The Fairyland of Dou Mi

A brief discussion of the hasty ending of the book and various digging holes The main body of the book implements the principle of "one drink, one peck, cause and effect cycle". All the props and magic weapons of the protagonist are originally dug by the boss. But the biggest pitfall, Mi Dou didn't mention a word. The copies of Master Chicken and Miao Jiang are gone The four pure backgrounds of the Heavenly Court, that is, the fighting department is a little more What happened in the Heavenly Court when the Queen descended to earth to choose the emperor on behalf of Heaven? The copy of Dragon Girl will be cut directly The old guy who takes Pure Yang Pill every day has no explanation Please add other things

The author's writing in the early and middle stages is really good. The writing is vivid and the picture is very strong. It depicts a strange and bizarre world that can be savored carefully. Unfortunately, it started to fall apart in the later stages, and the holes dug in the past were not filled. I was confused when the clone of the famous master died, I was confused when the apprentice betrayed the master, I was confused when Danrong Yuantong received the lunch box, Master Chicken became invisible in the later stage, and the protagonist seemed to be very powerful, but he was suppressed and beaten all the time. The finale was like a firecracker thrown from a sewage pipe, which made me confused. To be honest, it's a pity. If this novel sticks to the early quality, although it won't be a god, it will definitely be a platinum masterpiece. Alas (╥ω╥`) It's a pity.

How can I put it, one or two hundred chapters is quite good, and it can be ranked among the immortal cultivation novels, but then it becomes exaggerated, and it feels like a different person. It is too stiff, the content is incomplete, and the routine is too old. It feels like writing a serious immortal cultivation novel, but it is written as a pleasant article, although it is not very satisfying. It seems like it is consuming readers, and it seems like it is resting on its laurels. If the original author

This poem aroused my desire to read books

I saved the girl, I didn't want to save it, but I saved it, there's nothing wrong with it. Later, the girl asked for high-end cosmetics and toiletries, and the key protagonist found them for her. The key hero didn't like her, and he didn't want to care about it. How many people had to be persuaded in this paragraph, I didn't even have the desire to continue reading.

In order to advance the plot, the protagonist lost his mind. Do you think this has any other effect besides increasing the number of words?

Some plot transitions are a bit abrupt but still good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ There are also a lot of foreshadowings, the chicken, the statue in the temple, the two people who came to buy the rooster at the beginning, the tiger demon lady, the stone monk, and the Qianqiu Society, there are a lot of them!

Fortunately, there is nothing to complain about. After reading it, except for some typos, it is harmless. Some people say that the field mouse landlord's family is trying to persuade them to quit. It depends on how you interpret it. The overall writing and plot are good, but there are many small flaws. You may complain, but I still read it patiently. There are not many poisonous points overall.

Hong Luan has been a prostitute for so long, but her family has never found her. The protagonist just knocked down the county magistrate, and her family came to find her? If the Hongluan family are just ordinary people, then although it is a bit deliberate, it is not unacceptable. However, in the author's writing, the Hongluan family's magic power is unpredictable, and the protagonist is even worse than an ant in the eyes of others. So the question is, is it so difficult for such an awesome character to find a blood relative? Even the protagonist has a way of attracting incense to find people, but there are no higher-level members of the Taoist family? He also wrote that the Taoist sect was inferior to the nouveau riche, and could not even learn basic ways to behave in the world. How did that sect be passed down? Just forcefully create a conflict 😅

Goodbye for discord of ideas

Let's not talk about the chicken who suddenly became a big boss. You have to make the common people so miserable. You spend so much money to show off your house, but they end up having two meals a day? Are you the only one who can afford white rice? It made me laugh so hard

The protagonist is simply schizophrenic. Sometimes he can save people by helping but watch them die. Sometimes he risks his life to fight against the evil forces that have no impact on him at all. The key is that there is no benefit. Sometimes he uses a bead that he knows is extremely dangerous and can kill people if he is not careful. He just accepts the protection fee paid by the businessman when he begs not to hurt him. Aren't you a moral model? Aren't you sworn in with the evil forces? Aren't you the Holy Mother?

He left, was poisoned, and a young general wanted to kill him. The key is to think about it? But after doing this, you let them go. The key is to kill everyone present and then let them go? How about playing? What's going on? Let's talk about chickens. Can this awesome chicken be beaten to death by ordinary chickens? Can it be caught by mortals? How about playing? What's going on? The poison is gone

Author, it's interesting to write this kind of plot with no IQ. It's really disgusting. You know you are in trouble and you can ignore it. But I feel sorry for getting into trouble,

After reading more than a chapter, the protagonist was invited to compete in martial arts. I was so speechless. I knew the author wanted to highlight the final appearance of the protagonist. But can the plot not be so blunt? The protagonist has killed so many first-class warlocks before, and his reputation has spread. In such a plot, various characters directly subdue their wits. They all pretended not to know or heard of it, ignoring and ridiculing the protagonist. Forcing the protagonist to show off. Really speechless! I remember Squid said that various characters take part in the story, and after writing to a certain extent, their actions will no longer be dominated by the author. Instead, it is performed based on the character settings. Author, you can write better, why not? The character settings are always vague, especially the protagonist, whose personality traits are simply more changeable than a woman's. Sometimes she is stupid and wise, sometimes she is stupid and cute, and sometimes she is reckless. For a while, the clouds of chivalrous and courageous spirit filled the air. There is simply no certainty, and the various plot twists are extremely blunt.

