Immortal Persona

In fact, the writing is okay, why is there no one? Although it has the feel of a routine from ancient immortality novels, the handling is okay and not disgusting, and the writing is okay but there are only eight posts. It is really too miserable.

Author: This is not enough. I will give you the votes. Give me some strength. Oli will give you 🤓

The old routine, being soft to the enemy and taking advantage of the eunuch, the trash book will not become popular.

Come on, it's better than what many great writers have written.

For character design, you just add a background character to the protagonist. The first one is the background, and the second one is the background. The illegitimate child has come out. Can your character design be more comprehensive? Behavior, conversation, and personality are also part of the character design. If you just create a background, you can find a father for the protagonist. To be honest, it is better to generate a copy based on certain things for the protagonist to challenge. It is obviously a reward for defeating the opponent in the challenge, and the character design is just one side of the background.

To be honest, the protagonist is a love interest, or someone who traveled through time. It's not just his wife that's everything in the world, but he hasn't even had a relationship yet. The protagonist also has a mentor, friends, and other confidants. Since the protagonist can't get married for a while, that earthly spirit vein , can't you secretly give it to your own disciple? After all, when the protagonist's cultivation level is high, the spiritual pulse will not be of much use. Also, the protagonist's sister or partner suddenly has some great adventure, and then the protagonist chases it. It's too old routine, right?

To be honest, it's okay to write. I was planning to raise more than a dozen, but I didn't expect it to end suddenly 😅

I still miss Tiandao Scanner, why don't I open the second book and continue writing about Qi Ye! ! ! !

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The first monthly pass belongs to me, DIO.

So far, the writing is better than that written by many great masters such as Platinum.

Brother, please be careful. If you don't have a system, you will die for a long time. You only live once, no saving

Now two in one? I said why are there so many words? Come on.

Sure enough, no matter what others do to you, they won't kill anyone unless they can't bear it any longer.

Is there too few chapters on the shelf?😅

Yu-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply