has become level 5 in the front, but it has become level 6 inexplicably later, and the reward has become level 5 again. There are many places where the author is inconsistent.

I feel that the plot of this book, Holy Mother, is unreasonable. Generally, in novels, the court does not require practitioners to kneel to receive the imperial edict, but this book requires kneeling. Although the protagonist does not kneel, there is Tao Banxian, and the woman who steals the side is watching. I guess I won't like reading the following chapters.

There are all kinds of poisonous spots. Suppress the bandits. Just follow the army and don't help. If all of them die, go to the **** alone.

Chapter 23: Abandoned, haven't you heard that his heroes are my enemies and bandits? Then what kind of half-immortal wants to kill the protagonist twice just because the protagonist made the money first, but then the protagonist actually lets him go? Do you mean you have a big heart or are you a holy mother?

The ending was too hasty. It was said to be the finale, so couldn't it just be a eunuch?

I didn't want to comment at first, but I just couldn't help it. This book is like a messy house, which is awkward to read.

I suggest that the plot of Tao Banxian be changed. I think most people will not be able to accept this logic. A person who violently kills people just for money also says that he only robs money for the sake of children. It is disgusting to death.

Since he is a person who cultivates immortality, his heart must be clear. How can he let someone named Pang such a threat be easily let go, and how can he not get retribution for his rude words? Buddha nature cultivation is really disgusting!

Tao Banxian killed you twice in the beginning, just because he adopted a child? Then he went to Bian Sijing, who was at the tenth level of Qi training, to steal the elixir book. He almost got killed when he failed to steal, and then, this character disappeared? You won't be looking for a venue after that?

I really enjoyed reading it, but it's a pity that it ended like this. I hope the author will continue to write the ending 😐

I think the author has his own characteristics. Instead of just pretending to be cool and catering to the trend. I really like unique authors.

I have read two books written by him, both of which are preliminary. In the middle and later stages, the old routine from 10 years ago has been appearing. You have to hide your cultivation wherever you go, and then passersby will provoke you when you see the protagonist is so young. In the end, when you face the enemy, the protagonist will forcefully show your cultivation and you will be shocked. I have written this routine no less than a dozen times. The most disgusting thing is that every time someone is offended by a fellow student, such as stealing a mount or maliciously slandering someone, he chooses to forgive as long as the other person apologizes. Can't the author be decisive when writing a book?

People are knocking on your door. Doesn't the protagonist know where Tao Banxian lives? Why not take the initiative?

Chapter 120: Can magic weapons be used directly without any need for sacrifice? Isn't this too childish?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not so good! It's so contradictory, so many contradictions! Can't stand it

Some people have failed in writing, why are they still alive afterward?

It was probably written by a child. It's so uncomfortable to read.

This is fate for the protagonist to live! Ha ha! Just fit to live in today's society! Plain and simple! Human nature was evil in ancient times! Not absolutely but that's how life is

Damn it, this Cultivation to Immortality article is still a broken text. From the first to dozens of chapters, you are looking for trouble, either a slap in the face or a female cultivator biography, a typical villain, fuck, author, did you grow up doing nothing? If you want to cultivate immortality, just cultivate immortality. Don't do mundane things all the time. Take a look at "Cultivation of Immortality: Start with the Medicine Boy" and look at you. I'm convinced. Can you follow the times? Don't always be so dark. Reality is not about cool writing, but about human nature. Only by being low-key can you live a long time. Don't just write scolding articles when people are unhappy. Strength is everything. It's not easy to get into trouble by cultivating immortality.

The plot is extremely poisonous. A bunch of immortal cultivators came to help him. They can obviously be crushed together, but they have to become 1v3.

I really think that the protagonist of this book has a problem with his life. People can't be too bad and they can't be needlessly kind. Why repay kindness by repaying evil directly?