I can't stand it anymore. It costs 30,000 renminbi to break a hole in a wall. A pound of polished rice costs 10 renminbi, which is equivalent to 3,000 jins of polished rice to repair a wall. The author still refuses to repent and says it's very reasonable...

If you worship Buddhism and suppress Taoism, just worship Buddhism and suppress Taoism. The writing can't tell the difference between Taoism and Taoism. The Taoist method is used and the Taoist name is derogated. And famous scholars are one of the hundred schools of thought and are equal to Confucianism. Well, Confucianism is based on family. The author's writing is good, but there are too many private items mixed in and it is too conspicuous. If anyone doesn't like it, I hope you will consider it.

Regarding the plot controversy before it was released, I read it and found that there were indeed some mistakes. I humbly accepted it and corrected it. Also, all book friends, please feel free to give us your opinions!

I feel like the book looks very embarrassing after saving a girl.

The more you write, the more you write. A bunch of evil monks want to steal your things, but you still file a lawsuit. It's ridiculous. You can slap me to death, but you can still get a few pictures.

First of all, you need to understand these three points First, adultery is soaked in pig cages. If you think this is a bad habit, I suggest you read the news about adultery killing the husband or wife in modern society. If he had the guts to commit adultery, he would have the guts to kill. I don't think this is a bad habit. On the contrary, I think this will make the cost of crime greater and can effectively prevent many people from taking risks. Second, letting go of old age, in modern society, a man committed suicide because of the treatment fee of more than 100,000 yuan? What's more, in ancient times, when life was difficult to survive, if you gave gold and silver to one person, but if you didn't give it to the other person, you would let him die of sores. What does this mean? This shows that you are biased. Isn't this a double standard for Chinese and foreign famous people? Third, what you said about infanticide, I do think is cruel. But you know what? In ancient times, if you had no sons, you would be devoured while you were alive. Others will treat you as dead. Come and choose whether to raise a daughter well, be eaten out and have a son. If you can't solve this problem, then why do you think it's a bad habit? Everything depends on the background of the times. I hope the author can be more rigorous.

The second half is so shabby that after reading it on the website, I couldn't help but come to Qidian to scold him.

The idea at the beginning is good, but later it seems like the author has changed. What the hell is it? If you like to watch but don't scroll, please scroll first to respect!

To be honest, the writing is okay, but there are many poisonous points; first of all, there is the issue of the golden rooster. If the golden rooster was really that powerful, he would not have been almost eaten; then the male protagonist knelt down to the golden rooster because of the golden rooster pile skill he obtained with his golden finger. I was really a bit dumbfounded to see this 😥; and then for the officials of the imperial court, at the beginning because of his lack of strength, he had to bow to the general The tolerance was acceptable, but later on when he became stronger and could live a more comfortable life with more than enough self-preservation, he still tolerated the shameless behavior of the county magistrate and did not even resist. This was completely inconsistent with the decisive killing that followed. Later, he reluctantly saved an oiran, but still had to spend more than 2,000 taels to buy her rouge and the like. It was simply outrageous 😒

I really don't have any books to read. It's been a long time since I read them. You can put your mind down and just read the spell part. Don't delve into the rest. I saw 25. After thinking about it for a while, I have a few questions: 1. These cults want to risk catching children. As a result, I have seen some arrested and some wanted. Since you want to catch children to sell for money and then buy resources, why don't you go to the refugee camp to look for them? Don't say no, there are a lot of refugees in today's society, let alone in ancient times. If it is a city with a population of one million, there will be at least 100,000 refugees outside. It is easy to abduct refugees. All you have to do is help me dig some mines for food and housing (or just deceive the refugees and sell them to the mine owners). Isn't this safer than taking the risk of catching a child? 2. There are also those officers and soldiers who want to kill good people and take credit. If he is so brave, why don't he go to the refugee camp to arrest a few people every time he arrests a prisoner, and he has to kill the protagonist who can kill the prisoner? Isn't killing refugees better than killing people with unknown power?

Writing classical fairy tales, not to mention reading a few Taoist books, at least has an understanding of ancient society. I beg the author not to write such novels in the future.

I just don't fill in all the pitfalls, and the logic behind it doesn't make sense.

The protagonist's character is out of tune from the beginning to the end, polluted by modern culture. He has no subjectivity and is completely a puppet used by the author to promote the plot. There is no way forward.,,

It makes me so uncomfortable to watch, being involved in so many bad things, and getting jumped every time like rotten sauerkraut.

The first part was okay, but the second part felt like I couldn't write anymore and I didn't know what to write, so I started to mess around and didn't understand what I was doing.